You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2005 - 07:57 pm Title: Undead Man’s Hand

Very fun. Look forward to what comes next.

Poor kittens....

Author's Response: Kitten poker is such an amusing concept, as long as you don't dwell on what happens to the kittens afterwards! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Dia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2005 - 07:42 pm Title: Undead Man’s Hand

Great start! Loved the scene with drunk!Spike singing in the graveyard. Hilarious.

You did really good with describing the different scenes. Just the right amount of details to make them feel real without it getting longwinded. Very promising, can't wait to see more of this.

Author's Response: I have to admit that I was (am?)worried about my writing style. I've never done any creative writing, only scientific stuff which has a well-earned reputation for being dry and boring. Thanks for the encouragement!

Reviewer: Schehrezade Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2005 - 05:34 pm Title: Undead Man’s Hand

An excellent start! I do hope you continue with this as it is well written nicely paced and intriguing! I am trying to work out the Anne MacCaffery link *g* hoping for more to read soon. Keep up the good start


Author's Response: Thanks! I think I'm going to be perverse and withhold any clues about why I felt like I needed to acknowledge McCaffrey. Hopefully everyone will have it figured out after the next chapter or two.

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2005 - 04:00 pm Title: Undead Man’s Hand

I just loved your Spike characterization and the imagery it's awesome, I was seeing it all happening in my mind as I read. Can't wait to find out what is hiding behind his dresser and what else you have in store for us. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback. I'll try to not disappoint!

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2005 - 03:43 pm Title: Undead Man’s Hand

LoL... I love drunken Spike *huggles him*

Author's Response: I do too! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: maryperk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2005 - 03:26 pm Title: Undead Man’s Hand

I think it's an interesting start. Can't wait to see how you go with this. I am going to add it to my favorites as soon as I log in.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: In League With Serpents Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2005 - 02:41 pm Title: Undead Man’s Hand

Ooooh, I'm liking this! Please write more of it!

Dark Eyed Seer

Author's Response: I already have. :-) Now I just have to keep up the courage to continue posting it. Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2005 - 02:39 pm Title: Undead Man’s Hand

Anne McCaffrey? Then I have to read it! Good start indeed. I'll stay tuned for more. Red eyes, huh? I wonder why stomach stayed empty (felt empty) after he had eaten. Definitely - write on! I love it so far.

Author's Response: Another McCaffrey fan! I'm going to be coy with my references at least until chapter 3. I want to see if you guys can guess the connection. Thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2005 - 02:16 pm Title: Undead Man’s Hand

First effort? Damn. You're doing well. I've read McCaffrey, so I'm interested in seeing what you do with her influence. This is an interesting start and I'm anticipating the continuance of this.

Author's Response: Yup, this is my first effort at any kind of creative writing. It took my beta about a month to convince me to post at all. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2005 - 02:00 pm Title: Undead Man’s Hand

Wow this is really very interesting. Nice long chapter as well liked that. I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks!

You must login (register) to review.