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Reviewer: Chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2007 - 08:08 am Title: Justice turns the scale

Whoops! Posted this on chapter 52 by accident, meant it to be on 73.

I generally stay away from WIP's, because I can't stand to wait for the author to update; I like to read the whole story at once. I've had to make an exception for Origins, because this story is - in a word - fantastic. You've done an amazing job building realistic relationships between the characters, and even your OC's are fully formed. I do have one concern, though... You still update slower than I can read : )

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2007 - 07:34 pm Title: Justice turns the scale

How will Willow's sentence manifest itself? I'm looking forward to fonding out.

Reviewer: wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2007 - 12:35 pm Title: Justice turns the scale

oh gods that made my day my dearest sister. Gods i love how you weave your story onto the screen and make it so real to me, that I feel the emotions and grandeur of all the characters.

Anya is so great, telling Giles how it will be when they first have sex. Look out world that day.

You gave me tears as Rianwyn told her story *sighs*.

I think the Fey judged Willow well. Though I was looking for her to have death. I think this will be torture enough for her to have watch all her "friends" seek the happiness they are deserve. All that she will never be able to grasp. I believe that I know who will recieve her gifts and use them wisely.

Though I will be sad when this ends. It has been a long road to travel with you on this journey. Though the road is not ending, merely taking another path that will lead to more stories. Cause you know I do love your stories *giggles*.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 09:35 pm Title: Justice turns the scale

If you have a goal, you fight harder. Just like Spike does.
Awe, and the version, this was Connor, right? Not so much a baby. Another champion. Another story. ...
*sniff* Rianwyn. I guess what happened to her was a long time ago, but it ain't forgotten.
So Willow will get free (some day). Her life is spared but release comes not, until the last of your betrayed is at peace. Maybe she'll use the time and hopefully will see what she did wrong.
~ Happy to see the new chapter :)

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 05:47 pm Title: Justice turns the scale

Great update; I'm mixed about seeing ths go, becuase it's a great story but I want to know how it ends!! :) Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: hwesta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 02:18 pm Title: Justice turns the scale

Ooh, another chapter :P This was kinda trilling, maybe not the best word for it but I can't find better one just now. :)

Reviewer: Aeryn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 01:00 pm Title: Justice turns the scale

still reading and loving this fic.

Reviewer: Yash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 11:05 am Title: Justice turns the scale

Another great chapter. And a great quote from Det. Pembleton.

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 10:07 am Title: Justice turns the scale

Oh wow Willows finally getting her just reward. I can't wait to find out what it means in practice. To be stripped of her powers would be a fitting punishment. The master manipulator devoid of her ability to control. She''ll go mad. More please.

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 07:55 am Title: Justice turns the scale

Fantastic updates!! And wow, what an ender to this chapter!! Can't wait for another one!!

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 06:42 am Title: Justice turns the scale

Great chapter!! As always, looking forward to more!!

Reviewer: Goldm00n Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 12:32 am Title: Justice turns the scale

GREAT CHAPTER!!!!! I can't wait for Willow's reaction! I am so curious as to WHO these people are that Spike has been with and who Buffy has been with I am going to have to comb history and myth i think to figure it out! I love how you have handled everything! I am curious to see if Xander reacts anymore and I am so hopeful for Giles and Anya! GREAT CHAPTER~!!!! thank you!

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2007 - 12:14 am Title: Justice turns the scale

Great chapter nia.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2007 - 10:55 pm Title: Justice turns the scale

So, she's powerless and alone until the others have moved on to being happy? Or is "at peace" mean "at rest"?

Good to see Spike and Lawson on the move again.

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