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Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 - 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 16

I like this chapter. Had a feeling Spike was gonna have to punch some butthead over the rumor Harmony spread. I liked this chapter. Love protective Spike.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 - 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 16

great update and i just want you to know that i have nothing against the last chapter when i left you those comments about the love scene ...... you did a great job

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 - 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 16

Don't forget - your fic - you write. If people don't like it they can stop reading! I looking forward to read on - good to hear you don't quit :)

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 - 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 16

Not at all - this chappie was just great. Actually I've got an idea...how about Harmony use her super-bitching powers for good instead of evil and, with her newfound desire to try and be a better sister, help Buffy and Spike get things sorted with the nasty Mike and anyone else who tries to besmirch Buffy's reputation. It could seem a little hypocritical what with Harmony having been the initial instigator but hey, it reflects the 'redemption' theme from BtVS in the same way as vampires having souls and staking other vampires did! Just a thought anyway and oh...could the Spuffy get any cuter? I think not. LOL More soon please!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 - 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 16

I like that Harmony had a change of heart! People are not two dimensional, especially siblings and by making her nicer you've made her much more real. Sister relationships are not black and white at all! Can't wait to see what you do with the story!

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 - 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 16

I liked it. I am still interested in reading. It is a cute story.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 - 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 16

It's your story and your vision and you should do what you want with it...don't worry about what we think; you do what you feel is right for it. You're the author after all! Please don't pander to the ones who complain about every little thing -- if they want to make it their story, then they can write one themselves. What you've done is great and as long as you feel good about it, that's all that matters. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I always love all of your reviews. Just like I love all of your stories. I will continue to do what I want, until I have nothing else to write. I'm glad you like it because you know I'm such a huge fan of yours, so I really appreciate it=)

Reviewer: Mali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 - 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 16

Don't worry sweetie, you did a great job on this chapter. The fact that Spike was worried if Buffy would be mad at him after what he did to Mike was a good idea, I've read plenty of fics where he didn't understand why his violent actions scared her, not that he's violent here, though. And Mike deserved it. And the Spike giving Buffy that jacket, and not telling her that he bought it just for her? Sounds so like Spike, and so cute. Please update soon, I love this fic.

Author's Response: Thank you, I do what I can. It will be revealed in the next chapter why she was scared. She won't be too mad at him. Spike is more of a lover than a fighter in this story, he was just pissed that someone insulted her. I added that part with the jacket because I remember someone asking earlier if he did buy it for her, so I decided to put that in there. I'm glad you like it=)

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 - 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 16

Hmm there needs to be some sort of conflict, since you decided to remove Harmony (in the long run I think it's good) you need to add something else. Don't have a clue as to what but something that tests their relationship but in the end brings them together stronger.

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm working on that. Even though this fiction wasn't supposed to be filled with angst, I do agree that it needs some conflict. Nothing too bad, of course. I just haven't been able to think of anything yet, but I'm sure something will come to me. Thanks for reading=)

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 - 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 16

Go with what YOU want......can have Harm bitchy and yet Spuffy......even in ways it spices it up a bit.....go where your muse takes you.......but now you can concentrate on the spuffy getting to know each other, like here......he has rather a bad temper when it comes to protecting his girl.....

Author's Response: My muse is being a bitch right now...lol! I think she took a vacation or something. Thanks, glad you like it=)

Reviewer: Rikka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 - 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 16

Aww how sweet. Spike stood up for her. I'm hoping she's not too mad at him for what he did. Great chapter, I'm loving the story.

Reviewer: mjspuff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 - 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 16

yay. spikes ass kickage of the punk was enjoyed.lol.

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 - 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 16

I'm very interested in this story. And no, last chapter wasn't bad at all. I felt it was a nice twist that Harmony could actually change her ways and try to be a better sister for Buffy and Dawn. I loved this chapter, too, especially how protective Spike was of Buffy. I just hope she isn't scared of him now. More, please?

Reviewer: Tuesday Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 - 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 16

The story is still fabulous! I love the Spuffy moments and the punch in the nose that Mike got!

Reviewer: spikesbabi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 - 10:08 am Title: Chapter 14

wow.....im pleasantly surprised...

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 - 12:31 am Title: Chapter 15

well this was a good chapter but i thought that you rushed the love scene too fast and it wasnt very descriptive and long like i like them to be

Author's Response: Well, I can't please everyone. I know it was rushed and it probably really sucked, but I'm just bad at love scenes. I've been told that I can do NC-17 ones pretty well, but since this isn't, I guess I couldn't make it that good. I was trying to keep it clean and simple. And I figured people would get annoyed if I took too much longer for it. I know how you guys are for your Spuffy. I tried anyway and that's all anyone can do. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2005 - 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 15

All the build up, only to have possibly the lamest love scene ever!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Gee, thanks, really appreciate that. You should read an NC-17 fiction if you want something better. That was the best I could give. Sorry to disappoint, but I'm happy with it and that's all that matters. Thanks for reading anyway.

Reviewer: Brat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2005 - 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 15

Things are definitely getting better in the Summers household! :) And awww. Spuffy first time :) Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, at least someone likes it=)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2005 - 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 15

Awe - loved the chapter. Even Joyce was nice and understanding now :)

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2005 - 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 15

i really love this story, great chapter!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2005 - 11:57 am Title: Chapter 15

Ahhh that was sweet that Joyce didn't scream.....now she needs to take her daughter for the pill or the shot........LOL......now it's official, Spuffy......

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2005 - 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 14

Loved the chapter! Please update soon!

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2005 - 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 14

love where you're going with this, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: MarstersGirl13 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2005 - 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 14

good job. update soon!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2005 - 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 14

glad everything worked out between them keep up the good work

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