[Report This]Date: 11/25/2005 - 12:32 am Title: Losing It
YEA!!!! Awwwww. Bad Xander. But, hey, happy chappie ending!!! Keep 'em coming!
[Report This]Date: 11/24/2005 - 11:53 pm Title: Losing It
I was actually yelling "Dawn come home!" at my monitor. What a bullying rat bastard Xander was! At least Buffy was able to see the real him I hope that one day Anya doesn't let him shame her anymore too. Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 11/24/2005 - 11:24 pm Title: Losing It
Despite Xander's asshole-ish-ness, that was so very beautiful. I'm in tears. I hope Buffy or Dawn kick Xander's butt. What a way to perk up my terrible day. Looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 11/24/2005 - 06:43 pm Title: Losing It
I love it, that's all I can say.
[Report This]Date: 11/24/2005 - 02:38 am Title: Conversations
Oh dear... I'm really, really not liking where I think this is going. I feel like this is about to veer away from what I call 'light' angst into something much more dark and cruel, a place I don't like going to very often and somewhere I try to avoid.
I think you did such a great job in early chapters helping the reader to visualise the horrors inflicted upon Spike, it's almost too scary to feel that you're about to take us back there through the actions of a Scoobie. I'm torn... should I read the next chapter(s) or should I skip a few? I might wait and see what the next chapter reviewers are saying... scardy cat that I am.
Great writing... got me spooked *shivvers*
Author's Response: don't worry...its bad but not as bad as you're thinking really...and this next chapter is actually quite important...you might not want to actually skip :)
[Report This]Date: 11/23/2005 - 07:39 pm Title: Conversations
That bastard. Xander Harris is ugly inside.
[Report This]Date: 11/22/2005 - 09:03 pm Title: The Power of Choice
Nicely done.
[Report This]Date: 11/22/2005 - 03:06 pm Title: Retribution
I love this story,especially traumatized Spike.Is Buffy going to find out what happened to him?Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 11/21/2005 - 06:59 pm Title: Retribution
I hope she wishes for Spikes chip to be put in Warrens head!
[Report This]Date: 11/21/2005 - 06:21 pm Title: Retribution
Great update. Will Spike ever get back to his own self?
Author's Response: We'll see as the story progresses... remember that although it's taken like 6 chapters, it's only like the day after he got out....
[Report This]Date: 11/21/2005 - 05:59 pm Title: Retribution
LOVE THE VENGEANCE! CAN I HELP? CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT DAWN HAS IN MIND
[Report This]Date: 11/21/2005 - 05:47 pm Title: Retribution
I knew it! Dawn's a very determined and passionte ex-key, isn't she? Poor, poor Spike. So broken, so ashamed of himself, so doesn't need the burden of a vengeance wish... whether wished by him or Dawn... I see only bad things ahead.
Feeling sad but loving this update. Thank you again, pet.
[Report This]Date: 11/20/2005 - 11:13 pm Title: Opportunity
I started reading this story last night and was pleasantly surprised to find another chapter today. It did not disappoint! I will anxiously await the next installment - can't wait to find out where you go next! Keep up the great work!
[Report This]Date: 11/20/2005 - 04:05 pm Title: Opportunity
Oh my gosh... right up until the end I thought it was going to be Dawn! It never entered my head that Spike would have, even subconsiously, yearn for vengeance...
The way you write Spikes broken state, the way the scene slows right down to keep pace with his halting movements is very clever. As Dawn held him and helped him downstairs I felt myself bend with them.
Great chapter, pet.
[Report This]Date: 11/20/2005 - 04:00 pm Title: Opportunity
I hope that nothing will happen that will further injure Spike's psyche.
[Report This]Date: 11/20/2005 - 03:51 pm Title: Opportunity
love it that little bastard deserves everything he gets. Thais is turning into a very emotional story. Love it though
[Report This]Date: 11/20/2005 - 02:51 pm Title: Facing Demons
The story just keeps getting better and better. This chapter was very sweet. I really cannot stand self righteous Xander. He needs to be brought down a peg or two.
[Report This]Date: 11/20/2005 - 03:36 am Title: Facing Demons
great update I love this story! it is so captivating!
[Report This]Date: 11/19/2005 - 12:48 pm Title: In the Trying
Great chapter! I mean, really, REALLY awesome. The end almost had me in tears. I loved it, and you are an excellent writer!
[Report This]Date: 11/19/2005 - 02:20 am Title: In the Trying
Really good stuff! Keep going, I love it.
[Report This]Date: 11/19/2005 - 12:29 am Title: In the Trying
again....wow...I could feel the lump in my throat and the tears coming to my eyes. This is just a beautiful story that makes one feel so much while reading it.
Post again soon.
[Report This]Date: 11/18/2005 - 09:35 pm Title: In the Trying
I love this story. What a beautiful chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11/18/2005 - 08:54 pm Title: In the Trying
Nicely done. This is my favorite story and I look forward to your updates.
[Report This]Date: 11/18/2005 - 08:28 am Title: Defining Justice
I hope that Dawn won't disown Spike in his time of need. Why doesn't anyone ever remember that Xander tried to rape Buffy when he was possessed by a Hyena. What is the difference. I am really sick of Xander's holier than though attitude. Please update soon. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11/18/2005 - 04:32 am Title: Defining Justice
I so wouldn't want to be Buffy right now, I wonder how Dawn will handle the news? Poor Spike. Great chapter, so very well written, and easy to read,
Love it!!