

Date: 11/14/2005 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Hmm can't understand how ppl can complain about the angst? I mean stuff like this makes the story fuller and richer to read, a complete happy sexathon would be pretty boring to read in the long run atleast to me :)
I like this chapter alot, I can't wait to see how you get them toghether again (I assume u will :)) but I can wait and just keep reading the chapters as they come, I'm in no hurry.

Date: 11/14/2005 - 12:09 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I am so glad Cecily finally got what she deserved (okay she deserves worse but getting expelled will definitely mess up her future Cambridge plans). This chapter was so good. I love how Giles has stepped into Buffy's life in such a wonderful way. Thank you for all the wonderful updates and your ability to always keep your readers on the edge of their seats as they wait to see what happens next!

Date: 11/14/2005 - 12:08 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Thank you for the update. I have thoroughly enjoyed this story from the very first chapter! Darn but those were some hot sex scenes... And for what it's worth, I didn't think it was getting too angsty at all.
I also really liked how authentic your characterizations have been. I thought the conflict between Buffy and William was both inevitable (considering their respective insecurities) and well written. I almost hate to think the story is about ready to end... Thank you for sharing this story with us...

Date: 11/14/2005 - 12:07 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I love the angst! I hope I'm not the only one. It makes the ending so much sweeter. This was another excellent chapter and I can't wait for more! :)

Date: 11/14/2005 - 12:01 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Great chapter. Still loving the story very much. More please.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 11:56 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Love WIlliam getting all "grrr" very hot. That whole Spike-William hybrid thing is so beyond sexy and so terribly endearing. Best of both worlds. I love this story. Hope I catch up with the new updates in a few days, but its great knowing there are chapters waiting for me tomorrow.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 11:44 pm Title: Chapter Nine
I shall enjoy this wherever this goes. The poor pair of them, though I would love to know what great git Angel was in this story. Wonderful chapter.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 11:42 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
write how you want and I will read................I love the couple becasue of the angst...........................

Date: 11/13/2005 - 11:35 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Longer, well, I don't think that's ever been a bad thing. And as sad as it was, that little bit into Buffy's mindset, especially about relationships was very useful to explaining were she is coming from. Another great chapter.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 11:30 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Oh God, I'm loving the angst! I'm seriously like living for your updates! This by far is one of your best stories. I can't wait to see where you go with this!

Date: 11/13/2005 - 11:24 pm Title: Chapter Seven
"He sighed, realizing that Buffy could probably get him to do just about anything—anytime and anyplace."--I love how naughty she can make him be, and how he is becoming a more confident individual because of this little horny neighbor of is. I love it, f-word and all.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 11:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Oh, sweetie, the angst you're writing is nothing compared to some fics I've read.
I know how you feel, believe me. Yes, we want our Spuffy but let's face it, the angst was all over the place in Season 6 and 7 of BTVS and we still kept watching, didn't we?
Stick to your guns and write how you want. If I've ever given you any room for doubt in my reviews of your wonderful fic, I am sorry. I look for this every day for an update and you're doing a bang up job!
spuf

Date: 11/13/2005 - 11:14 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I'm not one to shy away from noting grievous flaws in the execution of a work, but I am dead serious about the right of an author to tell their story their way - be that angst, fluff, long, short, pairing, whatever. Your story, we just get to read it, we don't get to tell you what to write about. When reviewers say things about how Spike shouldn't be so bad, he would never hurt Buffy like that, or whine because the chapters aren't going the way they want them too I want to scream. Addie, I'm with you. Tell your story, not someone else's idea of what your story should be. Fortunately you are one of the better writers out there so I'm always glad when a new story comes out from you. I can just sit back and enjoy the ride to whereever you're taking us, and not bump against strange grammar and bizaare spelling issues. Frankly, it's a relief. And I'm not saying this because I love angst (because I really do like conflict and angst in the stories I read,makes em more interesting to me), but I'm thrilled with the angst here. Just for the record. Writers tend to lose me right around 'and they all lived happily ever after, etc' :)

Date: 11/13/2005 - 11:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
YES!!! The bitch finally got what was coming to her!! SOOOO LOVED THAT!!! More, more, more! Pretty please?

Date: 11/13/2005 - 11:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I'm not sure if i was one to offend you, and if i did then i appoligize. I absolutly love this fic and the direction it has taken. i would love to see them get back together which i'm sure will inevidably happen but the story does need to progress before that can happen and i understand that. Please don't be discouraged by what people have to say and just enjoy what you are writing because it is amazing. I hope this cheers you up a little and I can't wait for the next chapter! You rock!!

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:59 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Woohoo!!!! Ding-dong the witch is expelled!!!! Great chapter!!!! I LOVED how Cecily was brought down by the headmaster (in front of Buffy) and was going to be escorted out of school by police. That would've been sweet to read, but I'm not complaining....just glad it happened. And Giles did it all?!!! Yipee!!!
On a further note....how sweet is William's mother? Love her and the way she treats her son; hope she can get him to see/talk to Buffy again.....could she be working with Giles in that dept? Hehe....can't wait for more!!!!

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:52 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
There's that crumb. Reading your notes this chapter, I'm hoping I've not turned into one of those people that's upsetting you. I really do trust that you'll put everything right. And, though my comments may not have reflected it, I really am a sucker for angst. Love the stuff. But, girl...You make my heart bleed for these two! And I'm actually saying that as a compliment. You've made them alive and worth being interested in. Thank you for sharing your gift. As always, eagerly awaiting more...

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I did complain about the lack of plot before (it seemed all about the sex), but then I didn't realize that this was originally a PWP (ducks head in shame).
However, I like the angst. I mean, they are not jumping into bed with other people or attempting suicide, so it's all good.
So those who complain and say that they'll stop reading? That's an extremely immature approach. They shouldn't be reading this anyway.
BTW, this is by far the best chapter of this fic written thus far.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Really glad Buffy's life really seems to be changing for her in England. Glad she's finally finding out what it's like to have really family and friends and what all. Also glad William's mother knew and didn't freak out about things. -lol- Very cool. I *loved* Cecily's expulsion! That was sheer genius! Absolutely amazing. This story just keeps getting better and better. Just waiting to see what twists come with the Spuffy relationship now. Can't wait till William finds out Angel's been out of the pic for a while and that Buffy's staying after the year. *g*

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I read your notes at the end of Ch. 22 about people asking that the angst stop- and that s funny to me because you write the best angst. I am enjoying every gut-wrenching moment of it and look forward to more. So, continue as long as you want to .
:)

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
I love that the angst in this story is giving Buffy and Giles the arena to develop and really genuine relationship. I love that. Also... I love Cecliy being expelled in such a perfect manner. I also like that William's mom has admitted to knowing about his relationship. Maybe she will be able to talk some sense into him.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:37 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
ohhh im so sad i need them togetherbut i like the way the stories goin. great chapter, love what u did to that bitch. i need a update really really bad so please update soon thanx.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
yesss!! cecily has left the building!! im loving this!! more soon please!!!!

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
i've enjoyed every aspect of this story so far, and won't stop reading just because something doesn't tickle my fancy (which nothing has thus far)-- I love romance, I love smut, I love angst, and I love happy endings! So all is cool!

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two
Thank you for writing that chapter. As I was one of those girls that was constantly harrassed . In my case I didn't do anything to cause my problems, but I didn't help them.
Cecily just reminded me of all those people who did things to me. But unlike my life she didn't get away with it. That chapter just made me feel a lot better.
And for the record, I have been reading every chapter as you have been posting them. I just haven't been posting replies. I'm bad like that.