Date: 09/19/2012 - 09:15 pm Title: Ch 1
Oh, gosh, I'd love it if you came back and added to this! It's absolutely lovely: hot, and tender and sweet... but much too short!
Date: 03/31/2010 - 06:12 pm Title: Ch 1
Oh! So cute! More....?? Please. :)
Date: 07/12/2006 - 03:11 am Title: Ch 1
i think that it should be continued, you're on a good track, so this story line shouldn't be put to waste.
Date: 12/26/2005 - 11:58 am Title: Ch 1
This was lovely yet it was hot too. I wouldn't mind a sequel.. or simply another one shot continuing this one.
Date: 04/22/2005 - 11:37 pm Title: Ch 1
please please continue!! that was so cute!!! thanx so much
Date: 04/21/2005 - 07:20 pm Title: Ch 1
I love it! Don't tease, send us the next installation!
Date: 04/21/2005 - 06:33 pm Title: Ch 1
I think that you should continue this... but have her get her period and then have many NC-17 scenes!
Date: 04/21/2005 - 04:46 pm Title: Ch 1
please continue, it is so adorable, i wish you would continue, i can't wait to find out what happens next!!!!!!!
Date: 04/21/2005 - 01:03 pm Title: Ch 1
Nice story. You can continue the story if you want but I don't think it is necesary.
Date: 04/21/2005 - 09:22 am Title: Ch 1
Oh. Definately. It was a great first fic :) It was a great fic period. I really hope you write more to it. Even just one chapter. Update soon if you do.
Date: 04/21/2005 - 06:04 am Title: Ch 1
please continue
Date: 04/21/2005 - 04:46 am Title: Ch 1
Good stuff, especially for the first time :) A few plaecs seemed awkward, but definitly a LARGE step above most of the stories around. AND YES...PLEASE...continue! :)
Date: 04/21/2005 - 04:36 am Title: Ch 1
uhuh!! tbc!! lets see where this takes them.....
Date: 04/21/2005 - 04:33 am Title: Ch 1
I really liked this, I think you should definitely continue it. There's much more that could be said. Good work=)