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Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2006 - 03:08 am Title: Reveal not every secret

Another slayer mated to a master vampire? I love this mythology and what it predicts for Spike and Buffy's future. This was another strong chapter, and I especially loved the silent ride back from the hospital with Connor squeaking its theme music with his pacifier. Oz greeting them and having their backs as they ferried Dawn and the baby inside was also lovely. You do a great job peppering in small details in each scene, details that make the images come alive.

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2006 - 02:55 am Title: Reveal not every secret

Ask and you shall receive. Another nice chapter. Liked the scene with Tara and Dawn.

I could go for Jenner/Faith. It's intriguing.

Carol

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2006 - 02:25 am Title: Reveal not every secret

I love this story and I was so glad to see an update. I thank you and your muse for spinning such a wonderful tale!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2006 - 02:01 am Title: Reveal not every secret

Well, isn't that an interesting piece of news! We have an Immortal Slayer.

I like Jenner, in that he's someone who engenders respect just by his presence. Seems to be an honorable sort, for a vampire, anyway.

Ah, Tara...such an asset. So perceptive.

I'd say burn the mansion out during the daytime. Homemade napalm, Molotov cocktails, etc. Level the playing field a lot that way.

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2006 - 01:13 am Title: Reveal not every secret

Great chapter nia

Reviewer: Nina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2006 - 01:02 am Title: Reveal not every secret

Hot damn! I was hoping Jenner was going to pick up on it and he did! Now that is PLOT THICKENING!

I love the comfortable intamcy between Buffy and Spike now that they are mated. The simple brushing of the hands and comforting touches makes my Spuffy heart swell. It is so awesome how you are able to weave the supernatural into a realistic setting. What boyfriend wouldn't get nervous when the ex's name came up? I like how Buffy didn't take the bait. It says she is becoming more confident in her relationship with Spike.

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Spike looked up at Buffy, who stared down at him. Suddenly, a lifetime together didn’t seem so impossible. His thumb brushed over hers and she couldn’t hold back the tiny gasp that escaped from her.

In an instant, Spike was on his feet, his arms around Buffy, holding her close. - Because Spike and Buffy connecting will get me EVERY time.
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Oz was there, helping Buffy with Connor’s things and staying between her and the street, guarding her flank. Once she’d gained the porch, the werewolf drifted back toward Spike, performing the same function for the vampire.

His actions, while not predatory, were battle-aware. More than cognizant of his presence, Spike was forced to reassess Oz’ possible use in the inevitable confrontation. - Oz is part of the team now and I wouldn't want it any other way. He wasn't drafted or needed to be asked, he is just fell in step without the need for formality. I love Oz.
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Without pausing to explain to anyone, Spike shifted Dawn in his arms and headed for her bedroom. - HIs girls first. Always. *swoon*

An update even when you are sick....awww thanks! Feel better Nia, another great update. Can't wait for more.

Cheers,
Nina:
She who blushes at special mentions. Aww shucks. *shuffles feet*

Reviewer: Anne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2006 - 12:23 am Title: Reveal not every secret

This story just gets more and more interesting can hardly wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Anne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 11:51 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

This story just gets more and more interesting can hardly wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: weyrwolfen Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 11:26 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

I love Jenner. Oh, and I love Lawson. And I also love the resurrected slayer mated to a vampire mythology. Oh hell, I just love this story, but I do have to ask. What on Earth did Buffy smell like? ;-) I hope the vacation helped you out, with the muse and otherwise. Fantastic chapter! Thanks!

Reviewer: RP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 11:05 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

Very very interesting. I'm a might bit confused on the storyline on the last slayer to mate with a vampire though...but I'm sure I'll figure it out!! Much love!

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 11:05 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

I love the suspense in this chapter. Love the tension between Spike and Jenner. Can't wait to see how this ends.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 10:59 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

always a pleasure to see that you have updated. sometimes i cannot review because i am reading at work. then i forget when i am at home. not reviewing doees not mean that i have not been eagerly awaiting updates. more please. hope rl is treating you alright.

Reviewer: Talen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 10:40 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

Wonderful update. It's very nice to see Spike recieving the respect he is due as Master Vampire. I like Jenner it's a very intriguing character because he could do anythingm, altough I think he will help Buffy, Spke and co. against Angelus.

As always your update makes my night. Keep the updates coming, even if you have to bribe the Muse :D

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 10:27 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

Cool twist. Love the update!

Reviewer: Anza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 09:05 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

Dun-dun-dun!
This is so awesome! I completely enjoy this fanfic and am avidly awaiting to see what will happen to our heroes. As always I wait with baited breath.

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 08:45 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

what a great chapter. I feel so sorry for Dawn. This is really a great story.

Reviewer: wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 08:28 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

Oh hun this was awesome. I know you are not feeling the greatest today,but thanks so much for the posting. Oz's protective stances were right on target for the wolf. Protect your family at all costs. Tara was so wonderful with Dawn and giving her some reasurrance. Dawn has a tough healing road ahead of her. Jenner was magnificent. His demenor of caution and his sending in someone to give his messages....an awesome master vampire. You give his character such life and yet you show his darkness. I loved his shock of Spike and Buffy's mating. Then the giggle fest of his and faith's reactions to one another. Oh Jenner knows of the other mated pair. Very interesting. WOW there could be some serious history lessons here. WOW I want more and more and more....stay well and I hope you are feeling better.

Reviewer: caegey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 08:27 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

Fantastic. i'm thrilled to see this story return. The different threads of the story are captivating and Jenner is turning into an iintriguing character.

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 08:26 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

I love your writing, Such good detail and all.

Reviewer: Rachel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 08:13 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

I love this story! I am so happy you updated! Fantastic chapter, as usual.

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 08:04 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

As always I broke out into a huge smile when I saw that this story had been updated. You really made my day. Great chapter. I'm interested in seeing what happens between Faith and Jenner, and Lawson has always been an interesting character.

Reviewer: ahigh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 08:03 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

As usual, another wonderful chapter. I love the character of Jenner and want to see more of him. Great job!

Reviewer: Katina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2006 - 07:34 pm Title: Reveal not every secret

This is a great story. I very glad that you are continuing it and look forward to the next chapter as always. I actually cheered a little when I saw this had been updated

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