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Categories: General NC-17 Fics
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Genres: Romance
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93184
Date: 09/17/2004 Title: Chapter 4: Pools Of Desire
I'm really enjoying this story. There's a lot of stories out there about Spike and Buffy being "mated," but you seem to be doing it in a new and interesting way. One little nit-picky thing, and this is just the Brit Lit major in me... In 1880--when Spike was turned--most of England was NOT Catholic, but Anglican. As a matter of fact, the Catholics were a marginalized group, with laws put in place to keep them out of government, etc. Also, you had to swear to being a member of the Church of England in order to go to university, which William most likely did. While it's possible that he could've been Catholic, it would have been more likely that he would've been Anglican. Anyway, I doubt you care, I just wanted to point that out. And great story. I'm really enjoying the read!
Date: 09/17/2004 Title: Chapter 6: Ask me no Questions
Still really enjoying it. I like that you don't have Buffy and Spike giving into their bond completely immediately, but making them fight the emotional implications a bit instead. I think it makes it more true to Spike and Buffy. One more little nit-picky thing. Spike keeps calling himself a "nonce." "Nonce" is a derogatory term, but it means basically "pedophile." Do you mean "ponce" by chance? That's a term Spike uses a lot...
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Date: 03/04/2005 Title: None
I don't really want to judge on whether or not you purposely plagerized anything since I don't know the whole situation, but personally I'm a little shocked that even if you didn't plagerize on purpose that you at the very least had someone else write scenes for you without admitting you were doing that. Speaking as someone who puts a lot of effort into every scene I write, I find that a little insulting. Even if some of it was yours you claimed credit--and awards--for fics that were not 100% your work. Furthermore, even if the plagerism was unintentional, it's still your fault. You should've paid more attention to what you were posting, and not accepted scenes from such an apparently unreliable source.. What you've done, regardless of whether or not you meant to, was a violation to Kantayra and an insult to every single author who writes completely original stories. Taking credit for something that isn't yours--even with permission from the original author--is wrong. If you can't write sex scenes, then you shouldn't write them. End of story.
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
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Genres: Action
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 144089
Date: 02/26/2005 Title: Chapter 50: The girl from all those songs
Angel's a moron with a one-track mind...what else is new? lol Loved the part with Dawn and Spike...the chicken wings and him tying her hair in a knot. Great. Looking forward to the Buffy and Angel confrontation you've had me wondering about for weeks. :)
Date: 03/01/2005 Title: Chapter 51: Words like violence
You tell 'im, Buffy. Well, you know my thoughts on Angel, so there's not much to say here other than I think you did a wonderful job. And I almost feel a little bad for Willow, although not so much because she did it to herself. Good bit with Anya, too. Makes sense that she'd figure it out.
Categories: General Fics
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Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129086
Date: 05/28/2005 Title: Chapter 15: 15
“But the thing that really bugs me?” The pause had him leaning forward slightly, waiting on the wisp of a girl with the power to dust him to smithereens. “You have really stupid hair.” That's great. And oh so true. I mean, why is hair that sticks straight up in the air supposed to be attractive? Anyway, you've still got a reader in me. I can live with a little angst--after all, what are Spike and Buffy without it? Great chapter. Loved Buffy telling Spike she's his girl...
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Date: 03/05/2005 Title: None
You have a loyal reader in me. I'm so sorry to hear you're going through all that. Don't worry about your fic. You have enough to deal with as it is. I love your writing, and I'll be happy to see it whenever you have time and energy for it.
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
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Genres: Romance
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44987
Date: 03/25/2005 Title: Chapter 22: chapter 22
Angel and Xander busting in can never be of the good... Loving the fic so far (even though I know I've been a slacker about reviews... *hangs head in shame*) Looking forward to the next part of this whole confrontation. Spike's comment about wanting to hear more about the facial deformity made me chuckle.
Categories: General Fics
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Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations
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Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 53539
Date: 03/21/2005 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I really like your take on the whole end of the series. Personally, I had a hard time buying that Angel had completely nobel intentions, and I'm interested in seeing where you're going to take this. I especially had a hard time dealing with the death of Drogan, and I'm glad you mentioned that. Even if Angel was trying to get in with the Circle in order to take them down, killing a warrior like that didn't seem like an action that should ever be acceptable if you're the Champion Angel is purported to be.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Addie! The end of season 5 just really didn't sit well with me in terms of Angel's actions--I don't know if it was rushed because of the cancellation or just not very well thought-out, but there were several little asides and seemingly throw-away bits that hinted at something much much darker. Fred being a sacrifice being one of these, of course, but particularly Angel's murder of Drogyn. There was no real way to justify that--in canon explanations of his actions or not--as something fitting or appropriate. To my mind, Angel didn't have good intentions... and it would be hard to convince me otherwise, really, so the fic is going to follow me down that path.
I'm so glad that you're enjoying... thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! :o)
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult Language
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46911
Date: 04/03/2005 Title: Chapter 5: 5
“Okay, this is the plan. You hold the cross against the naked couple while I throw the blanket over Spike. You push him out while I guard our backs. Got it?" LOL Great plan, that. I just started this story today, and I'm enjoying it quite a bit. I have a soft spot for season 2 fics anyway, and this one is a new take on them. I can't wait to see where you take it.
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 322050
Date: 03/18/2005 Title: Chapter 3: Indiscreet questions and answers
Dawn knows the truth now. Is she planning on telling anyone? I'm interested to see how Spike and Buffy react. Loved the bit with Casey, especially how he reacted to the name "Spike." lol The whole interaction between Casey and Spike reminded me of my own high school dating days. I liked how Casey didn't flinch, but was just respectful. And bad Willow. Bad.
Date: 04/04/2005 Title: Chapter 8: Tomorrow's questions
Poor Buffy. Spike needs to heal magically so he can give her a hug. lol Another one that pulls at the emotions, Nia. Looking forward to seeing how everything will be resolved...
Date: 06/03/2005 Title: Chapter 19: Knowledge is power
Well, Rupert dropped quite the bomb there on Buffy. Looking forward to seeing how she reacts. Dawn is such a teenager. lol Even with all the weirdness around her, she manages to remain true to her age group. Love the last scene with Angelus and Willow. You write Angelus so well. All psycho and overly chatty. LOL Great chapter again, Nia. ;)
Date: 09/20/2005 Title: Chapter 34: Two hearts beat as one
I love the little bit of domestic bliss there. Cute and hot scene at the beginning. And Buffy finally told everyone she's pregnant. Yay! Everyone's reaction was spot on. Love Oz banging the table...
Date: 12/06/2006 Title: Chapter 69: A doubtful choice
You mean being with Spike isn't Heaven? :P
Categories: NC-17 Fics
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Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139795
Date: 09/22/2005 Title: Chapter 21: She's a little runaway
No! No review when you right angst! I refuse to...oh, wait...I guess I am reviewing. Never mind... So Willow knows now. She took it well. heh Poor Buffy... My heart was aching for her all alone and suffering like that. Hope Will finds her soon. Good thing he's got a psychic on his side.
Date: 10/06/2005 Title: Chapter 22: Hell is living without you
That was an emotional chapter...Reading about Buffy's state about made me cry...And Will's determination to find her. But now she's finally there, and he can take care of her, make her not leave. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for a bit of happy, but these last few chapters have been filled with beautiful angst. I loved the bit with Gina and how kind she was to Buffy.
Categories: General Fics
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Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32326
Date: 07/27/2005 Title: Chapter 11: 11
I'm still here. Loving this fic. This line is great: "He looked so cute, like a little boy who’d had his favourite teddy shelved for bad behaviour." That's so Spike. lol Loved the bit with Buffy feeding him, and Anya's comments. Great chapter.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Violence, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5500
Date: 05/24/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Twist of Triangle
Hey, it's a episode re-write that hasne't been over done! I always liked this episode, and I'm enjoying your spuffy twist. And this line: "Nobody gave him any big manly weapons like an enchanted hammer." That's great. Keept making me giggle...
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Violence, Adult Language, Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56979
Date: 06/18/2005 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I like it. More please. Just kidding. ;) Although I do like it and do want more... lol I really like what you've done with Spike. There are too many stories out there where he's still completely evil, but all it takes is a kiss from Buffy to make him a defender of Christmas and puppies. If you're going to have a pre-chip Spike, you have to make him still a killer, and make any transformation believable, which you've been doing here. Makes the story so much more enjoyable when people take the time to remember Spike's a vampire and not a big, cuddly teddy bear... I like the little glimpses you've been giving us into Buffy's pre-Spike life, and I'm looking forward to seeing how that develops. This fic is one of my favorite current WIP's.
Author's Response: Glad you like it, and thanks for the review. This Spike is deffinatly going to remain vampiric for the time being.
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Date: 09/25/2006 Title: None
Plagerism is plagerism, and I don't feel comfortable with a known plagerist on the site. You can claim it was "unintentional" all you want, but you ripped lines, scenes, and even the title itself. I'm not buying your story about it being "accidental," and I don't think you've earned the benefit of the doubt. For those of us who work hard to come up with ORIGINAL storylines, I find what you've done appauling, and I'm not happy to see you continue to post.
I don't know if I'm in the majority here or not, but that's how I feel about plagerism under any circumstance. It is never acceptable, and I don't think it's something that should just be immediately forgiven. By lying about that story being yours, you betrayed everyone on this site, and that's not something an "I'm sorry" is going to change.
Plagerism is more than stealing a story word for word. Sometimes, plots are simliar, but when scenes mirror each other this strongly, it's nothing but intentional, and there is not a thing you can say to convince me otherwise. You lied to your readers, you betrayed--and stole from--a fellow writer, and that is something that shouldn't be tolerated on this site or any other.
So no, I will not be supporting this story or any of your other "works."
Categories: Plagiarism
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Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 53
Date: 12/03/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Teacher's Pet
Pari hasn't done anything wrong here. Plagerism occured, and she made a notice about it, the way she has before. Sadly, it can't be proven if the woman is alive or dead, and it really doesn't affect a heads up about there being plagerism. If she isn't dead, then the notice serves a purpose, and if she is, it doesn't change anything. And no, it isn't murder, but plagerism is still a big deal. When you have your words stolen, you feel violated, "just the internet" or not.
This is Pari's site, and this is how she chooses to handle plagerism. If you have a problem with that, then you can go to another site. There's no reason to jump all over her case about it.
Author's Response: No worries Addie, I'm like a duck in water, these sort of things just roll off me :) But thanks for the support, and understanding and abiding by the rule. There aren't that many I just don't know why some have such a hard time with them.
Categories: General Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42001
Date: 05/29/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One
I'm so happy to see this finally posted! It's such a cute little fic, and a nice look at how their future could turn out to be. Sweet and still hot after all that time. I'm really looking forward to seeing more fics from you. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for all your support. I truly appreciate it.
Categories: General NC-17 Fics
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst
Warnings: Adult Language
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 158891