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Reviewer: Verbina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2006 - 03:49 pm Title: Unto the breach

Just stumbled on to Origins a few days ago and have just sat and read through everything so far, I love it! I am a long time Spuffy fan but haven't read anything for a very long time, This was worth the wait. I noticed from some of your ANs that you have been seaking encouragment, well here you go....PLEAS HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!

Cheers

Verbina1@gmail.com

Reviewer: TardyMe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2006 - 10:04 pm Title: Unto the breach

I'm absolutely loving this story. The characters & dialogue are so perfect. Thanks!

Reviewer: Rotting Future Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2006 - 12:16 am Title: Unto the breach

Ok I have been reading both Origins and this story for two weeks and just got through it all (damn real life always interfering with good fanfiction). And wow WOW. I love both stories so much. The quotes at the beggining, the way you really delve into all the characters so nothing jus somes out of nowhere, they way the stories flow makes it seem so much more real-you get the everything of the story. So once again wow. I can not wait to read more of this story and more from you.



Why did Willow have to go to a scoobie zone to cast her spells?

Reviewer: Nina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2006 - 03:52 am Title: Unto the breach

*Glee*

I just have to launch into my favorite parts...prices to pay (OMG WHAT!?), dancing fighting partners, escaping backstabbing vampires...HOLY CRAP!!

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"The realization of what Buffy and Spike were doing hit Wesley hard and he forced himself not to laugh outright. They were dancing. To a tune they alone heard, and it certainly was neither a waltz nor a minuet, yet it was graceful and riveting to watch." - This was a pure joy to read. The imagery was so perfect I felt like I was holding my own breath as I stood with Wes to watch them battle. It was awesome!
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"Power flared from Willow’s fingertips and she flicked them at Tara, muttering under her breath. Tara struggled for calm, then passed her hand in front of her, palm outward. The movement warded off the arc of power, directing it away from both her and Anya. It hit the wall, cracking the plaster and shaking the house." - Oh that is it. I am so done with Willow. Well if Tara doesn't think she's evil..she is a better person than I because I want to rip Willow's arms off and beat her with them.
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“Only a dead man can cross the boundaries and the price isn’t permanent.” - WHAT?! WAIT!? Sweet Jesus what does that mean?? OMG. Does that mean Spike? *flails*
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"Moments later, the two master vampires were on their way to Revello Drive, just steps behind Harmony and the others." - OMG. It's too much at once!! Willow and now Angel and psycho Dru? Buffy and Spike on the way...IT CAN'T STOP HERE? nononononononono!!

Okay sweetie, here it is: This story just keep rocketing along without missing ONE STEP. It is as exciting as the very first chapters of Book I. To be able to have such a multi-layered story with converging storylines is truly a formidable task, and yet reading it...you make it look effortless. Thanks for such speedy updates! I hope this is a sign that things are going well.

Cheers!
Nina

Reviewer: weyrwolfen Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 11:55 pm Title: Unto the breach

Ack! What is the price?!?!

I'm really loving Tara in this story. You would see little flashes of her strength on the show, but it was never showcased. I love how you've brought her front and center, and let her grow in her power and confidence.

The fact that Willow is so fargone that even Tara can't reach her is chilling. Way to go, as usual. I'll be gnawing my nails to the quick until you post again.

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2006 - 08:39 pm Title: Unto the breach

wow..those are some powerful wards!!!

that was a pretty daring breakout by angelus. i was hanging on the edge of my seat with that one.

i liked your description of the fight scene...oh crap Nia...poetry in motion that was...

aaahhhh, so that was joyce and not Gaia. i thought it would be her b/c she showed up before.
soooo a price to be paid and those two don't know about it...hhhmmmm.....well it has ot do with dawn and the fact that kirsten intervened. thats my bet...the price isn't permenant......well, the huntsman and hounds are still after willow and i wonder if they are going to take her to the hall for judgement and dawn somehow goes too..........am i off my rocker? we shall see...gods i can't wait for more.

i love the fight between willow and tara....wiked wiked stuff...more more more!!!!

now they are all coming to revello and willows there with her wanted ot re-ensoul angel and make everything to her liking....this is gonna be good. i cna't wait to see what Dru has to say about all of this. :)

Reviewer: Wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2006 - 06:58 pm Title: Unto the breach

ohhhhhh ohhhhhh this is fantastic. I am so glad you are show casing Tara's powers within, I knew they were there. Anya too, she is a 1000 year old demon for gods sake, how can she not have some magicks left in her. Go Tara standing up to Willow. Whoa who knew Angel had a brain to actually get out. Though I hope he runs straight into a stake held by spike or Buffy. Hmmmm curiousl about Joyce's lil message. GAHHHHHHHHHH MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE preettyyyyyyyy pwweasseeeeeeeee....loved it

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2006 - 05:44 pm Title: Unto the breach

Ooooooh, very action packed chapter. I love it.

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2006 - 01:39 pm Title: Unto the breach

Alays thrilled to see a new chapter of this story! You seem to have found your groove again with this story. I'm so glad!

Interesting twist this chapter. I have an idea what Joyce meant; looking forward to seeing just how off base it is!

Reviewer: hmm.... Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2006 - 11:26 am Title: Unto the breach

so exicted to see two updates so close together. can't wait for the next one :)

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2006 - 10:45 am Title: Unto the breach

Oh, everyone's going down all at the same time!! Should be interesting!

Reviewer: Hwesta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2006 - 10:04 am Title: Unto the breach

This gets interesting..There's so much action that I almost forgot to breath and me being all human that wasn't healthy ;D Can't wait to see what's going to happen!
*lots of hugs* -hwesta-

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2006 - 04:08 am Title: Unto the breach

wow great chapter nia

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2006 - 12:19 am Title: Unto the breach

Oh no....Willow's ruined soooo many things. I really do hope she dies. She doesn't deserve to live or have redemption. Update soon please!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2006 - 10:13 pm Title: Unto the breach

Another exciting chapter, and I enjoyed the orchestration of the slayers' team fighting. I'm looking forward to Joyce's cryptic message coming into play. Willow and Tara battling it out was vividly written. I have to wonder if fresh blood will fix Angelus' singed hair as well as the burns...

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2006 - 10:01 pm Title: Unto the breach

great chapter

Reviewer: slinkyPK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2006 - 09:40 pm Title: Unto the breach

WHOA! Willow is seriously out of control. I knew that already, but she's...Now she's in the house and Angelus, Dru, Harmony and Glynnis are just moments away. Oh, god, I'm actually ready to jump outta my seat right now. I keep thinking of the children up there. Both vunerable and unable to defend themselves. ohgodohgodohgod....

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2006 - 09:34 pm Title: Unto the breach

Seems as if Tara and Joyce have to defend the house now. Buffy gotten busy all at once. ~ So Hawkins found Glynnis now. She went to Angelus becaue Spike fights with humans? She doesn't indeed know everything. ~ Angelus is trapped? I don't think he'll die that easy. Yeah, he has indeed a plan. ~ Ah, Buffy felt like dancing.. she and Spike are known for it. And it is contagious too :) Faith and Jenner could feel it too. Oh what a sight, I would love to see it (better only on TV would be too dangerous otherwise). Another riddle from Joyce. I'm not wake enough to get it all but I think the dead man, this could be Spike. And the price isn't permanent? Someone dying? Naw, Joyce said no. And Glynis seems to have chosen Angelus' side now. ~ And Willow is too far gone; Tara can't reach her any longer. And now it's coming all down (everybody is coming) to Revello Drive... ~ Good chapter left me wondering what will happen next :) As is should be.

Reviewer: Talen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2006 - 09:30 pm Title: Unto the breach

Oh God!! Poor Tara and Anya! They have to fight against Angel and Dru too.
Wow, you blew me away! I didn't expect this turn of events.
With each chapter you outdone yourself!!! You are an Awesome writer!! Seriously a couple of "professional writers" could take a leave (or a bunch of them) of your book.
You are truly a genius!!
I can't wait to know how it ends!!!
Love it!

Reviewer: Riahannon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2006 - 09:11 pm Title: Unto the breach

this is really, really good, loving all the suspense and can't wait for your next update!

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