

Date: 10/21/2005 - 11:58 pm Title: Chapter Nine
that was sad, i feel bad for buffy... i hope they work things out soon and get aboard the happy train of "oh so in love fluffy smut yayness"... hehe, i'm sure you have something happy planned..er i hope : ) look forward to more, take care

Date: 10/21/2005 - 11:55 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Still loving it , Addie! Just let the plot bunny guide you along the garden path...
:)

Date: 10/21/2005 - 11:53 pm Title: Chapter Nine
Good sex!!! Nice chapter.

Date: 10/21/2005 - 09:13 pm Title: Chapter Eight
wow...wow! um... i like ur shy-but-not mix of William and Spike. i really hope he gets more self-confidence though! please tell me that Cecily suffers horribly!

Date: 10/21/2005 - 07:35 pm Title: Chapter Eight
OMG! DEFINITELY not minding if you make it longer! I love this story!

Date: 10/21/2005 - 05:10 pm Title: Chapter Eight
I don't mind it being longer. I'm really enjoying this fic. Awesome job!

Date: 10/21/2005 - 12:49 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Phone sex?
Damn hot.
Will caring about Buffy?
Sooo cute!
You just made my day.
*grin*

Date: 10/21/2005 - 10:53 am Title: Chapter Eight
I definitely won't mind it being longer, because I love this fic!! Excellent chapter. Very hot! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Date: 10/21/2005 - 09:38 am Title: Chapter Eight
Nope - longer is good!!! :) Thanks for the new chapter! Seems that Buffy fears that she'll drive William away when she voices her feelings - and it's the same for him. I hope they will both find the courage to speak :)

Date: 10/21/2005 - 09:19 am Title: Chapter Eight
Longer is definitely better!

Date: 10/21/2005 - 09:07 am Title: Chapter Eight
I'm really not sure if want to see the end of this fiction at all, so... yeah, keep writing:).
It was a little sad to read Buffy telling Willow how men are always leaving and never staying for good. She needs someone to change her mind. And she need Him to do it soon...

Date: 10/21/2005 - 08:45 am Title: Chapter Eight
"I was thinking maybe you could f**k my ass." You can't getting any rawer than that...lol...loved the chapter and yes the longer the better...A+ on the smut Addie. Also, I like how the feelings between them are developing...so classic to have William fall in love with his first.

Date: 10/21/2005 - 08:16 am Title: Chapter Eight
Longer, please yes. Last chapter was just as great as the rest. Can't wait to read more.

Date: 10/21/2005 - 08:06 am Title: Chapter Eight
Who could mind more of this story, just when you're throwing some plot in with the excellent erotica? Buffy is doing an excellent job distracting William with sex. She's getting emotionally involved, and I'm sure William is just the guy to set her skewed relationship views straight.

Date: 10/21/2005 - 07:55 am Title: Chapter Eight
Oh my. . . yes, I do mind. . . I want this to never end. . make it the Erotic Adventures of Buffy and William. . .

Date: 10/21/2005 - 07:48 am Title: Chapter Eight
Oh you better keep writing this fic. DAMN that was hottness on the screen. Though evil with the cliffhanger at the end...I mean you were heading towards possible William covered in Bubbles. Either way Excellent story. I like how you are weaving alittle plot in here too.

Date: 10/21/2005 - 07:46 am Title: Chapter Seven
I am so glad that she went to William for comfort. LOVED the phone sex in the bathroom, would definetly make high school awhole lot easier to get through the day.

Date: 10/21/2005 - 07:35 am Title: Chapter Eight
Don't mind at all!

Date: 10/21/2005 - 07:09 am Title: Chapter Eight
This is really great! Please update soon!

Date: 10/21/2005 - 07:08 am Title: Chapter Eight
Oh no... I certianly wouldn't be opposed to a longer story. I love these characters and I'm sure there is a lot of mischief they can get into. She certainly has figured out how to shock him out of a conversation - always a useful skill in life. I hope she does learn how to open herself up to him emotionally. She needs it and he obviously wants it as well.

Date: 10/21/2005 - 07:05 am Title: Chapter Eight
Very hot! If you actually find someone to oppose that this story be longer, I'll..... kick'em. That's about the only thing I can do : P

Date: 10/21/2005 - 06:56 am Title: Chapter Seven
Very good job! Moving on to the next chapter!

Date: 10/21/2005 - 03:52 am Title: Chapter Eight
Another steamy hot chapter *goes off for cold shower*

Date: 10/21/2005 - 02:08 am Title: Chapter Eight
don't mind in the least. i love your story and can't wait to read more. LOVE IT!!!!