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Reviewer: Caro Mio Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

Good chapter for content, but you might want to have a beta go over it first. You have a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes.

Author's Response: I've found a Beta, and I'm working on it right now!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

Loved it! Looking forward for more!

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Date: 01/12/2006 - 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

Looking forward to more soon!

Reviewer: Thianna Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2006 - 06:57 am Title: Chapter 4 - Shocking revelations

I like where this is going. I'm really interested to see what happens next.

Reviewer: bloodshedbaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 2 – What changed?

I can just see Spike and Buffy sitting at the Bronze! Good job.

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Date: 01/03/2006 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 1 – A wise Christmas wish

I just found this fic and I am really intrigued by the first chapter. Can't wait to read what you have posted!

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Shocking revelations

if spike had a beatin heart guess he would have a heart attack......... love it and waiting for more!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2006 - 04:43 am Title: Chapter 4 - Shocking revelations

great chapter :D

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Shocking revelations

i am loving your story and i can't wait to read more of it!! please update soon?? i am dying to read what happens next and buffy's reaction to finding out who is the father of her child is!!! that will be quality entertainment!!!!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Shocking revelations

wow. this is going to be interesting. hope buffy takes it as well as spike did. i really hope she's not going to get all denial girl and avoidy. that would just suck but then again, she wouldn't be buffy if she didn't get that way. lol. loved it. great job. post soon.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Shocking revelations

Great chapter! Can't wait for more! Love it!

Reviewer: letitia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Shocking revelations

more more more. how in the world do they end up together??

Reviewer: Smitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Shocking revelations

Awww hehe thats sweeet i love this story

Reviewer: Michele Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Shocking revelations

Ooohhh -- Loved this! I really liked how long it took him to figure it out. Too cute.

I look forward to more!

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Shocking revelations

Good udpate. Look forward to more.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Shocking revelations

great update

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 - 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Shocking revelations

i realli love this story please please update soon!! it's amazing =D

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2005 - 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Strange meetings

Great chapter

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2005 - 06:09 am Title: Chapter 3 - Strange meetings

so she finally showed up... waiitng for more!!!!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2005 - 01:51 am Title: Chapter 3 - Strange meetings

good update

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2005 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter 3 - Strange meetings

i can't wait to read buffy and spike's reaction when they find out she's their daughter. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE AND PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON?
I AM DYING TO READ MORE.

Reviewer: Smitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2005 - 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Strange meetings

I'm really liking how this is going I hope theres more soon!

Reviewer: RandiGiles Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2005 - 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Strange meetings

Please Sir, can i have some more....

Reviewer: akarinacj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2005 - 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Strange meetings

What can I say other... than MORE PLEASE!!!! Love the story so far...:-)))

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2005 - 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 2 – What changed?

great chapter

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