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Reviewer: Sharon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2007 - 03:28 am Title: Persistence of memory

Yes, it is really good. I can't stop reading

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Date: 10/28/2006 - 02:54 am Title: Persistence of memory

This is such a great story - just love it. Not much of a review, but just wanted to tell you how much I am enjoying reading it - thanks ever for bringing it to us.

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Date: 07/08/2006 - 12:35 am Title: Persistence of memory

o,k who is robbie?. kirsten's older brother.. do not think it is connor since he is not named robbie. her younger brother's name is will.. makes more sense for the older boy to be named will.

Reviewer: fee_kh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2006 - 06:32 am Title: Persistence of memory

You know I only have one problem with this. How are you going to solve the whole time problem? Is it going to be like Chris on Charmed - who disappeared when things had changed. You can't really go down the route of Lost in time. So just curious.
But I have full faith that you will solve the problem, seeing as you have all the others before.

Reviewer: jacquie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 - 04:04 pm Title: Persistence of memory

its brilliant!

Reviewer: effulgent_girl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2005 - 10:18 pm Title: Persistence of memory

Very, very good. Please continue the story. Can't wait till they find out Willow did the spell and then when the spell ends. Something is gonna hit the fan.

Reviewer: hmm... Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2005 - 03:44 pm Title: Persistence of memory

thanks for the background of Kirsten - i was pretty sure what was going to happen from all the clues but ti was nice to read it! i cant' wait till faith figures out that willow was the one that cast that stupid spell so they can break it - keep up the fantastic work :)

Reviewer: Becky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2005 - 09:17 am Title: Persistence of memory

Honestly? It was freaking wonderful! Thank you for another outstanding chappie.

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Date: 12/03/2005 - 01:59 am Title: Persistence of memory

Of course its good! Course we all want more. Take care of your self.

Reviewer: Gail Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2005 - 05:33 pm Title: Persistence of memory

Story is still 'bloody brilliant'. Thank you for keeping at it.

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2005 - 04:27 am Title: Persistence of memory

It's always good.

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2005 - 03:01 am Title: Persistence of memory

Thank you, thank you, thank you for the update. I continue to be amazed with this story. I hope you are feeling better. Update soon.

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2005 - 12:08 pm Title: Persistence of memory

Lovely. Thank you.

Reviewer: - Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2005 - 11:55 am Title: Persistence of memory

i really enjoy ur story.. but to me.. the plot here is a bit predictable... saw it coming chappies ahead.. but other than that.. it rocks..

Author's Response: Its only predictable in that I laid those clues quite clearly, with regards to this character. I don't think this story is over-all predictable, but you're free to disagree. I write to please the muse and if the muse is happy, then I'm happy.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2005 - 03:22 am Title: Persistence of memory

I honestly think that your writing off all the chapters is very good. I may need to look back over the story, but I don't recall any point where the story has a lull. You have crafted this all very nicely and I am enjoying the process. The only thing that I can say is that I think spike uses nicknames a little too much. While I understand that this is part of the character I think it might be a little over done. Either way I would read the story though because it is a plot that has not been done to death and that makes it all the more interesting.

Author's Response: Spike in canon very rarely used a person's given name; and usually with only a precious few. There's instances of if, yes, however, in this respect I've often let the muse control that aspect -- and since the muse hasn't been wrong yet, I'll trust that voice in my head.

Reviewer: me Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2005 - 02:45 am Title: Persistence of memory

love the story
keep iup the amazing work!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 10:38 pm Title: Persistence of memory

So Buffy remembers that she did jump off the tower - but nothing more. I think doing the spell will be good. And Kirsten is talking now. Faith will do the spell - that's right: she wasn't there when the other spell was cast. Kirsten .. oh my - Dawn had to die and she saved her (when Spike is right)? I wonder if this will have consequences. Good chapter :)

Reviewer: Karyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 08:14 pm Title: Persistence of memory

great update, getting intense with all the crazy spell stuff, can't wait to see what happens when it all breaks apart...*grin*

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 06:46 pm Title: Persistence of memory

I new kirsten was buffy and spike unborn child love it.And she back to protect her sister dawn awwww so beautiful..Looks like willow time is up YES she's about to go so down..Great chapter nia agine am sorry to hear your still in pain hope you get better very soon

Reviewer: gaillee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 06:20 pm Title: Persistence of memory

It's spectacular! You told us several things, kept the suspense up and gave us more Spike/Buffy good relationship. Really a wonderful chapter that still keeps me hanging...

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Date: 11/30/2005 - 04:45 pm Title: Persistence of memory

WOW!!! Are you telling me that Dawn was not supposed to make it. Kristen is in big trouble now that daddy knows who she is. I hope Buffy can calm him down before he hurts her. I can't wait for Faith to get into her trance and let them know what is going on. Great update.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 03:56 pm Title: Persistence of memory

Spike's reaction to Kirsten's origins was well written and in character. So, Dawn wasn't supposed to survive Angelus' attack, how did that effect Kirsten's timeline? How is her interference changing the future? I'm looking forward to the aftermath of Faith's spell, too.

Reviewer: Riahannon Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 03:39 pm Title: Persistence of memory

this is great! i had my suspicions about kirsten but i wasn't sure-and woah! awesome! can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: maryperk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 02:40 pm Title: Persistence of memory

Another excellent chappy. Don't push yourself. I think you are doing a fine job at your storytelling. I know it's hard not to be critical of yourself, I suffer from the very same issue, but you are doing an excellent job!!!!!

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 02:36 pm Title: Persistence of memory

Freaking Great!

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