

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
This story is wonderful - love is very rarely smooth sailing. Please continue as you see the story planned out - it's your story afterall. It's been great so far and I'm sure future chapters will be just as good.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I so want to fight Cecily right now. Really enjoyed the chapter and Giles is the man. I also caught it when she said he was the best dad ever. Were you trying to sneak that in...lol. I'm guessing Giles and Spike's mom will have a hand in getting these two back together. This is one of my favorite chapters and it didn't have any smut...lol...looking forward to the next chapter

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:26 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I have to write to you to express my amazement that some of your readers would actually threaten to stop reading your fiction if the angst did not stop.
Personally, I am loving it, angst and all, because there is so much insecurity on both sides that I am looking forward to see how this plays out. I know you did not intend for this plot bunny to take off but it has, and it is amazing and I love it.
Pity that others feel they have to result to "blackmail" to try to influence your writing. Clearly, they are not familiar with your work, otherwise, they would not resort to such tactics.
Adriana

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:26 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Thanks for the quick updates recently. I am biting my nails! More please!

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:25 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I really don't understand people! This has to be one of the best fics I've ever read, and if they think they could do any better I'd like to see them try..and fail. What's the point of reading another person's story if you're going to dictate how you want things to be? Write your own damn story if you want things to go your way! Pissing off the author is stupid and it pisses off the readers who are actually enjoying the story the way Addie is writing it. It's really conceited to think that she's going to alter HER story because YOU want it a certain way.
Aside from that, I'm sorry you have to hear whines and complaints over such a great fic. This chapter rocked with Cecily finally getting what she deserves!

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:21 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
awesome update. this story just gets better and better. for all the people who complain, its your story not theirs. if they can do better, let them put their own stories out there, as you said if they do not like it do not read it. well i like it, i like it alot. i also like the frequent updates. please keep up the bloody, brilliant work.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:21 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I love all of you stories and always check daily for updates. The people you are talking about in your authors notes if they know how the story should go then they should write some stories them selves. Please keep up the great stories and story lines and as always looking forward to the next chapter and the next story if you feel like writing one.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:14 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
*whines* More. . please. . . . please. . . and its about damn time something happened to that bitch

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:13 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Oh, man. I have been reading this since the beginning and I've gotta tell ya: it's one of my fave WIPs right now. I recognize where you're going with this and I think the angst makes the outcome that much sweeter. Forget about the nay-sayers. To get so involved in fiction that a slight bump in the road - the very thing that makes the ending worth it - "ruins their day" is just plain ludicrous anyways. You're doing a spectacular job on this as well as your other WIPS, which I'm also gobbling up like there's no tomorrow. Keep it up, Addie!

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I, for one, think this is wonderfully written story (angst included). ;) You've made me care for your characters so much that I've cried while reading some of the chapters. I love the intensity you're imprinting in their feelings and I know that in the end it will all be better, so I'm definitely hanging around until the end. :D

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I love this story...including all the angst....it does keep me on the edge of me seat wondering when they will get back together....but it's a wonderful story that I love reading. So please keep the updates coming...I won't be pushy or anything.... :-)

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I bow to your choices & applaude your story. I am enjoying it immensely:) Thansk for all the updates too:)
Kisses!

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:05 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
i think your story is awsome just the way it is. i do sometimes wish they would just get back together but you somehow never drag it out so i feel i have to say something(also i know i'm kinda impatient). i hope people stop hounding you and i love the story and can't wait to see what you do next. more soon please

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:04 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Love your Authors note. I get people asking me lame questions and pointing out things that are different in my stories then the series of any show I write. Sometimes I like switching episodes around. Or making up new histories for characters. Few times I'll write 'If you don't like it then stop reading. I'm the writer so I can do what I want so screw you.'
Bravo in telling everyone what you think about people giving completely unwanted advice.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 08:58 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I try not to mess up my review this time. YOU GO ADDIE! :D
WOW! I CRIED! Awwww that's really sad. Oh the big misunderstanding is killing me but it's good at the same time. I'm really happy with how you're writing this story. How you haven't rushed anything at all. The amount of angst is perfect, Addie and I can feel how real everything is. Thank you for writing such a beautiful, deep and realistic story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
And yay for you, for not listening to those impatient, anti-angst readers... You should always follow your heart, and write this for YOU. :D Thank YOU for even sharing your beautiful mind with us!
:hugs:

Date: 11/13/2005 - 05:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Great chapter despite the misunderstandings! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Date: 11/13/2005 - 05:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Another great chapter.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 05:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
and I cry I cry I cry... it's all your fault !! soon ?

Date: 11/13/2005 - 02:47 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
AAAHhhhhh!!! The angst! The beautiful, painful angst!
Tell Buffy how stupid she's being! Dry William's tears! Wahhhhh!
Dark Eyed Seer

Date: 11/13/2005 - 02:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Just got caught up reading the new chapters. I love this fic. You are doing such an awesome job with it. Can't wait to read more.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 09:44 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
ehehe you are just evil ah? ajajaja great fic
never got tired of saying it
i even could tell in a diferent way
Me encanta tu historia
de verdad lo mejor de lo mejor
sigue asi porque con cada momento de amargura uhuh sufro auaujaja
bueno eso seria
camila, chile
;)

Date: 11/13/2005 - 08:08 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Another great chapter. Love how you did the turn around with William and Cicely. She so deserved it, but what is she up to now I wonder.
I fill the young lovers pain. Make it stop, please.
lilpuff

Date: 11/13/2005 - 05:49 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Hoping the angst will soon come to an end. I'm just praying those poor kids won't have to wait for years or have other partners in the meantime, shudder. Although I am not as fond of the story now as before, I'm still hooked and I can't wait for your next update.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 05:34 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
So Spike will tell Buffy that he loves her .. well he didn't notice that Buffy witnessed a bit. Oh I see - we read now William's POV. Yeah as I thought - that what Buffy didn't see was the urgent part: William rejecting Celily, William defending Buffy and threatening Cecily. Too bad that Buffy didn't stay and witnessed it - but I would have run too. Oh my.. that's so sad - poor ones. I hope William can talk to Buffy and she will listen. He can explain everything. It's so bittersweet at the moment. *sigh* Bittersweet but good! Thank you for writing!

Date: 11/13/2005 - 04:46 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I just want to reiterate that I really love this story! I can't help but want more!