

Date: 10/18/2005 - 11:57 pm Title: Chapter Six
I have mixed feelings about Buffy in this story, Yes, she's helping him feel better about himself, yet it seems all she thinks about is the sex part. They're not really doing much else. I would hate to have him feel like just a sex object. He could really get hurt emotionally and I sure would hate to see this happen to him. It would be nice if they actually went on a date or go out in public. and find something besides just sex to bring them together. Just my humble opinion. This meant to be a bashing.
Author's Response: Give it a little more time. I have reasons for Buffy's focusing on sex, etc. Also, there will be more interaction between them in other places, too. It's only been a couple of days...

Date: 10/18/2005 - 11:44 pm Title: Chapter Six
I don't think Buffy acts like Faith in this fic at all. I love that she is going to help William show off his assets and I can't wait to read the meeting with his mother. More as soon as you can please.

Date: 10/18/2005 - 11:44 pm Title: Chapter Six
I just got to read this fic and ....Wow. It's really really good. I don't think you portrayed Buffy as Faith at all.I really hope you update soon.

Date: 10/18/2005 - 11:42 pm Title: Chapter Six
I love this fic! I don't think you've portrayed Buffy as Faith-like at all. Aggressive!Buffy + Innocent!William = Happy!Braat44 :D

Date: 10/18/2005 - 11:32 pm Title: Chapter Six
LOVE IT! Want more please, much more! Soon?

Date: 10/18/2005 - 07:50 pm Title: Chapter Five
This story is awesome! I can't wait to find out what happens when they go to school!

Date: 10/18/2005 - 07:48 pm Title: Chapter Five
Still VERY interested. Keep it coming!

Date: 10/18/2005 - 07:39 pm Title: Chapter Five
*raises hand* I'm still interested!

Date: 10/18/2005 - 07:13 pm Title: Chapter Five
Mmmm... morning sex. No better wake-up call in the world.

Date: 10/18/2005 - 06:55 pm Title: Chapter Four
You betcha I am still enjoying it!!! I love how buffy finally tainted poor little william lol.. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Date: 10/18/2005 - 05:42 pm Title: Chapter Five
Please FINISH! I really like ytjis story. I'm tring not to read any others so I can always keep track of the story. I really need you to finish.

Date: 10/18/2005 - 04:57 pm Title: Chapter Five
Oh, yes! Definitely still interested! There are so few good 'William' stories out there, and I love that Buffy is the aggressor for once! Great job!

Date: 10/18/2005 - 04:01 pm Title: Chapter Five
Awe - still love it. Buffy is defending William - it's so cute :) I don't need you to tell it's hot - because it is. Looking forward to read more - the day in school, meeting William's mum :)

Date: 10/18/2005 - 12:05 pm Title: Chapter Five
Away from the computer for a couple days and four jolly new chapters! I am still enjoying the premise, and showing Buffy's more hesitant, softer side has made it even more appealing. The sex scenes are smoking, and Buffy's forward behavior has brought William out of his shell admirably. This is very entertaining.

Date: 10/18/2005 - 11:59 am Title: Chapter Five
oh still interested alright..... and that was one really naughty buffy..... waiting for more!

Date: 10/18/2005 - 09:56 am Title: Chapter Five
I love this fic and am definately still interested! Please update soon!

Date: 10/18/2005 - 09:29 am Title: Chapter Five
They're so cute.

Date: 10/18/2005 - 08:25 am Title: Chapter Five
Great chapter and of course still interested. Who wouldn't be?

Date: 10/18/2005 - 08:24 am Title: Chapter Five
Woah chap 4 was hot! I really liked 5 too! hope to see more soon. It is definately interesting me!

Date: 10/18/2005 - 07:40 am Title: Chapter Five
Gahgahgahgahgahgahgah!
I don't think my tongue can form words. This is hot, I like the plot and the smut. Keep going!

Date: 10/18/2005 - 04:04 am Title: Chapter Five
yeah Addie, still interested... please keep on 'cos i really want to know more about their relationship, and i'd like to see them interacting with other people...

Date: 10/18/2005 - 02:49 am Title: Chapter Five
Ugh. I don't think Buffy's reaction to finding out William is worried about her meeting his mother will be a pretty one. Loved this chapter. Can't wait for more.

Date: 10/18/2005 - 12:45 am Title: Chapter Five
och but is this a sexy fic!! 'n i love how u update it so frequently!!!! pleeeeease keep up the great work, i'm really enjoyin the fic!!

Date: 10/18/2005 - 12:20 am Title: Chapter Five
Very interested!! you rock!

Date: 10/17/2005 - 11:57 pm Title: Chapter Five
Hot Hot and more Hot! I can't get enough of this story! Damn, I kept fanning myself throughout this whole chapter! Sexy and sweet all in one pop. Absolutely love it! This chapter definitely made my day after all the other angsty stories I've been reading. Love sweet William. :-)