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Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

HOLY CRAP.......dawn kicked some serious ass. and aiden..nice move with the cloaking spell! loved it and can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 08:21 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Aaaah! They find her....then all get captured again! Evil!

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Date: 09/27/2006 - 03:51 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Uh-huh... that looks really bad for Dawn. Krez is aloud to play with her? It seems as if her rescuers are near though will they be there in time? ~ OH! Dawn has learned something :) She was able to defend herself even she had to do it twice. Seems as if Dawn won :) And the others are in the castle now. Aiden wants to get the amulet first? I'll cross my fingers that their plan will function :)

Reviewer: time of change Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 03:22 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

I missed some posts but I'm all caught up now. I'm really enjoying this story. Aiden and Emma are delightful and your demons are just great! Buffy and Spike are a joy, as always. And I love your spunky Dawn.

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 09:52 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Go Dawn with the girl power! I thought it was awesome that she defended herself without having to be rescured by the posse. I'm so glad you're sticking with the story and continuing to fill in the blanks in your post Chosen-verse!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 03:52 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

I loved the way Dawn handled herself with Krez. I also enjoyed Buffy's musings about the guards, and Aiden's little joke. Can't wait to find out what happens now that rescue party is in the castle. Great chapter!

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2006 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Go dawn!! way to kick some ass!! I loved that!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Go, Dawnie!!! That training she's had really came in handy. Girl has grown up.

Aiden is cool.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 11:23 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Dawn got a good bit of even with Krez, and the rest have breached the castle. This seems like a very positive step toward averting another apocalypse. I enjoyed this chapter very much and am glad that your muse is back in business. Always looking forward to more.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 11:20 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

great update

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 11:09 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

*claps* Go Dawnie! It is about time Dawn learned to protect herself instead of having to wait for other people to do it for her.

Reviewer: Satindoll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 11:05 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Ugg. Dawn had to saw off its head!! Yuk. I like the glimpse of whimsey in old Aiden. And the fuzzy hat reference was histerical!!

Sd

Reviewer: Chyril Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Ohhh.. Getting really good.. Go Dawn.! I know you wanna finsih it..but it's so good..I hope it goes on.. I peeked at the banner.. Wow.. Very nice.. Thanks ADDIE...

Reviewer: A Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 10:26 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Glad Dawn had the guts (and brains) to get rid of that nasty Krez! Good luck with the finishing :)

Reviewer: Unholydragoon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Keep it up Addie! I like where the story is going and want very much for you to finish it.

Reviewer: carrie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 08:44 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

haha, i love the end of this chapter!

Reviewer: Lilly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 01:01 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

I read both chapters with pleasure. I have to admit that it's hard to remember what exactly happened in the chapters before without re-reading it, but the basic knowledge is still there, and I'm glad to read something new of it.
I liked the details. I loved Buffy calling Spike "Billy". I liked the Mulnax thing you created, and I like the banner on blood&satin, especially green-glowing Dawn. You can be proud of this story, really. Be brave.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2006 - 06:02 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

So glad Spike recovered (well not 100% yet, but better than dusty). Sure hope they can get to dawn in to to save everything. Loved the update, more please. It's very creative!

Reviewer: MG Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2006 - 05:36 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

still loving this fic

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2006 - 11:11 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

The eeriness of the landscape in this world adds a nice level of creepiness to each scene.

Reviewer: Chyril Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2006 - 01:42 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Yippee... I'm SO glad you are working on this.. It's my favorite.. I'm just a reader..but I do know what I like.... Am wondering if Buffy and Spike will ever get to the alter before baby is born.. It's exciting..innit.? Thanks for writing.. you are really good..

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2006 - 01:32 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

I think its a great story! can't wait for another chapter

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2006 - 11:31 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

"Let me look at your arm. Otherwise, I'm going to be spending the rest of this trip wondering if it's going to drop off into the sand, and that'll just be a distraction."--One of many greatly humorous moments in this chapter, despite the overall situation being so dark. As a favorite scooby once said, "I laugh in the face of danger, then I hide until it goes away." I really enjoyed this chapter, and still hope something unpleasant happens to Krez. Looking forwad to the next update.

Reviewer: carrie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2006 - 10:21 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

i still really love this story and i'm glad you're still working on it! i'm sorry you need encouragement...i hate that feeling. your writing is still fabulous though, so don't worry!

Reviewer: K Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2006 - 09:15 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Glad Spike's ok. Also like the Aiden/Emma- they're both interesting and original. Keep it up!

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