Date: 09/13/2005 - 02:29 am Title: Second
Okay, I just have to say I love how you've used Andrew. He's both the catalyst that gets things going, but he's also just enough comic relief to keep the angst at the perfect level. Like this line I just love. “Well, okay,” Buffy conceded. “Maybe Andrew is sorry. " On to read more.
Date: 09/04/2005 - 10:26 pm Title: Second
The emotion in this chapter is so over whelming, I know Buffy semmed a cow with the way she treated Spike at times with using him but I did wonder at the last episode if she had meant that she loved Spike when she told him, in some ways I really think she did but in others I think she only said it because she thought thats what he would have wanted to hear and because he was going to die. I really hope she did and does love him. Absolutely fantastic chapter.
Date: 09/03/2005 - 10:11 am Title: Second
You updated here too - will read here while I'm here :) It's not good again (Spike still dead is sad), but at last Buffy did take consequence and is gone. They did decide what's best for her - again. Without questioning her first. Not the best kind to do something when you call yourself a friend. :)
Date: 09/01/2005 - 10:59 pm Title: Second
finally, buffy tells those wankers off. loved it. great job. post soon.
Date: 09/01/2005 - 05:41 pm Title: Second
good update
Date: 09/01/2005 - 03:46 pm Title: Second
i'm really intrested in seeing where this lead s. I loved the Immortal’s head in a bag. Just where it should be. :)
Date: 09/01/2005 - 03:17 pm Title: Second
Oh, my......more please.......Buffy should set the place on fire.......where is Dawn while all this is going on?.....
Date: 09/01/2005 - 01:22 pm Title: Second
Your story is bringing into the spotlight something that remained in the shadows in Series 5, 6 and 7 and yet had been so glaringly obvious to all of us out here: Spike had been selfless and life-enhancing and life-saving of Buffy (and Dawn) for a very long time. Finally, the girl has lift the blinkers and grown a pair; this is cathartic, dramatic writing. Run with it, go you!
Date: 09/01/2005 - 12:08 pm Title: Second
About f*cking time.. Oh this is just, wonderful. really . . . I'm so glad she walked away from them. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 09/01/2005 - 12:02 pm Title: Second
wow. i am already hooked , wonderful .
Date: 09/01/2005 - 09:10 am Title: Second
Great story! I am glad that you decided to continue it and posted it here! I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon! **Stupid Scoobies!**