

Date: 11/13/2005 - 04:42 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Why oh why did I read it before going to bed! Now I will have to go to sleep with a broken heart. That was so sad. :-( Sadder than any of the chapters before, and that's saying a lot! Nothing hopeful about this chapter. This story has me hooked as ever and I still really love. I just hope some goodness comes soon, because my heart can't take much more!

Date: 11/13/2005 - 04:22 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
more more more!!! i have followed this fic since day one - and have eagerly awaited each update - cant wait for more! hope our fav couple get bk together xxxxxx :)

Date: 11/13/2005 - 04:09 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Thank YOU for the entertainment. I knew you'd have to get all angsty cause you know - plot sneaks in and then you have to stop the hot sex for a while, oh well. Can't wait to see how William works it all out so he and Buffy can be together again - love what he said to Cecily. Looking forward to the next installment.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 04:02 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I'm glad you had so many reviews, you deserve it. Your story is great and I hope you'll update soon.
Thanks

Date: 11/13/2005 - 03:03 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
still loving the story and cant wait for the two of them to get back together....

Date: 11/13/2005 - 02:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Noooooo! William can't give up! ARGH! I hope he finds a way to win her back soon. : )

Date: 11/13/2005 - 01:51 am Title: Chapter Six
I very much enjoy this Buffy, and the calmer one the William seems to bring out in her. These two sure seem good for each other. A wonderful chapter... and given the upcoming makeover... I wonder if Spike will be showing up...

Date: 11/13/2005 - 01:49 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I really hope the pair of them can work it out....It's so sad that they have got things so mixed up and beleieve that they don't love each other.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 01:40 am Title: Chapter Five
Loved the bit with the tree. Such a classic, and the meeting the mom thing, hope that goes well. Don't want mom nixing the relationship... they're too perfect...

Date: 11/13/2005 - 01:31 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Well great chapter, things sure seems to get messy now. How will they ever get out of this? I'll just stay tuned for more chapters and find out I guess :)

Date: 11/13/2005 - 01:30 am Title: Chapter Four
IF only real life worked that way... Great chapter.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 01:21 am Title: Chapter Three
Gotta say, I agree with Willow's assessment of not really wanting to know what was going on in Buffy's head, not a safe place for innocents. It is, however, entertaining.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 01:13 am Title: Chapter Two
"She was being a humanitarian, really"--That's the complete right attitude to have. And they really are so dear. Lovely. And naughty ;)

Date: 11/13/2005 - 01:01 am Title: Chapter One
Buffy is sure having fun with a whole new kind of evil. A wonderful start!

Date: 11/13/2005 - 12:53 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
So we've moved from the maybe to the definite then? Lovely chapter, but very sad. I'm trusting you to eventually make it better, okay?

Date: 11/13/2005 - 12:41 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
And now Willow is going to keep Buffy strong to keep her from slipping back into William's arms? Okay, the miscommunications and half truths are becoming maddening! I'm sure you have a delightful reconciliation in store for us, and I really do like all the high school door slamming and misunderstandings, but couldn't there be some positive, too?

Date: 11/13/2005 - 12:38 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
how could you do that. i need more, im dying here. love the story and need spike and buffy to get back together. love the story soo much its the best.please update soo thanx.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 12:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
okay, i'm glad the story is doing so well, but when are things going to get better with them? i was hoping that angst wouldn't really be involved much in this because you didn't even put it as one of the genres, but there was already more in it than i care to read. william should keep trying to talk to her and she should stop being so damn stubborn for once and listen to him. she should have stuck around longer to hear what he said to cecily. i hope that stupid bitch won't cause anymore problems. i'm just sick of all the angst in a lot of the stories i read and i really need something happier right now. i mean if i wanted angst, i would just look at the dvds. i hope it won't take too much longer to get better because i really don't want to have to stop reading this.
Author's Response: If you can't deal with what I've written, then by all means, stop reading. Many people are fine with it, and honestly, when it comes down to it, it's my story. I'm writing to please myself, and personally, I think a well developed story needs some conflict. You can either have patience or stop reading, it's your choice, but please, don't tell me what to write in my own story.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 12:23 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
While I appreciate your words of thanks to your loyal readers, might I offer a suggestion? Throw us a bone, girl! I know you gave us angst warnings and that you've asked us not to get testy about things. And, really, I'm trying. But I've had a bummer of a week and some Spuffyness, or even the hint of a promise of some, would go a long way toward making things better. C'mon, Addie, just a crumb? As always, I'm eagerly (though not quite patiently) waiting for your next update. Thanks again for all your hard work.
Author's Response: I'm sorry your week has been bad, but honestly, I'm not here to cheer up one person. My week's been less than stellar, too, but when it comes right down to it, I have to do what I feel is best for MY story. I feel that a well developed story needs a little conflict. If you don't want to read it,, that's fine, but I'm going to write the story the way I see fit.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 12:21 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Loved the fic!!
I really hope william doesn't give up like that!! He has to talk to buffy!!

Date: 11/13/2005 - 12:19 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
UUGGHHH.....I don't think I can take much more....
I do love the story though...please post soon...pretty please

Date: 11/13/2005 - 12:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
This is a great fic! I hope u reunite them soon!!!

Date: 11/13/2005 - 12:01 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Definitely a quick read that is leading me to alter my stance on all human fics. Instead of dismissing most of them- yes, I do have my exceptions- out of hand once learning that they are all human, I'm actually taking the time to read some of them. Need is quickly climbing my ranks of well written AH. Thank you for writing it.

Date: 11/12/2005 - 11:56 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
great update just one question though i am not complaining but how much more angst will there be ?

Date: 11/12/2005 - 11:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Entertain me some more. . . please. . .
This chapter was just. . . wow. William's emotional turmoil came through beautifully and damn. . just really sad and sweet and heartbreaking all at once. Here's to the hope that William doesn't give up and decides to be stubborn and fight for her.