

Date: 11/12/2005 - 11:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
This fic is really original. It's a mature high school fic that's more like college because there aren't any parents. Your writing is excellent and I can't say enough good things about this story.

Date: 11/12/2005 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
i feel bad for both of them. i hope they work things out. can't wait for more. i hope it comes soon please

Date: 11/12/2005 - 10:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Okay..I'm sad right now because of my NEED to have these two together (Spuffy Forever). This chapter and the last one were well written. The angst is good but I miss the smut...lol sorry I'm a dirty bird...lol. Looking forward to the next update. aLSO, you're very welcome. I'm certainly enjoying the story. Its the first fic that I've read of yours and I'm anxious to read others.

Date: 11/12/2005 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
ThankYOU Addie..for doing such a good job..You are a talented writer.
I like the way you did the last chapter in Buffy's perspective, and then did this one in Will's.. Poor Will..*sigh*

Date: 11/12/2005 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
I thought I read chapter 20...sorry I'm late...I loved it and hated it (that Spike and Cecily thing crushed me even though I get the feeling all is not what it seems). I don't hate you and I'm glad I have another chapter to read. I hope it clears some things up.

Date: 11/12/2005 - 10:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
We should be thanking you.

Date: 11/12/2005 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
and aint that just how it goes for young love? Great chapater!

Date: 11/12/2005 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
ok still being patient but William can't live without her. I do like how he told Cecily off though.

Date: 11/12/2005 - 10:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
i love this fic! i love how you went from what seemed like a pwp to this amazing story. i just hope they work things out soon cuz all this unhappyness is making me feel sad for the characters. PLEASE update again soon and bring our fav couple back together!!

Date: 11/12/2005 - 10:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Something really bothers me about Buffy...she seems to think William is this big time jerk from her perception...but in reality, she broke up with him, she hasen't made any effort to reconsile with himor talk to him at all...and now she is basing these assumptions of a 5 second interaction she didn't care to stick around for. (Although it was a bad part of an interaction :P)
Hope they can work it out soon.

Date: 11/12/2005 - 10:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Oh... the beginning of the chapter had such promise.. and now the confusion is even greater than it had been before. Very quick update. Have another one of those up your sleeve?

Date: 11/12/2005 - 10:03 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Ah sh**! William, just over and get the girl!
This was so sad and so heartbreaking and so love in peril!
Please get these two back together, soon.
(Thanks for having William reject that bitch Cecily, I just hated her!)
spuf

Date: 11/12/2005 - 10:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
awesome! that's it , just, asesome

Date: 11/12/2005 - 10:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
aww sad! when will it get happier?? i loved it though...update soon!!

Date: 11/12/2005 - 05:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
I just started your story today. Loving how William is changing in a stud.
Please tell me this is a trick. Don't let William and Buffy suffer any longer.
Can I slap Cicely?
Lilpuff

Date: 11/12/2005 - 04:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
that was sad. but i still loved it. more soon plz

Date: 11/12/2005 - 03:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Still here, but I'll hold my review hostage for tomorrow :) Just kidding... I love it as always. This is just another bitter little pill to swallow, but I know you'll make it better.

Date: 11/12/2005 - 11:27 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Still with you here!
I'm still loving it!

Date: 11/12/2005 - 09:06 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Ah, and more wrong conclusion jumping. Well, they haven't left the party yet, maybe William will be outside gargling Cecily taste away!

Date: 11/12/2005 - 08:26 am Title: Chapter Twenty
*sniffles* but keeping faith of course. I guess perfectly well how William had reacted to Cecily's kiss , and if Buffy had waited a little longer , she would have understood.
Loving your story !

Date: 11/12/2005 - 05:28 am Title: Chapter Twenty
oh yeah I yell at you right now !!!! please.....

Date: 11/12/2005 - 03:39 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Okay, it's official. Cecily MUST DIE!!! I know, I know, how can there be Spuffy lovin' if one of them is in jail, right? But c'mon! Something terrible needs to happen to her! lol
Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Date: 11/12/2005 - 03:36 am Title: Chapter Twenty
absolutely still with you!! i can't wait to read more of your story and find out what happens with the spuffyness. I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!

Date: 11/12/2005 - 12:57 am Title: Chapter Twenty
well written and very interesting...but oh the agony! lol It's good and i feel so bad for them both, but am defnitely interesting in the rest of the story. good job, take care

Date: 11/12/2005 - 12:55 am Title: Chapter Twenty
okay so I read all 20 chapters tonight (took me awhile to get people to stop bugging me so I could read!! haha). I haven't been reading a whole lot on this site, but I have to say. I absolutely love this story! It's written so well, and with each chapter reading your AN's at the bottom, I couldn't see why people were complaining! Anyways... enough rambling. Thanks so much!! I can't wait for the next update!! :)