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Reviewer: Mac 1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2006 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Just read this one through to ch 35 in one go and couldn't put it down. I'd read the book a long time ago, and wasn't sure whether I wanted to read it in fanfic, but you'e done a suberb job adapting it to B/S and I'm enjoying it very much. Wonderful story. Please update soon..

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2006 - 05:45 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

I read this morning but hat no time to review properly. Neither I do now. Loved the chapter and looking forward to the next one. Seems to get interesting.. is someone pregnant?

Reviewer: Bekah Leigh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2006 - 04:07 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

i can't wait for the next chapter! I'm dying to see how their conversation is going to go!

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2006 - 01:55 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

I love this story. Can't wait for the talk! You are doing a great job! Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2006 - 12:45 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next update!

Reviewer: Samantha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2006 - 06:44 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Hi Jennybean!

This chapter was excellent - loved it!

Please update soon.

PS. I am currently reading Petals on the Wind - so far it's really good!

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2006 - 03:02 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Way to go Elizabeth. It's good to see her being proactive about their need to talk after her apparent recalcitrance for the last couple of weeks. But oh no...she's late? At her age it could be nothing I suppose. Stress, dietary imbalance and all manner of factors can make one irregular. Heck my period has never been dependable! Still - it doesn't bode well and will hopefully give them something to think about (as if they don't have enough on their plates already). ~crosses her fingers for the poor things~

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2006 - 12:18 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Oh no, I hope she's not pregnant. That would just be the worst luck imaginable. Loved this chapter though. Now that William's had a taste he's obviously finding sex irresistable. Poor Elizabeth doesn't stand a chance. : )

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2006 - 12:07 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

That was so damn sexy. I'm not familiar with the books this is based off of, so I really don't know what to expect. All I know is this is hot and I'm coming back for more.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 11:58 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

You are evil!"Just hanging us up and let us dangel with yet another cliffhanger..So mean.There are so many unanswered quistion.And the big one,is buffy pregent?// Can't wait for the big Talk.Please don't make us wait as long as you did the last time.ok!"

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 11:37 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Whoa that was quite a quickie (that was so rudely interrupted) Spike and Buffy had going. I wonder if the new plan is much better than the old one as they both involve going out where the dogs are. Ah the talk.,,,I wonder what William will say. Good chapter.

Reviewer: Whitelighter354 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

YAY!!!! I was just about to email you and see if everything was ok. (aka When the hell are you going to post the next chpter!) :) I am really liking the way its turning out. I must say that I am glad that they are finally planning to break out of the house. But something tells me that it isnt going to be cake! I definately like how you have them acting as Spike and Buffy. Are they going to mold into these people? I sure hope so! :) .... I was thinking about their relationship and all of their *encounters*, Buffy and Spike (William and Elizabeth) are having unprotected sex. It would be so cool (in kind of a messed up way!) if they escape and she is pregnant and they have to try and keep their family together! LOL! Look at me! Your the Author! I absolutely and completely loved it! Please post Soon! Lighter
p.s. Dont worry about the wait thing, its worth it!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

First of all..Will became very .......scary for a bit there..demanding...cocky.....strong. In other words, Spike like. Seems like he is becoming more like his alter ego.

Now..Guess I saw the possible pregnancy thing a mile away. I am on pins and needles to find out how Will is going to react. to the talk.. I imagine he is going to be upset..but I won't know untill you update........*hint, hint* lol : D

Really great chapter..EAGERLY awaiting the next!

Reviewer: McChick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Oh man that chapter was worth the wait!! Not only did we have a little intense Spike and Buffy action, but we got more details in to the 'getting out' plan, which I am liking a lot!! The talk that Elizabeth has with William should be an interesting one and I can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep up the amazing work please!!

-Ashley-

Reviewer: nikki_chinger Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 10:58 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

aHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! YOU NEED TO UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Love the beginning, at the dance bar. Spike all seducing of Buffy, and that terrible unfulfillment because of a close call. Another terrible part of their reality. Heart breaking, but oh, so relevant. And that little bit about her period... yet another hitch in the plan? And that conversation they're about to have, hope you update soon! Really loving this one. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 09:40 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Thanks for the update. Great chapter. I hope the talk ends with sexy results.

Reviewer: marstersgirl13 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

that was a great chapter! is buffy ever going to confront him about not using protection?
please update soon!

Reviewer: Silvy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 - 05:51 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Lucky me! I found this page... after reading the chapters you posted on aff... And I wanted more!
I also read the books (except the "last/first one") many years ago... and it's great seeing the characters I kew so well, when I was young, as Buffy and Spike...

Please, update soon. Good work!
Thanks

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2006 - 04:59 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

The scene was well done. Now that the inevitable has occured I am anxious to see how they handle it.

Reviewer: JenxGeR Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2006 - 10:40 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

*GUH* Hot. After waiting for 33 chapters, us readers have finally been awarded! Lol *fans herself* I don't like to think of incest because I have an elder brother, but anything with Spuffy in it does it for me lol.

I can't say much but wow. This is one of the few stories that I read from WIP and continues to check for updates daily. I've always enjoyed works from talented writers :)

Please update soon, thanks!

Rgds,
Jen

Reviewer: 3988Akasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2006 - 12:22 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Finally they get it on! Now, will Dru find out and beat them both senseless, or will they fight back? I gotta know how the fall out in the harsh light of day leaves our two lovers. Update soon!

Reviewer: Anne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2006 - 11:58 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just as I expected more chapters filled with excellency! Keep it up, I'm loving it 8D (the book to i might add =D)

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2006 - 03:46 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

I was surprised to see that Buffy was the one pushing for actual intercourse (instead of hedging around with other forms of gratification). Brave writing on your part and well done. I don't know what the poor dears will do for birth control once they figure out the dangers if they continue in this way. I look forward to your next update. :)

Reviewer: Samantha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2006 - 07:16 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Jennybean, I finished the book. It was sad at the end but I'm glad they finally got out of the attic. I think I'll get the other books to the Dollanganger series and reread those as well, don't remember what happens in the rest of that series!

On another note, I liked the part of your story when Elizabeth giggled at William's cock because it was "bent." I remember on the show after Buffy/Spike slept together she was acting all bitchy and said to him, "Oh you're bent!" and Spike replied, "Yeah and it made you scream didn't it?" LOL loved that you incorprated that into your HOT SEX SCENE!!! :D

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Wow, you read that really quick! I read the other books as well and remember Petals on the Wind was good (I will probably do a sequel based on that one) and If There Be Thorns was pretty good too. Seeds of Yesterday was terrible and I never even read Garden of Shadows, the prequel, b/c I was so disappointed with Seeds of Yesterday.

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