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Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 11:52 am Title: Prologue

They let her just take a dying baby out of the hospital? Or is Buffy that disturbed....?

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 06:07 am Title: Prologue

Duh.. found your site (and your LJ but you're F-Only but I see you don't post the story there) and I remember now that I saw your story (Here without you) at Spuffyfantasy.. *cough it is still on my to read list*
But now to the new one:
I like Spike being a doctor, precisely a Pediatric Heart Surgeon.
And then the first meeting between William and Elizabeth. The thought that Buffy's baby is about to die (why by the way? But I think it will be revealed later) makes me sad. No mother (parents) should have to suffer this. *sniff* And even if it is dangerous to be outside in the rain with a baby for said baby, I love the thought why she is doing it for Lilly. A very sad begin but a very moving chapter. Looking forward to read more of it. So more please :)

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2006 - 11:41 am Title: Prologue

Fantastic start!! So heartbreaking.

Reviewer: Spikesgurl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2006 - 02:00 am Title: Prologue

Lovely, poignant start. I'm really looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: spikes_cj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2006 - 09:11 pm Title: Prologue

OMG... why could you do this to me?? You can't make me cry in the prologue of the darn story! *swipes at tears*

Seriously, I had no idea you wrote fanfic. I am absolutely loving this so far. I read a lot of fiction, and this is unlike anything I've ever read before. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: LOL! I didn't know you read fanfic :-) I don't write that much...only when I get an idea and it won't go away...kinda like this! We need to talk soon...Flan is only a little more than a month away!!!!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2006 - 06:04 pm Title: Prologue

What's wrong with Lilly? Update soon please!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2006 - 05:54 pm Title: Prologue

loved it. great start. please post soon.

Reviewer: ELLIE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2006 - 04:58 pm Title: Prologue

It was amazing and I really want to read the rest! Update soon

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2006 - 04:41 pm Title: Prologue

How sad. Please update soon!

Reviewer: cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2006 - 04:30 pm Title: Prologue

Oh, I am so excited! Can't wait for more! I've read one of your other stories, and it's one of my very favorite AUs.

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I assume you're talking about "Here without you" I was actually thinking about posting that on here but I can't decide if I want to do that or not. Since it's based on a movie...I don't how well that would go over.

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2006 - 02:52 pm Title: Prologue

i loved buffy in the rain. Her pain was palpable, yet not "screamed" as it could have been... (hope i made myself clear...)

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2006 - 02:21 pm Title: Prologue

Wow. Excellent beginning--poor Buffy! I wonder what her story is. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: bob Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2006 - 01:51 pm Title: Prologue

totally ditto to everything angi has said!!

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2006 - 01:50 pm Title: Prologue

Heart-wrenching. Anyone unaffected by your first chapter has a heart of stone. Go on soon.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2006 - 01:45 pm Title: Prologue

great story so far

Reviewer: melissa b Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2006 - 01:00 pm Title: Prologue

i really like this story so far

i feel sorry for th baby tho

cant wait for a update and i hope it will be soon

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