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Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2008 - 07:25 am Title: Chapter 1

Very funny! You made me laugh :) I hope the punctuation monster stays away from my computer ;)

Author's Response: my poor husband ( who wrote this and Beta's all my work) swears it livs in my computer:)

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2008 - 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

clever concept

Author's Response: Born of desperation :-) Thanks, Hrolf

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2008 - 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

That's a very unique idea. I'm loving this story to bits! :D

Author's Response: Many thanks. I do other stuff elsewhere... Hrolf

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2008 - 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my god... you have to finish this!!!! Don't leave us hanging! Please say this isn't the end! *cry profusely* This was a brilliant idea hun, I giggled all the way through it!

Author's Response: Don't cry too much, you'll get water in the keyboard and then it all comes true :-) Hrolf (more answer coming)

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2008 - 01:42 am Title: Chapter 1

At first I thought you were making lots of spellingmistakes - until my thick head caught on ; ) Wonder what the virus will do if left unchecked. Fun concept.

Author's Response: Ah: got it right, did I? Glad you enjoyed. Hrolf

Reviewer: jnharrow Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2008 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is really funny. Oh, the horrors of lost punctuation!

I did get a little confused where Buffy is talking to Spike and then is at Tara's door, thinking maybe something got cut, but maybe it was intentional: Buffy shook her head. “sOmeth;in'g wi,erd mustf iNd Wil;Ler come in,” said Tara, taking the slayer's elbow and guiding her gently to a settee. “What is it?”


Author's Response: Having Beta'd so many, I just couldn't hold it in any more :-) Yes, you missed a bit: we had to re-post so it might be worth checking again. Not a lot in between and nothing you can't work out from what you have got... Regards, Hrolf

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2008 - 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh that was fun. *on to the next part*

Author's Response: Unless you got the goofed-up version, that was all there is... might be worth checking. Many thanks, Hrolf

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