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Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 06:59 am Title: Chapter 1

Great update. I'm glad Giles had the sense to contain Willows magic. At least he's learnt something from this whole episode. Neither Willow or Angel seem to have. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2006 - 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 7

good update

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2006 - 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 7

I hope Willow is punished for her crimes and arrogance! I'm glad things are slowly getting better for everyone else! Update soon!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2006 - 06:30 am Title: Chapter 7

Oh, the story is going to end soon? Only the epilogue... *sigh* Well all good things must come to an end... ~ Giles knows he has made an error... Willow doesn't see it this way (what she has done). Too bad.. Giles is better than Willow. ~ Loved Hassib's speech to everyone. Then only the last part now...

Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2006 - 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 7

Good update Mary. I like how the story is progressing!

Reviewer: kimbclar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2006 - 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 7

Fab as always!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2006 - 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 7

Interesting ceremony. Cordy and Wes have a lot of work ahead of them with Angel. Willow reached her full bratty potential. And poor Giles would have had kids, if not for thinking he knew better than everybody.

Only one more chapter, huh? Bummer.

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2006 - 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 7

Xander has to kiss a pylean...

LMAO! *whistles and walks off*

Reviewer: fCrystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2006 - 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 6

Like is so far - looks like willow's in trouble (again). Love how you've added some LA folks to the memory loss mixl More please.

Reviewer: KC Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2006 - 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 6

I still love this story. But then I love all your stories. Loved Angel, the great git! I see some of Liam was shining through.

Reviewer: Lu82 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2006 - 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 6

I just loved this chapter, more and soon ;)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2006 - 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 6

"Spike, baby? Stake Dru for me." "Sure thing, luv." Angel didn't expect this; neither that the Scoobies knew about the lawyer incident. And then the spell began.. :) Good thing that they can talk (in mind). Oh yeah, loved it. Angel was fun :) And Willow got caught.

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2006 - 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 6

Angel is just too funny in this chapter.

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2006 - 08:54 am Title: Chapter 1

Ooh, I think I read this before but didn't know there was more. Great concept, Mary. I'm off to read another chapter or two before I'm off to bed.

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2006 - 02:29 am Title: Chapter 6

I can't wait to read more of your story! please, update soon? i am dying to know the reaction of willow casting yet another 'harmless' spell!! please?

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2006 - 01:57 am Title: Chapter 6

loved it

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2006 - 12:54 am Title: Chapter 6

I think that I have at least started reading this story before. The first couple of chapters seemed familiar. I'm glad that I found it again. It is an excellent story. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: dragontiff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2006 - 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 6

love your story. cant wait for more updates

Reviewer: LETITIA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2006 - 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 6

will Willow never learn. I just hope they can finally get it through to her about spells. Great chapter update.

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2006 - 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 6

what's with willow!! too much magic again!! someone juz strip her from her magic spree.... love the update!!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2006 - 11:23 am Title: Chapter 6

Oh, wow...good call turning Angel back into Liam's behavior. That was too funny.

Oooooo, Willow's in trouble....I hope someone helps her before she tries to end the world this time.

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2006 - 10:24 am Title: Chapter 6

She doesn't even have the good grace to look guilty? Can we kill her Xander and Angel?? *nods*

Author's Response: Why kill Xander? He's being friends with Spike. The bad guys are Angel, Giles and now Willow.

Reviewer: Jackofspikes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2006 - 04:10 am Title: Chapter 5

Willow is sooo damaged! More please, I NEED to know what comes next! :)

Reviewer: Jackofspikes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2006 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter 4

*an acid spitting snot demon of unknown origins* ROFL...I love this line! Love the whole story! :)

Reviewer: Jackofspikes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2006 - 03:51 am Title: Chapter 3

God, this just gets better and better...thanks for giving me such a fun time! :)

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