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Reviewer: Jackofspikes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2006 - 03:44 am Title: Chapter 2

I know I know I know....I know who's on the phone! heehee...lovin' it :)

Reviewer: Jackofspikes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2006 - 03:29 am Title: Chapter 1

yes yes yes...more more more...Loving this MP

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 10:19 am Title: Chapter 5

great chapter

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2006 - 05:13 am Title: Chapter 5

Angel can be glad that at last Xander spoke with him ;-) Seems to me he is unimpressed though. Doesn't he now what he did to Buffy and Spike with that spell that he and Giles did? Awe and Buffy reclaimed Spike :) And Willow *sigh* Going to the wrong side again. Black eye Willow muttering 'showing them' is never good. Hehe.. Born shoppers / emergency money? Loved it. And Willow's spell goes wrong again. I wonder how the forgetting spell will be influenced by the claim.

Author's Response: I friended you. My LJ name is maryperk73703

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 10:58 am Title: Chapter 5

willow and her misuse of magics...... love the update!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2006 - 12:47 am Title: Chapter 5

good update

Reviewer: Firebird234 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh let me guess little Willow loses her memory , haha that's what she gets for messing with people's minds.

Reviewer: Gina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 5

Evil willow...cool!

Reviewer: Gina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love this story so much I am reading it a second time! Please continue to post more.

Reviewer: Lu82 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 5

I really like Xander in ths fic! ;)

And I just loved this line from buffy, lol: "Is that a railroad spike in your pocket, or are you just happy to see me?"

great job!! ;)

Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 5

nice update mary. i like how you are writing evil willow

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 5

DIE WILLOW DIE *giggles*

Reviewer: kimbclar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 11:23 am Title: Chapter 5

Yeah! I loved the new chapter. Can't wait to see what the effect of Willow's spell is.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 10:32 am Title: Chapter 5

I'm so sorry I missed reviewing the past three chapters, I just caught up with the story again and i'm really enjoying it!

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2006 - 10:24 am Title: Chapter 5

she's being such an immature brat. i'm really hating willow in this, then again i never liked her much in the 6th season. what the hell is doing that spell supposed to prove? it's going to make her just as bad as giles, so i don't see the point. she'll just end up losing all of her so-called friends. hopefully the idiot will regret it.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2006 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter 4

great chapter

Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2006 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 4

lol ...love the ending "hello deadboy"

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2006 - 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 4

Oh my.. when I think again how much they took from them. Not only Buffy and Spike but most of them. From the other like Xander too. All because of this hate spell. Love the thought of Buffy meeting Will and Edith in Limbo. Loved it. So the other engagement is no secret any longer. I wonder how they'll be able to help Cordelia.. and looking forward to find out what Xander says to Angel :)

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2006 - 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 4

totally love the update!!! waiting for more!

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2006 - 05:55 am Title: Chapter 4

Ewwww nice xander.... it's disturbing....

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2006 - 12:59 am Title: Chapter 4

good update

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2006 - 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wow....this is different, but a really GOOD different! I LOVE what you have so far! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY and I can't wait to read more!!!!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2006 - 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 4

This is fun.

Reviewer: Gina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2006 - 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wow, a great story! Very unique plot. Keep writing please, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2006 - 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 4

Not only did Angel tell her to get a boyfriend when he knew about the spell he slept with her too. I think he and Giles are in for a world of trouble once they come face to face with the people whose lives they messed with.

Great chapter

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