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Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2006 - 06:57 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

And good riddance to Mr. Grabby hands!!! Now, how are these two crazy kids going to get together? Will he call her one night and they have a true heart-to-heart? Looking forward to maybe some naughty phone sex between our two heros still hung up on each other, complete with some great admission of feelings during, with a fabulous open, honest communication. Please? Soon? It's great that you got rid of Riley, but now we need to get rid of Harmony!

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2006 - 06:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

Good! Riley sucks anyway!

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2006 - 03:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

very happy to see riley departing from the seen....now waht can we do about getting spikey back...? :)

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2006 - 03:11 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

Glad he's gone. Now when is Spike coming back?
Great chapter! Update soon please!

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2006 - 02:11 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

Yay! Something we can all get behind: Riley=turkey.

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2006 - 01:29 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

very happy to see riley departing from the seen....now waht can we do about getting spikey back...? :)

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2006 - 01:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

Wow I am so glad she told riley off.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2006 - 01:20 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

*hugs* I hope you'll feel better soon!
And thanks for Riley not sticking for long (even if I don't now what will happen now). Buffy is on the hunt again. I pity Buffy because she let herself down when trying to be a girlfriend for Riley (being submissive). Yet I fear this is her self-confidence or better her lack of. Oh I wish the story was already better (the ../others gone). But see, I'm still reading even it is hard for me.

Reviewer: Meagan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2006 - 12:58 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

I can sympathize with Buffy's low self esteem from past experiances with men (Angel) and her current job, but she's living in a deluded part of her brain where she forces away a guy who loved her, and tries to make it work with a guy who bores her to tears.

I'm at a point with Buffy where if she wants to be a whore, be a frickken whore already and stop with this whole mis understood crap persona, cause thats what I'm getting from her.

I hope your feeling better soon and can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2006 - 12:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

Great wake-up call for her, she kinda needed that and what Faith said as well. It's frustrating she doesn't wake-up a little more, maybe she needs to bump into Spike??? God I hope he get's rid of Harmony soon. Great job, more please?

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2006 - 12:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Nine

Enjoyed the update.

Sorry you are not feeling well.

Reviewer: nikki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2006 - 08:20 am Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

Another brilliant chapter! I trust that everything will be ok again. i know it will! I have faith in you.

keep up teh good writing hun, and feel better soon.

Nikki xx

Reviewer: nikki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2006 - 08:11 am Title: Chapter 27

Bloody brilliant!!!!

Honey the whole story is amazing so far, i can't wait to read more!!! Your writing skills are just getting better and better every day!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2006 - 02:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

great chapter

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2006 - 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 27

Great chapter.
Oh, a question. When Cordy and Harmony come into the shop Anya calls for 'William'. When Cordy mentiones his name she says 'Spike'. I didn't notice anything that would indicate her knowing him, since nothing is said about his other name meaning she *has* to know him in order to know the name Spike. But then Spike asks for *her* name, meaning she's a stranger... I'm guessing that is either a loop-hole or a typo. Just thought I'd let you know :)

Reviewer: Edgehead Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 12:00 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

So i read now the last three chapters and i´m really interested in the next ones.
Spike is sooooo sad...i hope he will find his love :)
Amazing...like always.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

Great chapter but really disappointed with Spike!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 12:11 am Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

Maybe Spike was on to something when he brought up going into theraphy. Personally I think he could benefit from it, cause using someone is just plain wrong. I look forward to finding out where you take the plot from here.

Reviewer: vs in nj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2006 - 10:04 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

Good chapter. I hope you get them together soon.

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2006 - 09:39 pm Title: Prologue and Chapter One

Harmony and Riley *shudder*

I'm liking this story so far, and I really can't wait to see where you develop. You have so much room and you've laid down a lot of interesting possible plot points. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2006 - 09:17 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

Harmony and Riley - good thing you hate them too, cause now I know they will be disposed of as soon as possible for the storyline. They'd make a lovely couple together. Still love the tale and hope Buffy comes to her senses soon and seeks out Spike. More please. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2006 - 08:17 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

still loving the story and will definately be waiting for more...but why harmony? thats not really a question just me complaining cuz i hate her soo much...i can understand riley cuz he's riley...but her...ack! but anyway love the story still keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Mary Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2006 - 07:57 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

Still loving the story even with Harmony and Riley...just means when thing get back to Spuffy all the better!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2006 - 07:06 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

errrr i hate harmony and riley. i acnt believe that spike is seeing her and is having sex with her, ewwww. i feel kinda bad for her, she says she loves him but he loves buffy and is only with her becuz she looks kinda like buffy, it cant end well. i love this story and am happy u updated. i really hope that the riley and hamrony thing doesnt last long and buffy and spike find their way back to each other. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to find out more. thanx

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2006 - 05:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Eight

Great chapter! Update soon please!

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