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Reviewer: Laine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2005 - 11:10 am Title: Never Defeated

wow.. amazing chapter.. and yeah, people who get raped actually like it.. it's just cause their human.. and that's a fact courtesy of watching Oprah.. but, i hope there are consequences for what spike's done.. and very serious ones at that.. well, loved it.. will watch out for more.. thanks..

Author's Response: For anyone reading this out of context, Laine means the human body, not the human mind. Yea, I looked into it and people's bodies do betray their minds. Thanks for being so understanding as to how I wrote it!

Reviewer: Carrosparro Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2005 - 10:24 am Title: Never Defeated

Didn't like the chapter (with the rape scene), but I can't help but love the story. It has potential to be really good. =)

Author's Response: Well, you're not supposed to like the rape scene, because well, disturbing. But hopefully you'll see how it fits in, or you already see it. Thanks for the review and for sticking with it!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2005 - 07:42 am Title: Never Defeated

I will give it a chance.....I'm very interested in how you get her to trust the man that raped her....and have her fall in love with him........people gave me a chance in my story.....I can indeed return the favor........so do your best to make me believe......

Author's Response: I'll try my best! It's hard because he can't just all of a sudden get down on one knee and beg. He's still a bad guy and still in a gang. I don't know how patient you'll be, but give it until the end - his redemption isn't immediate - he has to change first. Thanks for sticking with me!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2005 - 04:03 am Title: Never Defeated

It wasn't to bad to read, and you made the explanation at the bottom of the chapter, so it was good. And Buffy did overhear a plan against Spike. Well, even if she decides to tell, I'm not sure they will believe her. Thanks for the update anyway!

Author's Response: I'm glad you weren't compelled to flame me :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Mac Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2005 - 11:36 pm Title: Losing Innocence

Don't worry, we're with you. The story is unfolding as it should and it's a blast to read. Thanks for this one, and for being brave enough to push those limits - makes for a good read. :-)

Author's Response: Thanks! You don't know how much the reviews these chapters mean to me, lol. I'm sitting here on edge hoping people don't get all upset, because it really IS part of the story and not just there to rile things up. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: demonica mills Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2005 - 11:33 pm Title: Never Defeated

good update. As for the flamers, I jsut read an article where they discuss how victims of rape often orgasm and feel disguisted with themselves. A person's body doesn't understand the diffence between reap and consent, that's your mind. Your body merely reacts to stimulations, which you get iether way. Tell that to your flmaers. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for backing me up! lol. It IS a difference between body and mind. Thanks for the nice and fact-filled review!

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2005 - 11:15 pm Title: Never Defeated

Hmmm, I have to go with you, on this one, honey. Yes, rape victims don't enjoy it, of course, but... When two people are destined to be one? It's a tough call. Spike's a real pri** right now, we get that. But, I can't wait until the guy wakes up and smells the java. His guilt and remorse is going to be monumental, I feel it! Great story, a little difficult to read at times, but worth it. Luv, Spuf

Author's Response: Oh good, no flames, lol. I'm glad you see where I'm sort of going with it, big picture wise. And I'm very flattered that you stick it out to see what happens!

Reviewer: PK Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2005 - 10:56 pm Title: Never Defeated

for some reason it all reminds me of Frank Miller's Sin City and the hooker town. And for some reason I was strangely attracted to that town and the stories it holds, which is y im attracted to this story. So in short...I like it.

Author's Response: Good! But not all the girls are used for sex, hopefully you caught that. Thanks for the kind review! It means a lot, especially at this tough chapter!

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2005 - 10:38 pm Title: Never Defeated

Not to sound redundant, but...update SOON!!! I just love this story (well, both of your stories, but there's just something about this one...) Anyway, this chapter was basically what I expected and based on the hints that you gave in previous chapters, it was inevitable. Besides, there have been plenty of writers who have done unconsensual scenes: Laure, Karbear, and possibly Sluggie, but I'm not sure about her. But one of my fics came close and I know how stressful it is to write. Great chapter, filled with excellent emotions. I repeat- update SOON!

Author's Response: Thanks Ash! I think this one is just a bit more lifelike? I mean sure, dramaticized gang, but these nasty situations really do happen :( Anyway, your support means a lot!

Reviewer: Allison Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2005 - 10:21 pm Title: Never Defeated

I said it before and I'll say it again- I think the rape ordeal was tastefully done and depicted emotions well:) You know me- I'm in this fic until the end!

Author's Response: Thanks ever so! You made me feel confident about posting it :D

Reviewer: Laine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2005 - 12:09 am Title: And the Winner Is...

really excited to find out where you're going with this one.. hope you update...

Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2005 - 02:06 pm Title: And the Winner Is...

Oh, I love this story! Looking forward to read more! About the present, and more about the flashbacks too. What happened to Dawn by example, when did Buff start to run away.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2005 - 10:30 pm Title: And the Winner Is...

great so far

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2005 - 12:38 pm Title: And the Winner Is...

LOVE IT! Want more very soon please! A very unique concept for this tale. Can't wait to see how you write all these humans (noticed Illyria is still cold and automatronic-like). I love the Cordy character too. Keep the Chaps coming!

Author's Response: I'll be introducing more characters soon - and showing who Angelus has on his side. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Carrosparro Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2005 - 09:31 am Title: And the Winner Is...

Loved it!! You're one of my favourite author's! Please update as soon as possible!! =D

Author's Response: Aw thanks! Hope you still think that next chapter :X Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2005 - 09:26 am Title: And the Winner Is...

This is so good. I'm very curious about Cordelia's backstory now. AND what's going to happen next!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: lindsay Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2005 - 09:52 pm Title: And the Winner Is...

wow, this is something else. I like the story. Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'll try!

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2005 - 04:35 pm Title: And the Winner Is...

i love it. more please.

Author's Response: Sure! lol. I'm working on it ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2005 - 02:13 pm Title: And the Winner Is...

i love it!! i absolutely agree with you in your plot line or what you're going to make out of this fic...loved your concept so glad this fic isn't that angsty and more banty funny kinda way (i think that's where it's going right? if not...then my mistake) anyhow, you're doing great...realllllyy hope you update soon cos i can't wait to know what happens next thanx so much

Author's Response: Ok, I'm going to have to warn you that it's still gonna be dark. But we'll see what happens next chapter :) Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Erin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2005 - 12:13 pm Title: And the Winner Is...

Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2005 - 11:50 am Title: And the Winner Is...

Well, I'm glad Spike won- Angelus would have broken her for sure. Now it's a matter of what Spike's going to do, since he might very well have the same agenda, without doing it as brutally. I like that you worked Illyria into it- she's a hard character to fit into an AU fic, but this one works perfectly. Can't wait to see what kind of Spuffy interaction you have planned for the next chapter. Update really soon :-)

Author's Response: Yea, I seemed to have made other people think he was nice or something? Good thing you are thinking on the right track as to not be outraged later. Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2005 - 11:44 am Title: And the Winner Is...

aww yay im so glad spike won, i hope hes kinda nice to herr atleast and i wonder wat happen to put her in the hospital. this is a great story, i love it and i cant wait to read more. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read the next chapter and see wat happens next thanx

Author's Response: First, sorry to confuse you - Buffy was bloody because it was her MOM'S blood. That was just her sitting in the hospital after they took her mom's body there. Second, I'll have to warn you that Spike is still not a good guy, even if he isn't as sadistic as Angelus. Thanks for the review

Reviewer: Allison Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2005 - 10:37 am Title: And the Winner Is...

Great chapter! I'm still awaiting what happened to Parker, but that can be put off for a while- I'm enjoying the Spike and Buffy interaction so far. Thank god he beat Angelus- that was fabulous:) Cordy creeped me out (and rightfully so), and it's kind of cool to see the women be so strong, even if they're scary LOL

Author's Response: Isn't it cool to have strong female characters? hehe. So basically I can count on you and Ashlee not to flame me right? lol. I hope you like/not hate the next chapter. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Cynthia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2005 - 10:06 am Title: And the Winner Is...

i really like this story, please update as soon as you can

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and I will!

Reviewer: Kimber Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2005 - 07:53 am Title: And the Winner Is...

Well it takes a good woman to make a man reach his potential. Let's see if Spike really wants to find out if there is life outiside his cruel world......and it be something he might enjoy.......

Author's Response: That's all true, but first, we have to see the extent of his cruel character :X Thanks for the review!

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