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Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2005 - 01:23 pm Title: Playing with Fire

wow that was really mean but kinda cute. i wass so smiling wen she hit him i new she had it in her. i really think that spike could be nicer but i realize that this is how the story goes and hopefully it will get better. i love this story so much and am so happy that u updated. i really hope that she learns to fight better and that she starts to like spike more and that they get together. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more and see wat happens next thanx

Author's Response: lol, yep - mean and cute, like Spike is bad but hot ;) Spike isn't nice because he's trying not to be. Soon you'll start seeing why. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: spikeslover Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2005 - 12:32 pm Title: Playing with Fire

still loving this. i love their interaction. Hope Buffy really kicks some ass soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Allison Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2005 - 10:55 am Title: Playing with Fire

I'm not worried about Buffy- she's a fighter and will handle whatever is thrown her way. Loved the fighting between her and Harmony- never liked her character and always wish Buffy would've just hit her around a whole bunch of times:) Cute dialogue between Darla and Eve, too! I'm kind of glad Buffy had the strength to try to get Spike away instead of just caving in, also. Good job with the pimping, my dear:) I can't wait to read what's next!

Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter! Yea, I didn't want Buffy to keep caving in, but her character (in the beg) didn't know what she is capable of. Obviously Spike sees something more ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2005 - 10:22 am Title: Playing with Fire

Wonderful! Buffyis starting to get to Spike and taking a little control here. DArk, yes, but necessary I think. Under the circumstances??? Oh, I am following your new site FFL! Luv, Spuf

Author's Response: Dark but necessary - good summarizing ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Forever Luv Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2005 - 09:16 am Title: Playing with Fire

Im liking it so far!!!! i wish Spike wasnt so much of a bastard.... hopefully you will get to that soon Good luck, Forever Luv

Author's Response: Spike will be a bastard for awhile - it's something that can't just change considering he's the leader. Thanks for following and reviewing!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2005 - 08:32 am Title: Playing with Fire

:-D With a bit help *hint - Spike* Buffy has a reason to fight... properly. Hopefully she'll get strong enough to survive in this group. And I hope at the end, she'll be strong enough to get some revenge for the murder of her mum. Prision for him would be a start - I don't mean her killing him.

Author's Response: Hehe, you make me want to jump ahead and write the end :P Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2005 - 08:08 am Title: Playing with Fire

Oh, but sometimes you have to hit rock bottom.....and then grow stronger on the climb up........for it can break you or make you stronger.....and in the end....I'm thinking they both will be stronger for it......and it will give Buffy the backbone to deal with her bastard of a father.......and Parker once and for all........If it don't kill ya, it can only make you stronger......

Author's Response: Exactly :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: B Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2005 - 05:49 am Title: Playing with Fire

Please Update Soon

Author's Response: I'll try :X Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Laine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2005 - 03:32 am Title: Playing with Fire

No! Of course I won't stop reading. That's when you know it's too good a story to put down. And I'm good with handling angst. I'm sure you'll make it worth the read so don't worry. I'm definitely not stopping. Wow. Love this chapter. Even if Buffy is starting to be what probably some of us are expecting. Great work. I'm also really glad that Buffy's finally starting to learn how to defend herself cause it's sad that she's being thrown around like a rage doll. Sorry, if I'm confusing. I'm basically that way. Don't worry. Angst and me are good. I won't stop reading no matter how dark this story gets. Thanks for sharing. And yay on you for shameless plugging. LOL.

Author's Response: Great! Glad you're sticking with it :D I think the darkness is part of the lure, but I understand your initial worry. I'll prove Buffy to be different, but it might not be obvious right away. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2005 - 02:20 am Title: Playing with Fire

good updates

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2005 - 02:07 am Title: Playing with Fire

Well, it's about time :-P Just kidding :-D Loved your little note about Spike in the summary- that cracked me up! And yay that Harmony got the brush off (literally)- that never gets old! I really liked the training (mainly Spike and Buffy because...well, it's hot). I see Buffy's evolution has started a little bit- can't wait to see what happens next. Is that hint too subtle? Because I'm sure you know you'll be getting nightly reminders :-) And shameless pimps are always of the good, in my book ;-)

Author's Response: You call ME greedy?? Practically demanded my beta to hurry up, lol. Well, I'm glad you liked it - otherwise, I might have had to hurt you in some way. And look at my smoothness with the banner insert ;) You could do that too, you know. Was that too subtle?

Reviewer: Forever Luv Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2005 - 09:31 pm Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel

Hey, Whats taking so long to update? I really liked this story and am ooking forward to reading more.... anyway, Good Luck Forever Luv

Author's Response: LOL, real life - got two jobs (one is only temporary). But, you're in luck cuz I just finished it the same day you submitted this. Enjoy!

Reviewer: sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2005 - 02:34 pm Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel

loving thestory but I love most of your stuff...can't wait to see how you redeem Spike.

Author's Response: It will come, I promise, but it's far away. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Forever Luv Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2005 - 09:53 pm Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel

I like it so far...i agree with you all the way about body reactions...... i just home you come with Spike's feelings for Buffy sooner that later.....and Buffy trusting him....well good luck Forever Luv

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Laine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2005 - 03:45 pm Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel

I hope Buffy doesn't become this cold-hearted bitch or else she wouldn't be any different from the other girls there that Spike's spent time with. I mean, he liked her from the start for a reason, right? And please don't make Buffy go to the dark side cause that would be really bad. Buf if you're planning something, okay. LOL. I mean, if it's part of the story, well okay no flame. And it's your story so I can't really do anything about it. But still, loved this chapter. Great work, PJ. But why are there flashbacks almost everytime they have sex? Oh, and I'm really loathing Spike right now. LOL. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Sorry Laine! Darkness is ahead! I'll make it better in the end. Thanks for reviewing! (and I'll understand if you stop reading)

Reviewer: lindsay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2005 - 10:56 pm Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel

i wonder if it was Angel and his gang that messed up Spikes two jobs? So Buffy reminds him of Dru maybe? He seems to have a "weaker" spot for the both of them. Great update, def worth the wait and im excited for the next! Good Job!

Author's Response: Glad it was worth the wait! I'll try to be better about updates :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2005 - 09:18 pm Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel

I know its a story and that Spike is all mean and harsh, but damn, even mean and harsh he melts socks! Great chap, I thought for minute there buffy was gonna try and bargain with her overheard knowledge (maybe next time - might earn her some points with the Big Bad). Still Hate Angel in any characterization (it's a mental block I have). I'm still hoping he doesn't get his hands on Buffy. This tale rocks and I love everything about it so far. Love how all the characters seem to have some of their original (series) personality traits (Darla so "regally" condescending, Faith so cocky and kinda fun (even while being scary), Cordy such a cross between nice and bitch, and Illyria so cold and unemotional... they really fit. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: LMAO. I couldn't stop laughing at "melts socks!" I'm glad you liked the characters :D Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2005 - 05:21 pm Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel

awww how sadi really dont like that spikes so agressive but i understand its part of the story and that it will hopefully get better. i love this storyt and am so happy that u updated. i really enjoyed reading this chapter. i hope that buffy tells spike of wat she heard lindsey said andi that she learns to love spike and spike love her. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more and see wat happens next thanx. also i cant wait to read the update of an alternate attraction i love that story thanx

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! -the happy ending is far away, but it wouldn't be any fun if it came too soon ;)

Reviewer: spikeslover Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2005 - 03:01 pm Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel

loving this fic. i hope Buffy gets to kick some ass soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Allison Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2005 - 02:13 pm Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel

I'm happy Spike talked to the girls about hitting Buffy- that's a step in the right direction, I think. That sucks about Angelus' plan, but that just adds more to the plotline. I just don't want him to step in and think he can control Buffy, too. But she's not losing her edge or fighting heart yet, so that's a good sign. She'll survive this, emotional scars and all

Author's Response: She's headed for darkness, though. I guess you could still call that edge ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2005 - 11:09 am Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel

Awe, update! You're welcome :) So the attack happened - and nobody knows you did it - except Buffy. And Spike gets a bit softer when Buffy is concerned, huh? ;-) Looking forward to the training.

Author's Response: Thanks :D

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2005 - 10:23 am Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel

Aaah, peer pressure does get results :-) Love the title of this chapter, by the way- very fitting. And you can really tell Buffy's slow change and Spike's very subtle feelings. Now, when can we expect the next chapter ;-) I'm sure you'll be hearing from me later today LOL!

Author's Response: Glad you liked the title ;) Took me a while to think of it...repeat after me: beating pj up for chapters is wrong!!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2005 - 10:18 am Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel

And the reluctant softening begins......Poor Spike, always the lover never the loved.......LOL

Author's Response: So true! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Tam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2005 - 09:57 am Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel

just got caught up and love love LOVE this fic!! but then i guess i'm just a sickie coz I think mean Spike is soooo HOT lol

Author's Response: Thank you! Don't worry - bad ass Spike IS hot!

Reviewer: Carrosparro Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2005 - 09:01 am Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel

I love it!!! =D Pretty please update soon`?

Author's Response: I'll try! Thanks for the review!

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