Date: 11/02/2005 - 12:25 am Title: Lambs for the slaughter
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Date: 11/02/2005 - 12:16 am Title: Lambs for the slaughter
wow nia....wow. powerful chapter!!! casey is dead but what a fight he put on. warrior spirit that one has. the hounds are hot on the trail now. i don't care if you break it up or not. if you feel you must or need to then do, if not then don't. i will always keep reading this story. hope your arm feels better
Date: 11/01/2005 - 11:55 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter
another wonderful chapter!
Date: 11/01/2005 - 11:44 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter
Always good to get an update. I feel so terrible for Dawn here. I still don't get Kirsten... seems I must have missed something. I hope Faith gets there soon to lend some kind of aid.
Date: 11/01/2005 - 11:21 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter
I am always happy to see new chapters of this story. Hope your shoulder holds up. Things are getting really good now!
Date: 11/01/2005 - 11:15 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter
poor dawn. she just barely got someone in her life, and now that dumb ass angel took him from her. and, what's up with the hounds. yeah, i'm kinda lost. but i'm loving the story oh so very much. i really can't wait for more. please, please, please soon.
Date: 11/01/2005 - 11:06 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter
Amazing update, I hope you feel better soon. I understand you feel the need to break the story up. I don't care where you break it up as long as you complete it. This is one of my favorites and I eagerly wait for each update.
Brandy
Date: 11/01/2005 - 10:31 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter
I feel bad for Casey but this was still a great chapter, as always. Keep up the excellent work.
Date: 11/01/2005 - 10:30 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter
My god, what a chapter. Poor Casey, though, he put up a good fight till the end. I hope Dawn is going to be okay.
Gotta wonder about the Huntsman, will he get to Willow and the spell be reversed?
Have to say, I would like to see a Book 3. I love this whole Origins concept. Hate to see it end. Would rather see it broken up into Books.
Love it.
Date: 11/01/2005 - 10:27 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter
Gods I can't think straight right now,but I will give you some sugar. THAT was fuckn phenomenal. Willow will pay for her deeds and Angelous shall die at the hand of one of them. That pissy poor excuse for a vampire, killing that boy. The hounds are going to find Willow and make her pay GOOD. I hope they tear her from limb to limb. If it were not for her the teens would not of been out. The would of known that Angelous was there waiting. Fuckn bint Willow. You did a fantastic job with this chapter. So much in it. I will have to read it all again, when my brain and heart does not hurt so badly.
Date: 11/01/2005 - 10:11 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter
Ah! Casey died. Someone needs to stake Angel like now. Can I be like magically transported into the story and do it, cause that would be fun... Then I could dance on his dust. Whee! *ahem* Another powerful chapter. Casey's dead, Dawn's hurt, the huntsman is on the move...
Date: 11/01/2005 - 10:01 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter
Great chapter! But poor Casey he was so brave teling Angelus a few home truths about himself, and poor Dawnie losing her firs love like that
Date: 11/01/2005 - 09:56 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter
Oh you are so evil , cutting off like that. Please keep going... I want to know what happens.
Date: 11/01/2005 - 09:52 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter
Phew. Blimey. Oh My Goodness.
What a dramatic chapter. Poor, poor Casey. Poor Dawn. Both of them were so brave. I thought for a fleeting moment that there would be a last minute save for them. Casey was becoming a solid character in his own right. I'm sad he's become another of Angelus's victims. I don't suppose there's mystical regenerative poer in Dawn's blood??
And... the Hounds.
"Each hound knew their place, each knew their task. One by one, they split off from the pack, until the alpha male was alone, his nose intent on the location of the traitor, while the others cut off all avenues of escape."
Willow? Angelus? Kirsten?
Great update as ever, pet. I'd be delighted to see this continue into a third book. There's such a wealth of adventure to mine here, and well into the second book, Origins continues to receive recognition through Awards and a faithful readership. I only hope those tokens continue to be sufficient incentive and reward for you.
Date: 11/01/2005 - 09:41 pm Title: Lambs for the slaughter
Poor Dawn. Casey was a great character. Brave and strong. Stupid Willow messing things up! Very heartwrenching chappy! Love it despite the pain.