[Report This]Date: 06/21/2005 - 08:22 pm Title: The map of honor
Oh am so glad Xander kicked his ass! Will is falling some kinda hard for Buffy, but the queston is 'How are you gonna bring them toghether?'. I am so glad you updated, dying for more! Post real soon! Kuddos!
[Report This]Date: 06/21/2005 - 07:56 pm Title: The map of honor
absolutely loved it and i love the chemistry that is building up betweeen buffy and mr. stevenson
[Report This]Date: 06/21/2005 - 07:47 pm Title: The map of honor
Love the possible baby names--and the ones she ruled out... LOL And go AU Xander being a decent guy. Guess he has to get it right somewhere. ;) Liked the Riley ass-kicking, as usual, especially Will's little part in it. Very good little chapter, managing to show how things are going for Buffy at school and move her just a little bit closer to Will at the same time. Well worth the wait!
[Report This]Date: 06/21/2005 - 07:47 pm Title: The map of honor
Awwww I love this he cares about her so much! Can't wait for them to get together. It's just so sweet :)
Date: 05/25/2005 - 10:25 pm Title: Through a mirror clear
I keep to what i said before keep up with the stories and keep writting this story is excellent especially the poem in chapter 2 I loved it : ) ;)
Date: 05/25/2005 - 10:22 pm Title: Through a mirror clear
your really good its excellent keep up with the stories and keep wrighting :)
Date: 05/25/2005 - 07:12 pm Title: There's two words to that bargain
Goody, another chapter! I liked it a lot, especially the Spike thinking about Buffy at the end. It was really cute.
Date: 05/23/2005 - 07:12 pm Title: There's two words to that bargain
I love this chapter! And hahaha Buffy stuck it to them! hehehe Keep 'em coming, please!
Date: 05/23/2005 - 01:11 pm Title: There's two words to that bargain
Oh my - poor Buffy. Feeling so ill now and than Riley and her father coming with the plan of killing her baby.... Poor one.. and it seems they won't give up their plan. Awe, and Spike has fallen deep for Buffy, huh? Thinking of her when being on a date with another woman. Good plan though setting her up with Giles ;-)
Date: 05/23/2005 - 09:52 am Title: There's two words to that bargain
Oh gods those days of sickness, UGHHHHH thank goddess they are gone forever. What the fuck do the Finn men think they are doing? I mean because is all uniform man that he can boss other people around besides his comrades and family. Give me a fuckn break. Joyce might be a drunkn mom,but she still cares for her daughter in some twisted way. I was very glad to see her sticking up to him and not letting him intimidate her. Grrrrrrrrrrrr so if these chapters are for Addie then does this mean Riley gets thrown out of airplane at West Point jump school without the parachute *laughs insanely* great chapter nia. Poor Will just losing his mind needs to have the Buffy with him.
Date: 05/23/2005 - 06:38 am Title: There's two words to that bargain
LOL regroup and rethink current strategy. Like father like son. =)
Date: 05/23/2005 - 03:10 am Title: There's two words to that bargain
Death to Kevin and Riley Finn, LOL Cool with Will and Jenny.......and I think that baby is going to be very loved by Daddy William.........
Date: 05/23/2005 - 01:54 am Title: There's two words to that bargain
Well the Finn's are so on my pooh-pooh list! I can't believee the nerve. I so can't wait to see the spuffy relationship you create out of this situation. More please!!!! Kuddos!
Date: 05/23/2005 - 01:34 am Title: There's two words to that bargain
loved it!! just hope riley gets out of the picture soon...grrr i can0t stand him...neither he nor his father...just missed some spuffy interaction on this chapter...well...hope you update soon...thanx!!
Date: 05/22/2005 - 11:45 pm Title: There's two words to that bargain
Wish you could just get Buffy and Will together now but I know it's going to take some time. Can't we just get rid of that pig Riley though? Shoot him, blow him up, I don't care.
Date: 05/22/2005 - 11:28 pm Title: There's two words to that bargain
Well, know we know where Riley got his jerk genes!! Man! Hmm, Joyce is leaving for a week? Do we get some Spuffyness then?? Hopefully?? Hehe!
Date: 05/22/2005 - 09:57 pm Title: There's two words to that bargain
Joyce should have thrown the General threw the door. And Riley should have some of his monthly pay to the baby, more when and if he makes rank. And he should be fixed like a puppy. Riley will never be an officer and a gentleman. Keep writing love this story.
Date: 05/22/2005 - 09:55 pm Title: There's two words to that bargain
great update and i cant wait to see spike and buffy see each other again and maybe she could get some more advice from him
Date: 05/22/2005 - 09:05 pm Title: There's two words to that bargain
I have to say up front that I really rarely bother to read “all human” types of stories. They’re often poorly written, and frequently the characters are totally unrecognizable. Frankly the only reason I read this story—at least in the beginning-- is that I’m so impressed with “origins” and it’s sequel. I’ve been very much enjoying this story. Admittedly Buffy and Spike are pretty out of character here, but this story is so well written and enthralling it’s hooked me anyway. Have you given any thought to writing fiction? I mean as opposed to fan-fiction. This is such a well written, moving story that I’d bet you could easily re-write it as original fiction. Though I have to say it’s entertaining to watch where the various “Buffy” characters show up!
Author's Response: I don't normally write fanfiction; most of my writings are original.
Date: 05/22/2005 - 08:44 pm Title: There's two words to that bargain
more plz
Date: 05/22/2005 - 08:39 pm Title: There's two words to that bargain
Oh god, I have a bad, bad feeling about the General's determination. *whimpers* I can just see his next move as being contacting a lawyer. What a bastard. Like Father like son, eh? Wonderful chapter sweetie! I'm loving the way you have Spike and Buffy both whistfully thinking of each other. And the way you are presenting Buffy's pregnancy, with stark realism, is fantastic! I can' t wait to see Jenny and Rupert meet, and if Will hear's about the General's proposition to Buffy. Grrr arrrgh, that man is evil! Great chapter sweetie! Hope you have a good week!
Date: 05/22/2005 - 08:24 pm Title: Some comfort here
Loved it! Can't wait to read more :)
Date: 05/22/2005 - 08:18 pm Title: There's two words to that bargain
Oh where to begin? Kevin Finn thought that it was what, an act of genius, for him to suggest an abortion? How lame is he? Now, if he'd have Riley sign off on his parental rights, now that would be a really good thing (*grin*). Joyce is going to come around, I'm sure, because if there's one thing Joyce hates (I'm guessing), it's for someone else to tell her daughter what she should be doing... Can't wait for more. Hope that Will and Buffy can begin to move past their student/teacher relationship.
Date: 05/22/2005 - 07:56 pm Title: There's two words to that bargain
My fault, huh? I told you, it was the bunny... My fault... Anyway, enjoyed the chapter. Favorite line: "She never even looked at Riley, deciding that looking at him might not help her upset stomach." Right with you there, Buff. Riley makes me a little ill, too... Poor Buffy though, and the stupid Finn's stupid offer. Coming in in his military garb like that. Ugh. Joyce should've thrown something, and not when the door was closed.. I got a giggle out of poor Will trying to have a date. He should just give it up and accept his fate.
Author's Response: It is your fault and you know it. That plot bunny would never have been fed if it hadn't been for you. Poor Will had to try. . . at least once.
Date: 05/22/2005 - 10:24 am Title: Some comfort here
I like how the story is going so far. I kinda wish that Spike would give in to reality and finally admit his feelings to himself. I am also hoping for BUffy to get a bit stronger because this is only the beginning of the things she has to get through. Anyway I'm always looking forward to updates. You've got a great plot going.
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