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Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2005 - 12:00 am Title: 34

You have turned dead beat Hank into such a fun and pleasant character. It's nice to see Buffy as a "daddy's girl" for a change. And him and Spike getting along, quite priceless. I also think its pretty cool that Joyce is taking the nonwedding so well. Good for all of them. Update soon!

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 11:58 pm Title: 34

Have to say this is one of the only stories that ever had me liking the character of Hank. His dialog and interactions with the Summers women are priceless. You've made him a "real" original and a scene stealer to boot. Great job!!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 11:02 pm Title: 34

Yes, please welcome to the family! No jilted single mom break-ups!! Love the chapter!! Gimme more please!

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 10:42 pm Title: 34

Thank you! I so needed a good laugh! And can't wait to see how Spike & Buffy work everything out.

Reviewer: Jen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 10:33 pm Title: 34

Yeah! I'm so glad you responded that this isn't ending so soon - I'm so excited. Another great chapter - I liked how easy the family talked now that Harmony's out of the way. I can't wait until Buffy & Spike finish the earlier conversation as well.

Reviewer: Mockerfab4 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 10:26 pm Title: 34

Such a cute chapter. Very rare that in fanfics, Hank is likeable. I really like him in this story and even Joyce has her good qualities. Great writing and looking forward to more. Thanks. =)

Reviewer: Kattie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 09:52 pm Title: 34

I like that buffy has a great relationship w/ her dad.. it reminds me of how my dad and i act together. it's sweet. i luv this fic, plz update soon again!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 09:50 pm Title: 34

This is probably the only story where I actually like Hank. He was funny in this chapter. I really hope they won't end their engagement. They could just try it out and maybe that would lead to marriage. Buffy needs to be more confident that it would work out. Another amazing chapter=)

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 09:50 pm Title: 34

great update but i hope that they dont break up

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 09:19 pm Title: 34

Aww! What a sweet chapter - I'm so glad that Spike's being accepted as part of the family now! Can't wait for more of this amazing fic, so please update soon!

Reviewer: Reciprocity Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 09:16 pm Title: 34

You write Hank perfectly, i love how you set up a relationship between him and Spike, it's so adorable. Makes me all mushy. This chapter was great, i lik ehow Buffy is being recognized as an person by her mom more and more, nice evolution. Take care , excellent work my friend!

Author's Response: I like Hank too. He's fun to write. Thank you for the review! :)

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 05:42 pm Title: 33

Aw, great chapter. I absolutely love their conversations, just as much as the nonverbal parts. =)

Reviewer: fa sai Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 05:21 pm Title: 33

I'm so glad that there's more to come. Beeing in Europe, I rush to my notebook every morning to check for a new chapter. But I'm dreading the desasters you might have in store for Buffy and Spike. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 03:50 pm Title: 33

Awwww...sweet sex...jealous Spike...well, and jealous Buffy, but jealous Spike is hot =) Good chapter...although I can't help but wonder when the Big Foot Of Doom is gonna come crashing down on the couple and make everything a mess again, lol. Keep it up!

Reviewer: dreamgirl4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 01:22 pm Title: 33

damn thats a cheesy line!

Reviewer: spikeslover Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 10:59 am Title: 33

aw, i loved it, so hot, yet so fluffy. please update soon!

Reviewer: Spikes Eternal Lover Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 10:27 am Title: 33

that was a large chunk of camembert. but the good thing is, i love camembert. ergo, i loved the last two chapters. --xXx--

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 09:22 am Title: 33

I really enjoy their need to work through insecurities and jealousy. It makes the relationship more natural. The dialogue was excellent, as usual.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 05:54 am Title: 33

TNX God for luch-breaks ;-) I read it then. Lovely how they spoke about their unsecurites - and hopefully overcome them.

Reviewer: PLacidTurmoil Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 05:08 am Title: 33

Absolutely Love ur fic.

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 02:03 am Title: 33

very sweet, loving, realistic quesioning his past chapter....

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 01:58 am Title: 33

WOW!!!! i missed so many chapters!!!! totally love the updates!!! and yay for Jonathan and Fred!!!

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 01:30 am Title: 33

Awww...sweet chapter and very hot...yummy with the naked Spikey goodness....and I felt a little like Buffy in that insecurity speech...poor girl...I totally know what that's like...I only wish I had a guy like Spike...oh well....can't wait for another!!!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 12:31 am Title: 33

Ahhhh, that was some sweet spuffy lovin' - thanks! So is this the calm before another storm or are we coming to a peaceful ending? I hope there still much more to come cause you've left chaos at the house, a baby (that's not Spike's) in the oven and a wedding consultant that's just too much fun not to visit again and again and again! More please.?!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2005 - 12:04 am Title: 33

And so all is right with the world. I wonder what enormous catastrophe will inevitably arrise next, because the calm, never lasts for very long. I think it's truly wonderful that they are working well past their own insecurities and jealousies in order to be honest with each other. One can never underestimate the importance of honesty. Beautiful chapter. Update soon!

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