

Date: 07/13/2005 - 02:09 am Title: Movie Night
I'm having a little bet with myself on how much suffering you're gonna but this pair through. Doing a great job so far and I'm sooo looking forward to the rest of the dance. Thanks.

Date: 07/13/2005 - 02:02 am Title: Movie Night
*snif* so sad, yet so wonderful. Very well written! :D

Date: 07/13/2005 - 01:44 am Title: Movie Night
loved it. great job. hopefully things get better from here on out but since riley's in this fic, no doubt it's gonna be difficult getting buffy back with spike. can't wait for more.

Date: 07/13/2005 - 01:20 am Title: Movie Night
I love this story! Awesome writing. I feel the tension of everything between them so intensely that I have a knot in my stomach. Glad that it seems like things are getting past the toughest of the tough for them. Look forward to the rest of the journey.

Date: 07/13/2005 - 12:38 am Title: A Sense of Normalcy
I already read the story last time, and i liked it. To be honest i really, really liked it. The thing is that i think you make a lot of descriptions in this new version, and so when you keep reading the story, the rythm becomes slower and the reading becomes heavier. I like the plot, but to be honest with you there are so many details that makes the reading boring. I'm not talking about details like when you describe the scene where Spike and Buffy are in the second floor and they approach and they want to kiss each other and she suddenly asks him if he doesn't have a girlfriend; no, those kind of details were ok, what bothered me is that you go back and forth, back and forth in the story, so you kind of "cut" the rythm, and i personally don't like that. Too many followed flashbacks. I really liked the plot yeah, and the new things you added to the story so far. I'll try to keep reading further in the story and give you a better criticism. Sorry if i was harsh right now, I'm really tired and just wanted to write a review to this story before i went to bed :P lol. Nite and keep writing such great stories, I'm sure there are readers who appreciate your work much more. Don't take it personal, it's just a constructive POV.

Date: 07/12/2005 - 10:02 pm Title: Movie Night
Is sooo great please update it really soon

Date: 07/12/2005 - 09:21 pm Title: Movie Night
absolutely incredible updates and i am glad they are taking things slow

Date: 07/12/2005 - 09:06 pm Title: Movie Night
This is just terribly horribly sad. I think I may have been one of the people on the first go round that said that Spike did not suffer enough, but it seems that it's making Buffy suffer longer as well. Ughh.... there is no solution to this. Great chapter by the way.

Date: 07/12/2005 - 08:07 pm Title: Movie Night
Gah!! Seriously, you are REALLY good with the emotional stuff!!! Like, really good! I loved this chapter, can't wait for more!

Date: 07/12/2005 - 08:03 pm Title: Movie Night
'sniffle' that was so sweet...that's right spike your ass better grow up...lol

Date: 07/12/2005 - 07:50 pm Title: Being There
*Sniffles* Man! I'm sitting here trying to say outloud what I will type for the review. Only... my mouth just opens and closes, all fishy like. I can't really say. I can't say it's really really good! I guess I'm still soaking in the chapter. *Shrugs* Anyway, please update soon!

Date: 07/12/2005 - 06:01 pm Title: Being There
Didn't read this the first time round so all new to me. Bloody marvellous! Sooo much angst! And rightly so - cheating is very much of the bad! But his pain - delicious! Will you make it better now? Hope so, poor sod! Many thanks and looking forward to more soon.

Date: 07/12/2005 - 05:29 pm Title: Being There
The chapter is so bittersweet - but good!

Date: 07/12/2005 - 02:37 pm Title: Being There
Great chapter - can't wait for more, as soon as you're able to update. Take care, C ; )

Date: 07/12/2005 - 02:01 pm Title: Being There
Wow, another great chapter! Can't wait for them to get back together! hurry up and update okies?

Date: 07/12/2005 - 01:42 pm Title: Being There
simply wonderful!

Date: 07/12/2005 - 11:19 am Title: Being There
wow intense...feel so sorry for both of them ...

Date: 07/09/2005 - 07:40 am Title: For Always
Ahhh, that was sooo cute at the end! Love the fact that shes starting to forgive him at least a little! love the story as well! I have it booked under favorits, so I can easily check it! update asap!

Date: 07/09/2005 - 04:53 am Title: For Always
*snifs* it's so sad and wonderful and... sad

Date: 07/09/2005 - 01:52 am Title: For Always
This Is So Great Can You Please Update Soon

Date: 07/08/2005 - 11:40 pm Title: For Always
Excellent chapter. Very powerful emotions at work. Love how it ends with a simple word that carries so much power and hope. Excellent writing. Update soon please.

Date: 07/08/2005 - 11:28 pm Title: For Always
Awesome update..plz plz update soon

Date: 07/08/2005 - 11:17 pm Title: For Always
absolutely loving it

Date: 07/08/2005 - 07:46 pm Title: For Always
that chapter was so sweet...i had tears in my eyes, its so painful man...please update soon

Date: 07/08/2005 - 06:42 pm Title: For Always
That was great! So much more emotion .....