

Date: 10/27/2005 - 10:28 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Another steamy chapter! I love how they are just so cute and playful throughout the whole thing. William should never doubt the power of Buffy. Fabulous chpater!

Date: 10/27/2005 - 09:26 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
A sexual cliffhanger...really enjoyed this chapter too. Hey I'm not complaining...I'm just riding...keep up the good work and thanks for the quick update

Date: 10/27/2005 - 09:06 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
It's a good kind of frustration, I promise. I know it has to be there and I love the fic enough to get frustrated by the pair. I hope you didn't think I was frustrated by YOUR writing, nope not at all I like it quite a lot in fact. And I definitely want to see Buffy get a taste of her own medicine ;) Great update!

Date: 10/27/2005 - 08:55 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Waking up tied to the bed with a wicked, naked Buffy? William must have thought he was dreaming! This was sexy and playful, and I love William when he's forceful.

Date: 10/27/2005 - 08:12 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Can't wait to see what william is gonna do. You 're doing a great job of still keeping us interested day after day.

Date: 10/27/2005 - 07:57 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
I'm sitting back and enjoying the ride. . . and oh boy is it a ride. Buffy is a minx. . . and William isn't much better. . . gawd this was good. . .

Date: 10/27/2005 - 07:53 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
What a HOT chapter! Great work as usual! Please update soon!

Date: 10/27/2005 - 07:45 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
I like the way the story is progressing. Seems like there was a promise of a little angst in your author's note, so I definitely can't complain there/

Date: 10/27/2005 - 07:41 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
I wanna see what William's gonna do! Please don't keepme waiting!

Date: 10/27/2005 - 06:39 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
I LOVE this chapter..and I can't wait for more growly and possessive William. Also... to address your A/N... I think the reason some of us are so impatient is that we get EXACTLY your point about this. I, for one, remember clearly what 17 was like and I also know all the stupid things that fear, pride and lust can make you do before you start thinking about your choices with a little bit of background. I've never thought any of this is heartwrenching. I just hope they don't do anything that will wreck their relationship. You have created an amazing relationship between these two and you've done such a good job with all their human qualities, both good and bad. What I wouldn't give to go live in this world for a little while.

Date: 10/27/2005 - 04:51 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Great chapter .... I like how William has evolved

Date: 10/27/2005 - 03:43 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Another good chapter. I really can't wait to see the next one. Awesome job!

Date: 10/27/2005 - 03:42 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Loved this chapter. And I very much want the next one also. I'm not too fond of the angst either. Everybody deserves to be loved, and its very heartbreaking seeing what Buffy and Spike actually believe. I hadn't said anything though, cause like you said, I don't want the story to end. ; ) But maybe you could tone it down some, and not make me want to cry? This is a lovely story, absolutely wonderful. Can't wait for more.

Date: 10/27/2005 - 02:56 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Very Hot! That boy is such a quick study! The pair of them are the 2 most adventurous teens I've every read of. Excellent tale full of such lusty moments (one right after the other! - and thank you VERY much for that!). More please - I wanna see William giving Buffy a taste of her own medicine!

Date: 10/27/2005 - 02:25 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
More please! I want to find out how this is going to end. Will Cecily come back in the story? Will Buffy and William ever admit their feelings? Update soon :)

Date: 10/27/2005 - 01:12 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Jeebus, people are complaining about the delicious, believable angst? Please keep it up, it'll make the resolution that much sweeter.
with love,
Dark Eyed Seer
(P.S. Are you feeling better this week?)
Author's Response: Thanks. :) And yeah, I'm feeling a bit better now, thanks for asking.

Date: 10/27/2005 - 01:12 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
lol well it's ncie to knwo you have a plan, which i understnad...doens't mean it's not driving me slowly insane though ^_~ i definitely want to see domme-y William...

Date: 10/27/2005 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Oh my freaking...gah!!! That was undeniably HOT!!! What I wouldn't do to be in Buffy's positions....um, I mean, her position....hehe.....can't wait to see what William's got in store for her....damn lucky girl. More soon?

Date: 10/27/2005 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Well another sex filled chapter, good. So hope to see the next chapter soon.

Date: 10/27/2005 - 01:07 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
excellent!!!!!!!!

Date: 10/27/2005 - 12:57 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
thanks for bringing up why they have not declaired their love for each other. i was one who was wanting that. i do not want the story to end too soon. got to have cecily make a play for william and have either buffy bitch slap her or william tell her to get lost. also need lots more spuffy sexcapades. still love the story and thanks for the frequent updates.

Date: 10/27/2005 - 12:02 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Just caught up on the last couple of chapters...awesome job! I love this fic and I hope that things don't get to angsty!

Date: 10/26/2005 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Love every single one of the new chapters. Excellent writing, as always. Really hope they air all the things that they're not talking about with each other soon, though.

Date: 10/26/2005 - 07:52 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
please update!!!!

Date: 10/26/2005 - 04:59 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
good, i love it
its a great fic
you rock