[Report This]Date: 12/26/2005 - 04:58 pm Title: Facing the Truth
Intense chapter. I hope she can pull herself together for Spike's sake.
[Report This]Date: 12/26/2005 - 07:08 am Title: Facing the Truth
I have to agree with slayer 212.. I think this story you want to prove the humanity that Spike has but dont see beyond that. Spike spent one hundred years with Drusilla, I think he is very capable of endure Warren's torture. Everything is around Spike and is annoying the hell out of me
[Report This]Date: 12/24/2005 - 06:57 pm Title: Truth and Speculation
Please please please keep updating this story! I LOVE it and want to read more! You are a fantastic writer! Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: 12/23/2005 - 11:20 pm Title: Truth and Speculation
Da-da-da-dum.... So now we get to see how Buffy handles it. I hope that Spike thinks enough of her even if he is afraid, not to lie to her any more. Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 12/23/2005 - 12:19 am Title: Revelation
Great chapter! It seems like even with all of her meticulous planning, Dawn didn't completely think through all the implications of her plan. I didn't even expect Spike to feel like it was a violation of his trust. Excellent writing! I guess we can expect Buffy's reaction next?
[Report This]Date: 12/22/2005 - 07:53 pm Title: Revelation
Yikes Dawn is really in the doghouse with this one. Dang. It does kind of make you wish she had gone for the Wiley Coyote version of justice and had Warren fall off a cliff or had a piano drop on him. However it does appear that Spike has the right idea. I wonder what Buffy will think.
[Report This]Date: 12/21/2005 - 07:14 am Title: Letting It Out
I agree with valery in this one, Dawn is a bitchand I dont like the relationship that she has with spike, she is like obssesed with him and is scarry. And I would like more spuffy
[Report This]Date: 12/21/2005 - 06:34 am Title: Letting It Out
"What a tangled web we weave when we practice to deceivce"..eh? Perhaps some things are best left to the professionals like Anya. Hmm... Things are never simple.
[Report This]Date: 12/20/2005 - 09:29 pm Title: Letting It Out
I liked this chapter. I hope that without the threat of the controller hanging over his head (sorry - no pun intended) , Spike can finally get back to being the guy we know and love! Sounds like Dawn could be losing it, though!
[Report This]Date: 12/20/2005 - 09:12 pm Title: Letting It Out
Ah! Chapter 45 twice. That explains the count then. Thanks! :-)
Author's Response: Yeah...I deleted one copy of chap 45 so it should be all good now...i think...lol
[Report This]Date: 12/20/2005 - 09:07 pm Title: Letting It Out
Ok, good story but I think we are losing perspective. First, Dawn is a bitch, I think she forgot too easily the fact that Spike trie to rape Buffy. And what about Spike?? This story is to kind to him, he is treated like a poor guy and everyone feels sorry for him. He is no pathetic, he is a killer!! He spend a centuy of torture with Angelus and Drusilla.He should be stronger than this. Im sorry but I dont like the way this story is going and please kill Dawn or sent her far away because, my god, she is annoying
[Report This]Date: 12/20/2005 - 09:01 pm Title: No Going Back
Why did you post chapter 46 again? It was posted yesterday too. ???
Author's Response: Nooo...I just wrote chapter 46 just now :) lol...i think chap 45 got posted twice is what happened :-
[Report This]Date: 12/20/2005 - 07:33 pm Title: Conflicted
Oh Dang. That was rough.
[Report This]Date: 12/18/2005 - 06:48 pm Title: Misconceptions
This is a bit of a quandry to me. Does Warren deserve loads and tons of tourture. Yes Does Dawn deserve to get into trouble over the controller and her harshness. Yes. How to dole out the correct discipline is a mystery.
[Report This]Date: 12/18/2005 - 09:23 am Title: Truth and Lies
Well that was an intersting choice for Dawn. Hopefully with Anya's help her wish won't blow up in her face (and by extension Spike's) when she catches up with Warren or vice-versa. I am anxious to see what happens next. :)
[Report This]Date: 12/17/2005 - 09:13 pm Title: Truth and Lies
Good updates. I hope that nothing terrible will happen.
[Report This]Date: 12/17/2005 - 09:11 pm Title: Truth and Lies
Menal mind fucks suck! Love the story, and can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 12/17/2005 - 08:23 pm Title: Truth and Lies
Dum dum dum... I love it, please update.
[Report This]Date: 12/17/2005 - 07:55 pm Title: Truth and Lies
I can taste Spike's fear and it's scary.
[Report This]Date: 12/17/2005 - 06:34 pm Title: Judgment
Please keep updating I LOVE this story! Great portrayal of the characters!
[Report This]Date: 12/16/2005 - 08:59 pm Title: Judgment
Wonderful! I loved Dawn's and Anya's quiet observance of the others trying to come up with a plan... knowing that they have a plan of their own to take care of the problem. It's also great to see Spike continuing to get that fire back. I'm very excited for the next update! You're obviously a talented storyteller so I know it's going to be good!
[Report This]Date: 12/16/2005 - 08:23 pm Title: Judgment
Wicked cool, your story is like one of the best I have read, i could so see that happening, and it is so sad and creepy but really really interesting. Keep writing your really talented
[Report This]Date: 12/16/2005 - 07:08 pm Title: Judgment
Yippie! Dawn made her wish! I hope it was worth all the planning that she did. ;P Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 12/15/2005 - 09:42 pm Title: Building Trust
Thanks for explaining why Dawn couldn't wish the situation to fall into place. Now I'm anxious to see what she has in store for Warren. I also wonder what the Scoobies can do for Spike.
[Report This]Date: 12/15/2005 - 06:48 pm Title: Building Trust
I am scare now. Will Dawn mess up with her wish. Won't it hurt Spike's full recovery if he is not the one to overcome his fear against Warren. Warren has to pay but who decides how?