Poor dawn she is just falling apart cause of crazy willow spell so hope those huntsmen get her fast.Love win she was calling for her daddy spike she so new he was her father and buffy was her mom beautiful moment between buffy and spike win they where holding her in the middle so sad..Me thinks kristine has a big secret that has to do with spike and buffy could they be related to her in some way hmmm the plot thinkens.Look like faith is home and out to get the bad guys go faith...Another great chapter nia very tearfully but great feel better soon

poor dawn, you just ache for her, can just imagine what will happen when the spell is finally broken, *looks for a place to hide*

God Nia--don't doubt that it works--I so want more though. The scene with Buffy/Spike/Dawn brought tears to my eyes. Dawn's grief was tangible and that should tell you that you did your job well. Kirsten is interesting--I have a feeling about her...can't wait to see if I'm right.

With every new chapter I become more and more fan of your work. It's amazing the way you put many different things in movement in a way that they intertwined making a wonderful tapestry of story. Long story short: love it

two year olds think they need to type too and she pushed the buttons. Ughhhhhhhhhh...As I was saying, Dawn having to deal with so much and thinking she is destructive. Gods that is so horrible for her. YEAH Faith has arrived and boy does she have questions. Glad she is there though. Thank the Gods that doc Thomas and Nurse Osborn know their stuff. Loved her 10 year old werewolf comment. Tara is pack. and Oz is getting aroused. Now that is a twist. I hope the huntsman gives the command to let the hounds take their prey. To do what is to be done, to make her pay for what she has done. Great chapter

you write beautifully and even when you think things aren't working in your story they do....you blend and weave so many emotions and plot lines with style and keep true to your characters

“Sweetie, you don’t scare me. I’ve got a ten year old werewolf at home." Damn, I love that line!

Awesome update, Sweets! And it all works perfectly.

Staring down at his crotch for a long minute, Oz wondered idly what was it about him and lesbians. . . . *snort* I love that line. Another great chapter. Beautiful family scene in the hospital room. Very touching. Liked the pace of this chapter, how you managed to blend together several little scenes without it feeling choppy. Nicely done.

It was wonderfully written and everything works just fine I can hardly wait for the next chapter and I hope that your arm is feeling better

I think it works wonderfully. Especially a sedated Dawn calling Spike Daddy. I hope it was a hard struggle to type it because of the emotions it involved not because your arm is still hurting.