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Reviewer: Sharon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2007 - 04:06 am Title: Grief's best music

Still loving it!

Reviewer: nmcil Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/28/2006 - 01:51 pm Title: Grief's best music

Nice the way you connect Buffy's Resurrection trauma with Dawn's - you did such a great job of bringing the series story arcs and blending them into your work.

Good being able to read this continuation with so many chapters - don't know if this is completed yet, but I hope it is.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2006 - 04:58 pm Title: Grief's best music

You did an excellent job conveying Buffy's heart break at the hospital. Spike's arrival was perfectly timed. I love the image of an oblivious Willow being stalked by the hounds. I can't wait for her fall. Jenner's observations of Lawson are intriguing - just what has Lawson been up to all this time?

Reviewer: Nina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 01:43 am Title: Grief's best music

Hells Bells! I can't believe I almost missed an update!

Willow seems to be losing her grip. I absolutely *love* the literal and metaphorical hounds at her heels. It is almost time for Willow to have her come uppance and I am breathless in anticipation.

Jenner is a Vamp after my own heart. His loyalty doesn't automatically reside with his sire, and I can't wait to see his reaction when he finds out that "the girls", in effect are his kin too being from the same bloodline. Great job on weaving in obscure characters.

Awww Dawn. Such a sad, broken girl now. I find myself missing the bubbly Dawn and am missing the father/daughter interaction from the past chapters. *sniffle*

Kirsten and Spike. I just love the way he holds his girls so close to his heart and their interaction this chapter, despite that angst, gave me a warm feeling. Love it.

Favorite Lines:
She answered him without thinking, then blushed darkly. “Yeah, sure Daddy.”

“Keep that quiet.” He shook his head, heading for the stairs and Buffy.

and...

“Really, Anya, must you? She’s hardly going to switch bodies with Wesley or I and I doubt seriously she’s going to harm any of us.” Giles grabbed her arm, peering down into her eyes. “I doubt helping any of us would be her first choice unless she has changed.” He paused once more, saying in a much softer tone, “we have to start trusting her sometime.”

“I still don’t think its very smart.” Her face had softened, responding to his expression. She smiled up at him prettily. “But I trust you, so I’ll try.” *revels in Anya/Giles luv*

Okay Nia, as promised, a review. Late, but not forgotten. Continue to heal. This story is moving along at the exact right pace. Angst, love, hate, domesticity, realism, and fantasy. Why didn't the writers tap YOU??

~Nina~

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2006 - 04:32 am Title: Grief's best music

I just found the fic "Origins" last week and have been glued to my computer screen through it and now "Revelations". This has been an absolutely wonderful story. Thank you soooooo much for continuing to give it to us. And, can I just say that my hatred for Angelus is only surpassed by my enormous loathing for Willow! More soon please!

Reviewer: witezon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2006 - 09:01 pm Title: Grief's best music

Excellent story! Also, technically good. Well done!

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2006 - 06:15 pm Title: Grief's best music

Really moving, I hope they're gonna get through this ok.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2006 - 03:49 pm Title: Grief's best music

great chapter

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2006 - 05:06 am Title: Grief's best music

OH so much more of this great story. I am glad that they were able to get to Dawn in time. I just hope that she realiizes that she has a lot to live for. I also hope that Kristin is okay. It was not her fault. Now what on earth is Dru up to. Love Giles and Anya...I hope that Faith will finally be able to open up about all of her dreams. I just don't know what to say about Willow..... aughhhhhh. Well at least she was part of the Hounds... Great update.

Reviewer: Jade2099 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2006 - 04:56 am Title: Grief's best music

Poor Spike, Buffy, Dawnie, and Kristen. So hard being a family. It's good they're banding together right now...but I am anxious to see how Willow gets hers in the end. She played with fire...and it ended up getting someone hurt.

Reviewer: Mac 1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2006 - 04:46 am Title: Grief's best music

Loving the story as always. Just for the record, in California it's a 72 hour hold for psych emergencies, which this would have been. But no worries, artistic license and all. :-)

Reviewer: Jade2099 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2006 - 02:36 am Title: Grief's best music

Poor Spike, Buffy, Dawnie, and Kristen. So hard being a family. It's good they're banding together right now...but I am anxious to see how Willow gets hers in the end. She played with fire...and it ended up getting someone hurt.

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 10:57 pm Title: Grief's best music

and the hounds stalk their prey.......cool. gods i hope dawn wakes up soon. its got to be hard on kirsten to have to deal with all of this. buffy is doing well, getting tru it as best she can. i can just see anya flitting around the shop like that.....LOL too funny. hope johnathan can help to put some pieces together. gotta tell ya, you do a fantastic job of portraying dru. its always a treat to see her. angelus is the stupidest vamp on the planet...can't wait to see him go down. can't tell you how excited i was to see that you had posted. hope you are doing ok. *hugs*

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 09:11 pm Title: Grief's best music

So the hounds are now after Willow. Uh-huh.. and Willow noticed at last. I'm just glad they aren't after Spike. And Dawn is still unconsciousness. Awe :) (Kirsten, Connor, Spike). So very hard for Buffy... same for Spike. Looking eagerly forward to the new chapter :)

Reviewer: ComedyofErrors Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 05:13 pm Title: Grief's best music

I love the tensions inside Order Aurelius. The coming feud should be quite interesting. Another wonderful update.

Reviewer: Ptolemy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 04:21 pm Title: Grief's best music

[biting nails] When will Willow find out what she's done?? Eek! ;-) Excellent read!

Reviewer: Wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 04:19 pm Title: Grief's best music

Thank the gods those nice paramedics got there in time to help Dawn out. Gods help this poor broken child heal. Anya having issues with Faith is so Anya. Giles trying to reassure her in a fashion she deserves, not like that idiot Xander. Gods I hope Jonathan can shed some light on things and have the spell be broken. Loved the hounds stalking Willow and she is too self righteous to notice. Shall be quite the battle to see who gets to Willow first the hounds or Angel. Dru giving out so much information and if they would just pay attention they would see what she is saying. You write such a fantastic Dru. Ahhh now Jenner and Lawson having a talk. Something is going to give here soon and it's going to be big. Great chapter, thanks for posting.

Reviewer: bigbird2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 03:09 pm Title: Grief's best music

Oh big dogs... new vamps....time travel and suicide attempts (poor Dawn) I love this story!! ;-)

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 12:27 pm Title: Grief's best music

This is so sad, I just love it. I'm also intrigued about the new vampires that you are throwing into the mix. Good chapter and I can't wait to read the next one

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 09:17 am Title: Grief's best music

It seems like Jenner and Lawson are going to be the suprise under Angel's roof.

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 06:50 am Title: Grief's best music

Oh wow, that was wonderful. I've still got tears running down my cheeks from it. Man, so many secrets, and the one I'm really waiting for is for everyone to find out what Willow did. Hmm.....and might Jenner switch sides, too? This is going soooo great, and I really can't wait for another!!!

Reviewer: mira Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 04:52 am Title: Grief's best music

another great update...hope to get another one soon =D and how long for the dogs to chew on willow???

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 04:47 am Title: Grief's best music

I guess now i know who Kristen's brother is. I love the glimpses of their future. Will you ever write the future story? The moments that led to Kristen making the jump. It would be really interesting to have the full circle.

Reviewer: anon. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 03:22 am Title: Grief's best music

Lovely. Beautiful. Heartbreaking.

More?

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 02:59 am Title: Grief's best music

such a sad but great chapter.....Poor spike and buffy if they lose dawn i don't thiink buffy will ever recover from it with her blaming herself foe what happened to dawn and spike trying to be the strong one to hold his family together so sad and kristina she is so her daddy little girl i hope dawn can pull through this with the love from her parents and little sister..Look's like willow will finally get what's coming to her and it couldn't happened to a more evil person like her.Great chapter nia..Get well soon

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