

Date: 11/09/2005 - 09:50 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
These last two chapters were so sad. I really hope they work things out before Cecily gets her hands on him.

Date: 11/09/2005 - 07:13 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
I adore this story, Addie. Just a perfect balance between sweetness and angst. This last chapter was especially well done.

Date: 11/09/2005 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Normally I don't dig on Human AU, but I gave this one a try after reading some of your other stories. Now? I am hooked! Keep it coming, please.

Date: 11/09/2005 - 04:47 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Whew! Well, at least everything is out in the open now (almost). I can't wait for the next chapter!

Date: 11/09/2005 - 04:21 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Oh - that was a surprise. First Cecily hiring a private investigator and second William is a baron. Put's a new meaning to the "you're beneath me". Yet I don't think William will act like it. No he isn't. But this is bad enough now. *sigh* I hope you won't it end like this - no, you won't. Looking forward for more - hopefully soon. When you have the next chapter - no pressure.

Date: 11/09/2005 - 04:21 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
OH MY GOD you're a *****....NAH GREAT DRAMA, I HAD MY HEART CLENCH THE WHOLE READING...!
hope you update soon..can't wait that much
but I give you an idea!
don't make them get back toguether too soon, make us suffer! xD
you could put some "A Touch Of Jealusy" on it...have you read that one?

Date: 11/09/2005 - 12:24 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Oh oh Angst of love...that was just heartwrenching. You did a fantastic job of bringing it out. Hey it can't be all bondage and orgasms. LOL. Either way, you mentioned angst and you provided. Keep this story going...loving every chapter.

Date: 11/09/2005 - 09:33 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Yep harsh is right. Please update soon... I need to see some resolution to this.

Date: 11/09/2005 - 08:52 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
I'm enjoying Cecily in the role of the villain. You've written her vividly, and her cruel attempt to undermine Buffy's relationship so she can step in is in character. The scene in William's bedroom was rough, but it was excellent to get a bit of Buffy's background. I'm looking forward to her explanation for the behavior.

Date: 11/09/2005 - 08:03 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Yes that was harsh but I am patiently waiting since you always come through. Looking forward to next update

Date: 11/09/2005 - 07:17 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Angst is bearable when we're guessing that sweeter moments will come again. ;)
But it was a difficult reading : poor Buffy.
Great chapter.

Date: 11/09/2005 - 06:43 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
AH teenage angst!!

Date: 11/09/2005 - 05:22 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Argh! the ANGST! Beautiful chapter. please update again soon!

Date: 11/09/2005 - 05:17 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
OUCH! Very harsh. But also very explosive and emotional. Great stuff. Have been without internet access for a while and have finally just got all caught up with this story. Still loving every chapter. It's very rare that an author can keep a story interesting with sex scene after sex scene after sex scene. Congratulations on managing it so well.

Date: 11/09/2005 - 04:34 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
I was harsh, but Hey it had to happen.
Another great chapter.

Date: 11/09/2005 - 04:17 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
uh, now things start to fall into place ... great twist

Date: 11/09/2005 - 04:02 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
as always well worth the wait. now hopefully we get to see william give cecily the slapdown and buffy and william get back together.

Date: 11/09/2005 - 03:46 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Well the angst is coming now, oh goody :)
Can't wait for the next chapter should be interesting.

Date: 11/09/2005 - 02:27 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
can someone pls kill cecily .......... sighs... waiting for more!

Date: 11/09/2005 - 02:13 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Oh no!! you can't do this to us..please make them sort thngs out soon

Date: 11/09/2005 - 02:03 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Okay I'm a little tore up over this now but I will hang in there with you. I did enjoy the chapter though. I needed a dose of Spuffy today smut or no smut but prefer the smut...LOL Thanks for the update

Date: 11/09/2005 - 02:02 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Ok that chapter came very close to making me cry. Holding my breath and trying not to blink so the tears won't fall. I don't like this. Please make it better?

Date: 11/09/2005 - 01:51 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Wow, that was harsh. Cecily needs to die. But, even so, I absolutely loved this chapter. You do such a wonderful job writing angst. I hope Buffy and William work this out soon. I can't wait to see what happens in the next update.

Date: 11/09/2005 - 12:59 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
ahh! i'm still with u tho!

Date: 11/09/2005 - 12:44 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
wow that was harsh. i hope a whole warren of rabid bunnies attack cecily. please more soon. i can't wait to see what happens next.