Date: 03/05/2007 - 08:08 am Title: Justice turns the scale
Whoops! Posted this on chapter 52 by accident, meant it to be on 73.
I generally stay away from WIP's, because I can't stand to wait for the author to update; I like to read the whole story at once. I've had to make an exception for Origins, because this story is - in a word - fantastic. You've done an amazing job building realistic relationships between the characters, and even your OC's are fully formed. I do have one concern, though... You still update slower than I can read : )
Date: 03/02/2007 - 07:34 pm Title: Justice turns the scale
How will Willow's sentence manifest itself? I'm looking forward to fonding out.
Date: 02/28/2007 - 12:35 pm Title: Justice turns the scale
oh gods that made my day my dearest sister. Gods i love how you weave your story onto the screen and make it so real to me, that I feel the emotions and grandeur of all the characters.
Anya is so great, telling Giles how it will be when they first have sex. Look out world that day.
You gave me tears as Rianwyn told her story *sighs*.
I think the Fey judged Willow well. Though I was looking for her to have death. I think this will be torture enough for her to have watch all her "friends" seek the happiness they are deserve. All that she will never be able to grasp. I believe that I know who will recieve her gifts and use them wisely.
Though I will be sad when this ends. It has been a long road to travel with you on this journey. Though the road is not ending, merely taking another path that will lead to more stories. Cause you know I do love your stories *giggles*.
Date: 02/27/2007 - 09:35 pm Title: Justice turns the scale
If you have a goal, you fight harder. Just like Spike does.
Awe, and the version, this was Connor, right? Not so much a baby. Another champion. Another story. ...
*sniff* Rianwyn. I guess what happened to her was a long time ago, but it ain't forgotten.
So Willow will get free (some day). Her life is spared but release comes not, until the last of your betrayed is at peace. Maybe she'll use the time and hopefully will see what she did wrong.
~ Happy to see the new chapter :)
Date: 02/27/2007 - 05:47 pm Title: Justice turns the scale
Great update; I'm mixed about seeing ths go, becuase it's a great story but I want to know how it ends!! :) Thanks for sharing.
Date: 02/27/2007 - 02:18 pm Title: Justice turns the scale
Ooh, another chapter :P This was kinda trilling, maybe not the best word for it but I can't find better one just now. :)
Date: 02/27/2007 - 01:00 pm Title: Justice turns the scale
still reading and loving this fic.
Date: 02/27/2007 - 11:05 am Title: Justice turns the scale
Another great chapter. And a great quote from Det. Pembleton.
Date: 02/27/2007 - 10:07 am Title: Justice turns the scale
Oh wow Willows finally getting her just reward. I can't wait to find out what it means in practice. To be stripped of her powers would be a fitting punishment. The master manipulator devoid of her ability to control. She''ll go mad. More please.
Date: 02/27/2007 - 07:55 am Title: Justice turns the scale
Fantastic updates!! And wow, what an ender to this chapter!! Can't wait for another one!!
Date: 02/27/2007 - 06:42 am Title: Justice turns the scale
Great chapter!! As always, looking forward to more!!
Date: 02/27/2007 - 12:32 am Title: Justice turns the scale
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!! I can't wait for Willow's reaction! I am so curious as to WHO these people are that Spike has been with and who Buffy has been with I am going to have to comb history and myth i think to figure it out! I love how you have handled everything! I am curious to see if Xander reacts anymore and I am so hopeful for Giles and Anya! GREAT CHAPTER~!!!! thank you!
Date: 02/27/2007 - 12:14 am Title: Justice turns the scale
Great chapter nia.
Date: 02/26/2007 - 10:55 pm Title: Justice turns the scale
So, she's powerless and alone until the others have moved on to being happy? Or is "at peace" mean "at rest"?
Good to see Spike and Lawson on the move again.