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Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2006 - 12:48 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

LOVE this story!! Had to go back to chapter by chapter page to be able to review just to let you know how much I'm enjoying this!!

Reviewer: fee_kh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2006 - 02:06 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

My only quibble with this and it is a small one, cause I am more than happy with the rest and as I have said before I could only wish the show had been a little - okay a lot - more like this. Anyway, I just wish Xander were a teensy bit less dense. But then I have full confidence that you know what you are doing.
As far as posting goes just bring em out when you are ready - I can say that with another what 40 chapters to go. It's just like the Guiness advert. Good things come to those who wait.
And I think they should have another recommendation level: Loved extremely

Reviewer: Buffyratt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2005 - 10:56 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

Good good good!!!

Do I recommend this story..?!?!? A resounding YES

Reviewer: zanthine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2005 - 09:54 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

Really enjoying this story. I didn't see the Tara/Oz coming; but I'm hoping you'll run with it. It makes sense in a weird kind of way! Also very curious to find out what the deal with Dawn is; and why the Knights who say "Key" are still after her. Hoping for more soon!

Reviewer: hmm... Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2005 - 02:43 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

great chapter!!! i get so excited when i see an update - you have all the characters voices done so well its crazy! i'm sorry to hear about all the pain you are in - hopefully you will be fealing better soon :)

Reviewer: blodiebear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2005 - 04:33 am Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

loved it. it's about time that buffy said that she loved spke. even if he didn't hear it. i hope she says it again soon. keep up the great work.

Reviewer: Cam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2005 - 12:24 am Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

Wow. I just read the last chapter and I can't wait for an update. I think this story is beautifully crafted and I look forward to seeing just where you take the characters.

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2005 - 04:20 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

that was nice of xander to help with the bags. anya's musings about them has me curious. i do hope she can find someone who appreciates her. spike thinking that he would go to dust when buffy died, very very old is classic spike. that is just so how he is. i love that they put the crib in with buffy and spike. i has thought it would go in with tara but yet again you pleasently surprise me. glad Oz voiced his suspisions about willow with spike and buffy. now i want to know if tara will revele to them what she saw. it still makes me giggle that giles is resercheing vampire pregnacys.....hehehhee. he is right tho. will they ever get a break? angelus.....such a bastard btu i have to admit i just love angelus. i'd stake angel in a second btu angelus....great character. oh oh oh oh......she said it......she told him and he heard her and smiled.....aawww..made my day..*sighs* wolfram and hart used an urn or osiris....*giggles* xander can be sooooo narrowminded tho i am so glad they all stood up to his idiocy. casey bringing balloons is the cutest. what a good kid. wonderful chapter and sooo fullof things going on as always. i do hope you feel ok hunny

Reviewer: mlgm Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2005 - 03:42 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

Great chapter. By the way, did Wesley mean to say Connor was awake again as he came down the steps, rather than Spike's awake again? Love your Tara & Oz, need more scenes with them. Maybe they'll go tell Willow to watch out for Angel? Or maye that will fall to Xander.

Reviewer: beasleysmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2005 - 03:22 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

Where do I start. I have just read the first book, the in between, and now what you have so far, and I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!!!!!! I am totaly hooked. I so wish this is how the show really went, cause i have to say I am loving all the spuffy going on. The fact that Joss never went into to much detail as to how Dawn came about used to really bug me, but now when you bring the whole Spike/Buffy thng up that would have been perfect. I don't want to write a novel or anything, but I can't wait for the next post! I hope you feel better soon(what ever is aling you)! Speedy recovery! Kuddos!

Reviewer: Gail Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 09:03 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

I thought this chapter flowed very well from scene to scene. It was filled with wonderful moments as well. Great job of choreographing all the many characters and, at the same time, keeping them so vivid. I hope you feel better. :)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 06:58 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

No need to worry about the chapter - would I say. I don't now why you thought so. :) Willow used the Urn of Osiris too to bring Buffy back... loved Spike's musing about what he would do .. seems he would love to have a baby of his own like Buffy does. Take you time hun, no pressure, right?

Reviewer: Miski Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 06:55 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

Love the story. I am hoping that Spike and Buffy will find out that they already have one child together and it's good to see Dawn displaying some traits inherited from her dad. She definitely wouldn't mind having some siblings and according to this chapter that is very much possible, yay!! I like Xander but he needs to come around and understand Buffy and Spike soon or things will not work out. Well I guess when Giles goes back to Sunnydale he will find the journals and figure out about Dawn's origins....that will be interesting...hmmm...Keep up the awesome work that you are doing with this story. Seriously you deserve major congratulations.

Reviewer: MG Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 03:06 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

I really should have reviewed this fic & it's predecessor before now, and I can only apologise for not doing so. This is a wonderfully well-written story. I love the back-story of Dawn's search for who she is and who she belongs to. I'm enjoying your characterisations. Buffy's gradual move back into the everyday world makes a lot more sense than the way it was portrayed on the show & I always wondered why Angel never lost his soul when he first looked at his son. Your Spike is wonderful, as he deserves to be!! All in all, it's safe to say that I am really enjoying this story and thank you for updating as frequently as you do. I'm sure there will always be people nagging at you to be quicker etc, but why rush quality!! I hope that you feel better soon. Take care, MG

Reviewer: jane Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 02:18 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

Quick one cos I've got to meet the footie team in 10 mins. Great to see the gang all together. What's that about Oz and Tara? They would make a lovely couple. I think you update amazingly quickly so don't worry about taking your time. Brilliant chappie.

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 01:50 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

Seeing Buffy and Spike bonding with the baby is just so cute (and a preview of things to come? *hopeful look*). There's something just inherently funny about the whole gang preparing for apocalypses while at the same time playing house and taking care of a baby. =)

Reviewer: Kimber Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 01:16 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

I think you did a wonderful job......there seems to be hope for Xander, maybe if he stays away from Willow...... So much good about the chapter.....nice to have Anya be a functioning member.....

Reviewer: Kristen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 12:24 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

Well that update made my day! Love the idea of Buffy being pregnant! When is Dawn going to tell everyone about what she found out? Hope you feel better!

Reviewer: Pin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 12:04 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

I have to apologize for not reviewing sooner. I love this story and its predecessor. You've created a great 'yarn' by adding new characters and weaving them so well into the base group. I think you did a great job with the Tara & Oz moment with Willow in the last chapter. You can just feel her craziness cranking up for a big blow. I like the relationship between Spike & Buffy and her hopes for a child. I've always liked the idea that they are really Dawn's parents and am glad to see you using it here. I like your Anya and hope things work for her. I always thought that she needed to be more than an appendage of Xander - my least-favorite character. I think that your Giles is more realistic than the one we saw on the last season of the show. Your Giles learns and grows and has more flexibility. Your Angel - creepily good. ;o) Thanks again for giving us such a wonderful time and I look forward to more - whenever you are able to write.

Reviewer: Shippy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 09:05 am Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

I've loved this chapter as all your others. You are a fantastic author. And I am truly sorry to hear that you are in pain. I only hope that it will soon be over. Thinking of you...

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 05:31 am Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

Great chapter!!! I love all the new information you've put into it, and the addition of Casey at the end...I was just waiting for Buffy to smack Xander one if he didn't back off...and I loved the little look that Spike and Buffy gave each other after Oz' answer that he and Tara are just friends...hmmmm....can't wait for more, but don't rush yourself!!! I hope you feel better soon!!

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 04:09 am Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

Another one of your naughty lurkers comes out to say "Thank-you" for posting this story. I've been loving this story and I'm ashamed i didn't say it before. But as much as I love reading this story, if you need to give your hands a rest please do so. We want you healthy. Take as much time as you need. We'll wait.

Reviewer: lynn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 03:53 am Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

like your style so much. always bringin the fun in.

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 03:01 am Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

Great chapter nia love dawn showing more of her father spike trait's cause she is daddy little girl well teen age girl.Can't wait till dawn till dawn tell's buffy and spike the truth about them being her parent's.and i loved buffy telling jerk zander off and backing her men spike she love's spike so much and now spike know it too with a happy smile on his face just love them togather.So buffy want's to have spike baby why do i have this good feeling that she may just get that wish as will dawn geting a baby brother are sister.So not good angel is on his way to sunnydale and am just loving casey with all the different ballon's for spike so funny.Barvo Agine Nia Sorry To Hear Your Still In Pain Hope it lesson soon.You just get better soon nia and not worry about updateing on time cause am one fan who can wait for the next great chapter of origins.Hug's

Reviewer: Kari Mouke Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 02:34 am Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

I thought the chapter worked really well. It touched nicely upon everyone's lives and then drew most of them together at the end. Of course I found the end to be scary, but than again I'm frightened of balloons and had a total Anya moment thinking, 'That's horrible why would anyone give someone a bunch of balloons?' Then I remembered not everyone is deathly alergic to them. So, good on Casey. Nice gift.

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