[Report This]Date: 12/14/2005 - 09:38 pm Title: Coming Home
Beautifully done!! Otherwise, I'm speechless....
[Report This]Date: 12/14/2005 - 08:20 pm Title: Coming Home
What in the world is Dawn up to. I am wondering why she can't just wish it into being. Hmm.... Nice to see Spike has found his groove. :)
[Report This]Date: 12/14/2005 - 07:18 pm Title: Coming Home
Yes, Yes, Yes. Together and forever (I hope).
[Report This]Date: 12/14/2005 - 06:28 am Title: Mercy and Justice
I love this story - I keep wondering why any of them don't think of wishing the chip out - that way spike can defend himself, but what scooby has ever thought of an obvious way to do something. Well... okay not true, Buffy doesn't know that she could. Spike wouldn't think about it at this point and Xander is concerned with Dawn wishing vengence.
Sigh - geat story - I keep cheering Dawn on - I can't wait to see what she comes on with Xander is written brillantly in the story - I love how he has evolved from a complete a** to someone who is acting cool. I love every aspect of this story and keeep coming back for more.
[Report This]Date: 12/13/2005 - 10:56 pm Title: Mercy and Justice
Brassed off slayer and Dawnie wreaking vengeance too? Warren is so dead...and I am so loving this...
[Report This]Date: 12/13/2005 - 09:24 pm Title: Mercy and Justice
Yes the chip must go and I love the renewed friendship with Xander. As a matter of fact, I don't think anybody has ever written a better Xander. Great story and thank you for the clarification with the chip.
[Report This]Date: 12/13/2005 - 05:49 pm Title: An Unexpected Sacrifice
Sorry did I miss something? What happen to the chip! I don't want Spike with a chip but I don't remember when you removed it. I really like the way you develop the Xander character and I did not know how you were going to fix Spike. Very very well done. I impatiently wait for each chapter. Great Great , moving story.
Author's Response: If you'll notice in the chapter before this one, Buffy mentioned how Warren changed the chip so that it doesn't go off when Spike tries to hurt people...only when he tries to hurt Warren.... :) thanx for your kind review, readers like you keep me writing fast cause I live for the feedback :) lol
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 10:12 pm Title: An Unexpected Sacrifice
Boy that was pretty intense. I hope Anya has a supply of ice packs.
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 09:30 pm Title: An Unexpected Sacrifice
i have to hand it to you. You did the seemingly impossible. You redeemed your Xander , brought Spike back and brought me to tears all in one amazing chapter. BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now I don't know if I want Dawn to have her vengeance. Now I want Spike to be able to confront that weasel Warren and take care of his own vengeance. But I trust you and I can't wait to see the final showdown.
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 09:16 pm Title: An Unexpected Sacrifice
I think I like Xander better in your story, than in any other story I've read.
Another great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 08:14 pm Title: An Unexpected Sacrifice
Great chapter. You do a really great job of capturing everyone's emotions. I also really like how you handled Xander's character in this chapter. .
[Report This]Date: 12/12/2005 - 06:49 pm Title: An Unexpected Sacrifice
awe! xander really came through. i did not think he had it in him. good going. keep it up.
[Report This]Date: 12/11/2005 - 07:56 pm Title: The Will to Fight
Great chapter. What a surprise.
[Report This]Date: 12/11/2005 - 02:10 pm Title: The Will to Fight
Whoa, now isn't Xander a helpful boy these days. Good for him. I wonder what in the world could be taking Dawn so long to plan. I hope it is something fraught with irony for Warren. ;)
[Report This]Date: 12/11/2005 - 09:29 am Title: Haunted
Good update. Spike should probably be the person who takes care of Warren. It is only fitting. Maybe that is part of Dawn's plan.
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2005 - 07:17 pm Title: Haunted
Nice thought that Buffy has but with a chip in his head strong doesn't really mean jack. Man, I hope Dawn has a nasty surprise in store for that rat bastard.
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2005 - 03:50 pm Title: Cherished
Absolutely wonderful! It's about time that Spike gets the attention he deserves.
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2005 - 03:48 pm Title: Moment of Truth
I LOVE this story, please keep updating quickly because cliffhangers will be the death of me!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2005 - 01:50 pm Title: Moment of Truth
Grr! I can't wait till Warren gets what's coming to him! More soon!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2005 - 12:30 pm Title: Moment of Truth
NO! Your torturing me!
[Report This]Date: 12/10/2005 - 09:58 am Title: Moment of Truth
That Warren is really a snake. When will he finally get his comeuppance. Good update.
[Report This]Date: 12/09/2005 - 10:36 pm Title: Cherished
great story.... a little sugary-sweet at times, but overall a good read...
Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: 12/09/2005 - 09:18 am Title: Cherished
That was touching. I am really just wishing for my old bad-ass Spike back. I wonder what Warren is doing with his free time these days and when Dawn will execute her plan.
[Report This]Date: 12/07/2005 - 10:21 pm Title: Making Amends
::bounce bounce:: Can't wait... more, please...