I just started reading this story and I'm enjoying it so far. The smut is great and this oral chapter actually made me laugh at how blunt Buffy came out with the whole going down thing...pretty straight to the point...I like that. She is pretty aggressive in this chapter which I can see why some people would compare her to Faith but we all know Faith, like you said, would not give a shit so that difference alone kills that comparison. However, I would say more like Dru without the crazy because she is transforming him. What is concerning me now is that with all the new changes will William dump her after he sees all the new p***Y coming his way or will you keep it pretty much between them and possibly have them fall in love. Look forward to another update

I love Buffy being a sexually aggressive gal, and plus the way she still cares for Spike is a totall bonus. It's a sexual revelation for Spike and an emotional revelation for Buffy. It's almost as if nobody has cared for her before like William does. There are a few similarties to Faith, namely the sensuality, but she's not broken like Faith. I'm looking forward to seeing their relationship grow even stronger and to torture Cecile!

another fabulously yummy chapter addie. can't wait to see the reaction everyone has to the "new" william.

Excellent chapter! So Spike is gonna come out of shy William next chap? Can't wait!

She's gonna make him pretty. . .LOL. . can't wait to see that !!!!!

I like the tone of this story. And I understand the use of the language. Granted, fuck and horny aren't part of Buffy's normal vocab on BTVS, but that was also written for public TV. ... PLUS this isn't the Buffy who moved to Sunnydale and was befriended immediately by a her core friends. This Buffy was sent away by her parents as punishment, so to me this all makes sense. Plus, Buffy as a virgin on BTVS kinda suprised me having seen the movie. The way I see this fic, both William and Buffy have their handicaps, Buffy's will probably be emotional... expressing herself in a capacity other than physical and William's handicap is social having been too emotional and vulnerable. I really like the direction of this and despite the very *hot* sex scenes (which I definitely enjoy), this is so much more than a pwp. Sorry if I haven't reviewed yet. More soon please.

Nah, Buffy never even made me think of Faith. I think you've done a great job keeping her "Buffy" with also making her more aggressive. Kudos!

Can i just say it's my favorite 'made by Addie' story and i absolutly love every single one of these?
Greate work :).

great story! can't wait for more. please updatre soon.

Hi Addie... i must say, i really don't understand how your buffy could be seen as a faith type. She is self-assured in the sexual department (maybe 2 guys didn't walk away from her the morning after), but she is caring and lovingly as usual. And william is just "as we know him", with some little help on the road to free is inner spike... can't wait for that! I know that there could be a little angst confronting the others, but i hope that al least things between them will always work fine!

Awwww cuteness!

I just want her to fully love him not just sexually. Emotionally and supportative of him and his life. Remember she leaves at the end of the school year. I like this chapter, please quit making her say fuck when she wants him.

Author's Response: I'm writing the story, and therefore remember full well the set up. I also know what's coming and what I have planned for it. Not to be rude, but I am the one writing this story, and as the author, I've chosen to do things a certain way for a reason. Those reasons will be made clearer, but in the meantime, let me tell my story the way I would like to.

an emendment to my review. This is not meant to be a bashing in any way.