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Reviewer: fee_kh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2006 - 05:08 pm Title: An unhurried sense of time

You know I've had this theory. First noticed it in the first part of origins and then it is sorta becoming less nebulos in this one. Now bear in mind that I don't peak ahead so if this actually happens then I still get to crow that I knew way beforehand.
Ther are tendencies that Giles is going to take Xander's place in Anya's life. He comforts her and just involves her in discussions instead of disavowing everything she says. They never really exploited her knowledge after all bar the mayor's ascension and then later Glory. And here they finally do, realising that precisely because she had a unique viewpoint she can add insightful things, but at the same time allowing her to have real human foibles, like cooing at babies. It's like Xander wants her to be human when it suits him - bed I presume, and more demon -like when it doesn't - like with the baby.

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/19/2005 - 09:51 am Title: An unhurried sense of time

Great chapter.......Dawn's realistic reactions to Buffy's calling the baby my boy.....great scene.....I hope Anya and Giles end up together, and she gets her own baby, LOL. Now, don't leave me hanging too long on the Spike, Buffy, Dru reunion..... Cliffy girl that you are

Reviewer: Kristen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2005 - 03:26 am Title: An unhurried sense of time

Wow that was a surprise...I didnt expect her to show up so soon. Sorry I havent reviewed in a long time, I dont know how I feel so behind the updates... Anyways... I have noticed in a couple of your last chapters that their has been some missplaced letters in words or missing letters from some words. Also...love the Spuffy smut and conversations because well sex is good smut and fluff is also needed, lol. A couple of questions.. Why do you switch back and forth between using Angel and Angelus? Shouldnt it just be Angelus now? Also...you're not going to kill off Willow are you? What is going to happen to her.. and since she wont do the spell to restore Angels soul are you just going to kill Angel? Cause wouldnt the Powers want their champion to stay alive? Lol, its just like I said before, I hate Angel but I would rather see him broody and acting as a loser than dead. Im just wondering whats going to happen... I guess you will just have to update really soon so I can find out, lol! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: My apologies for the mistakes. I don't use a beta and so, at times, catching the misspellings and typos can be a problem. I'll try to be more careful in the future. Hopefully my mistakes won't put anyone off and make them stop reading. Why do I switch back and forth between Angel and Angelus? Because I don't believe they are two separate entities. Souled or unsouled, they are one and the same, and just as I don't make the distinction, neither do some of the characters. What he's called will depend solely on context. Willow's fate, and the fate of Angel/Angelus will depend solely on their actions, and may or may not hinge on each other. I wll reserve comment about Angel being the champion of the PTB for another time and place.

Reviewer: MG Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 08:28 pm Title: An unhurried sense of time

Great chapter, loads of plot and movement. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: slinkyPK Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 05:54 pm Title: An unhurried sense of time

Hot damn! New Revs chappie! Now Giles knows about Dawn and Wes is off to find a demon surgeon. Dawn is having trouble grasping the full measure of her own status-- I don't blame her. I can't imangine what she must be feeling or what it's like to realize she never had those tender bonding moments with her real parents. Not surprising that she experiences moments of jealousy that Connor, despite his being a newborn, is getting what she never had. It's a very natural, very human response. And, oh my, whatever will happen next now that the couple are aware of Dru's presence? Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 02:28 pm Title: An unhurried sense of time

This chapter was great. Angelus' call to Cordelia was perfect; very chilling. I also liked the interaction in the supermarket; short but it did a great job of communicating the direction Spike and Buffy's relationship is heading. Really unexpected cliffhanger! Well done. I'll be anxiously waiting for the next chapter!

Reviewer: SHEILA Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 01:57 pm Title: An unhurried sense of time

well this isn't good for buffy and spike if drusilla is in the pictue now like they don't have enough problems already.With spike first love back it won't be good for buffy are spike am wondering what happend to her are is it a trap on drusilla part to come between buffy and spike with angel helping her to destroy them both which am thinking yes that she in this with angel.And the plot thicken hmm,love the scene between buffy and dawn it was there first mother and daughter talk loved it.Agine great chapter NIA hope your arm is geting better HUGS

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 11:49 am Title: An unhurried sense of time

It's great. It really is, but now you have to update like YESTERDAY because you just can't leave it there. I'm dying. What thoughts must be going through Buffy's head. Ugh!

Reviewer: Stephanie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 11:27 am Title: An unhurried sense of time

Ack! Drusilla!! OK, I knew it was coming, but that's a hell of a cliff hanger to leave us with.

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 10:47 am Title: An unhurried sense of time

OMG........what a chapter!!! i loved buffy and baby. and what will dear dru have to say? can't wait. loved the new info on dawns origins. the supermarket was just the best. so nice to see buffy and spike growing together. i ached for dawn. everything she must be going thru and all the other things going on. i also wonder if anya moved out. and loved giles steppin it up a bit. can't wait to see how tara's date went. this chapter was sooooo full of goodness. loved it!!!!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 09:00 am Title: An unhurried sense of time

Loved it.
Buffy and Spike as a young pair with a just born baby, all domestic. Dawn (the firstborn in a way) being jealous of the baby. Then, the other giving them time to do something together - they run into Angel and have to fight. I wonder what's about Drusilla. Spike was talking to her and gesturing wildly. - Wonder on which side she will be on. I don't think she'll be on Spike's and the slayer's side. I fear she'll be on Angel's. ANd for the chip coming out - it seems to be more complicated as it did seem to be first. Thanks a bunch for the update!

Reviewer: Spikeschilde Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 08:11 am Title: An unhurried sense of time

Great update! Now Drusilla? And Lilah? trouble is definately brewing. Can't wait for more! :D

Reviewer: A. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 07:40 am Title: An unhurried sense of time

Great story! I love how you are building up the tension between Giles and Anya, and how you managed to include all the characters in a realistic way. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 07:13 am Title: An unhurried sense of time

brilliant - right from chap. one of Origins 1. Keep going!

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 06:00 am Title: An unhurried sense of time

Aw, I hope there are more of those intimate Dawn, Buffy, and Spike scenes. It's so cool that you made her their daughter. And Angel was actually kinda creepy in this chapter when he called Cordelia...unlike the episode with Wesley, lol. And the lack of any Willow mention is alarming...I wonder what she's planning. =)

Reviewer: jade2099 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 04:15 am Title: An unhurried sense of time

Ohhhhh boy...Dru is back and this is going to get really complicated! This was another absolutely fantastic update!

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 03:39 am Title: An unhurried sense of time

Oh wow!!! That was a great update!!!! Loved it all, and the endings starting to tear at me....why's Spike talking with Dru? Crap!!! Can't wait for the next one!!!!

Reviewer: tayhaangel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 02:20 am Title: An unhurried sense of time

how could you introduce dru into this. things were actualy going well for the others. oh well more angst. hehehe ;)

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~~* Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 02:20 am Title: An unhurried sense of time

Great chapter update. Look forward to more. Nice chapter to read. The interactions continue to grow. I wonder what the whole Drusilla bit is about at the end. I soooo hope that Buffy doesn't think Spike is leaving her for Dru.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 01:59 am Title: An unhurried sense of time

Great cliff hanger. Dru in the picture. Will it make Buffy jealous. I should hope so!!! Looking foward to the rest of the story.

Reviewer: braat44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 01:51 am Title: An unhurried sense of time

Awesome chapter, as always! I love this story. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: WolfSpider Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 01:32 am Title: An unhurried sense of time

Ahhhhhhh domestic god and goddess at the grocery store. Shit if I could take spike to the store, I might actually like being there. *laughs*. Damn Dr. Thomas is into bones and not brains. well darn. Anyways, I hope wesely finds something. Ewwww Cordy having to deal with that asshole on the other end of the phone. YIKESS would of made me get the wiggins. Nice suspense there. Oh Angel such a putz, would totally be all thinking he was the shit and pulling out his minions. *rolls eyes*. WHAT is this nasty cliffhanger here, not feeling the luv on that one *laughs*. Anya being quiet, hmmmmmm did she finally decide to dump that piece of shit. Gods I hope so. Maybe this time with her, Giles and baby will be a good lil seed being planted *no pun intended* Excellent Chapter as always. I am going to go nuttier than i am already wandering what is about to happen since Dru came into the picture.....

Reviewer: Adriana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 01:03 am Title: An unhurried sense of time

Cruel cliffhanger, Nia!!! Still following this great story, girl! What happens next? Don't make us wait too long. Love, Adriana :))

Reviewer: Cecilia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 12:43 am Title: An unhurried sense of time

Oh dear goddess what's going on with Dru?? I got this really bad feeling in the pit of my stomach about this. Believe me, this ficlet is amazing and right now you have me sitting on the edge of my seat. You and your amazing writing had my stomach in knots when Buffy was searching for Spike. More, please!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2005 - 12:34 am Title: An unhurried sense of time

would you stop with the insecure bit. this story is amazing. you are a great author. this is how the sixth season should have went. keep up the great work. please post soon. great job!!!!!

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