[Report This]Date: 10/30/2011 - 03:20 am Title: Don't cry little sister
I'm obviously reading this 6 years after it was published...but I want to say I love it, and that I REALLY hope for Wawn, Desley. Whatever their ship name would be... :) This is fantastic, really. Thank you for writing it.
[Report This]Date: 06/14/2006 - 09:14 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
Excellent story, I really like some parts of it, but the plot action has been a little slow. This is my only complaint, as I found myself skimming a little to get to the action.
Date: 04/24/2005 - 03:56 am Title: Don't cry little sister
I love this story and can't wait to read more. Thank you for all your effort and time.
Date: 04/14/2005 - 10:42 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
OK, wow. I just found this at the Love's Last Glimpse Awards a couple nights ago, and have been reading incessantly since, starting with Origins. Wow. This has got to be one of THE best twists I've seen on Buffy's return. And can I just say that I love Wes too? And I worry about Willow's evil-like tendencies. You write Tara beautifully - Oz's comments about something in her nature just drawing you in were spot on. I sense Ganya in the air *g*. My goodness, I can't possibly relate how much I am in love with this story in one measly review! Definitely add me to the regular readers list - you've got me hooked! I like your idea that Dawn in from Buffy and Spike; are Kirsten and the mysterious baby Will from them as well? You cliffhanger-woman, you.... Your quotes set the tone of the chapters quite well. Some other authors have done it and it just serves to chop up the storytelling a bit - but you make them flow in quite nicely. And I think I'm going to have to listen to Alice in Chains after reading all these wonderful lyrics. Keep up the incredibly work - you have such talent for characterization! Looking forward to more!
Date: 04/14/2005 - 11:50 am Title: Don't cry little sister
Wow you had an unbelievable 51 reviews for the last chapter. And every one deserved, this is a great story. Personally i'm really looking forward to Spike finding out what he is to Dawn.
Date: 04/14/2005 - 03:01 am Title: Don't cry little sister
loved it!!!!!! post soon. can't wait for more.
Date: 04/13/2005 - 08:04 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
So good it sent shivers down my spine. Great chappie.
Date: 04/13/2005 - 07:05 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
Another great chapter, loved the look into Dawn's sense of responsibility, something that was keenly missed in season six. Are Tara or Dawn or anyone going to bother to warn Willow, Xander, or Anya? Would be a wonderful way to find out that Willow is the cause of much of the damage.
Date: 04/12/2005 - 11:01 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
I like it... Nice turn of events.
Date: 04/12/2005 - 09:45 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
It's late now *yawn* but I had to read the new chapter. Seems good that Spike is feeling better. That's good. They'll need everyone ready when Angelus arrives.. The Dawn POV was moving. Looking forward for more. *Night.
Date: 04/12/2005 - 07:39 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
Great chapter.....I can't wait for Spike and Buffy to find out Dawn is really their daughter.......and what connection Spike is going to feel for this baby of his great grandmama and grand papa's.......and I think Wes and Dawn is cute, he can wait a few years.....LOL
Date: 04/12/2005 - 05:20 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
The details in this chapter made it resonate. I ache for Dawn and her perceived role in everybody's injuries. Buffy is very sympathetic, even on auto pilot. I love the way you're writing her loving relationship with Dawn. What is Spike going to think, waking up to a baby that smells of Darla and Angel? I can't wait to find out!
Date: 04/12/2005 - 05:02 am Title: Don't cry little sister
One thing I really like about this story is -- aside from the obvious villains -- everyone is so sympathetic. It's something the show sometimes lost sight of. Awaiting eagerly, as always.
Date: 04/12/2005 - 03:45 am Title: Don't cry little sister
Another great chapter. I just wonder what Spike is going to do when he wakes up next to a baby that smells like Angel. Hmmm... that should be fun.
Date: 04/12/2005 - 02:54 am Title: Don't cry little sister
j'adore cette histoire je peux pas m'empecher d'etre exciter par la suite
Date: 04/12/2005 - 02:45 am Title: Don't cry little sister
Poor Dawnie. She's so torn. She has always loved Spike, but now that she knows he is her father ... it's killing her even more to see her like this. I wonder what Kristen's part in all of this is. Also, Dawn sounded awfully I shouldn't be here type thing. I was really worried about that. She picked up some in the end though, thank goodness. I do love this story, and I eagerly await for the next update.
Date: 04/12/2005 - 02:29 am Title: Don't cry little sister
Looks like our wesley has the hot's for dawn me think's spike won't be to happy with that nor will her boyfriend casey.love buffy offering spike her blood to show him how much she love's and trust him and loved how much dawn wanted to be close to her parents can't wait till she tell's them the truth.Barvo NIA BARVO
Date: 04/12/2005 - 02:27 am Title: Don't cry little sister
I can just picture Spike laying on the bed w/a newborn baby tucked up against him! What a picture! I can't wait to see what happens when Spike finds out about Connor and who his parents are and that Angelus is back! Will we be seeing any more of Willow in the next chapter? Please update soon!
Date: 04/12/2005 - 02:07 am Title: Don't cry little sister
Wonderful healing chapter sweetie. I just love all the small, quiet moments you have built this chapter around. I feel so sorry for Dawn and the weight of guilt that she carries. I can't say I'd feel any less guilty if in her situation. I love how you have captured her vulnerability, youthfuness, and yet infused it with a quiet strength born of love. Just lovely, Nia. Her crush on Wes is adorable, and quite understandable. He is some yummy British eye candy, isn't he? *sigh* If only he weren't so much older than Dawn. Loved the moment between Spike and Buffy, when she fed him the medicated blood and then her own blood. Very hot - his growl, his whispered "Please", his knuckle rubbing against her mound. *fans self* Very sexy, very sensual. Just the promise of what is to come when he is better, makes that scene all the more hot. I can't wait to see what Giles learns and if Angelus comes to Sunnydale. Amazing chapter again Nia! Oh, and love the chapter title! Yeah, Keifer Sutherland was sexy evil in that movie. It's what really kicked off my love of vampires.
Date: 04/12/2005 - 01:50 am Title: Don't cry little sister
I love this story. It's got such a nice mix of elements-romance, passion, tenderness, adventure, horror, mayhem, good chracterization, lovely plot with just enough smut. Lovely lovely story. Update soon. Until next time.
Date: 04/12/2005 - 01:32 am Title: Don't cry little sister
Oh wow. It's the calm before the storm! If I read one of the last chapters correctly, Tara's got some serious mojo in store for buffering the defenses...hopefully take Willow down a peg or two and have Wes incorporate some nasty bugs =P But I love your work, keep it up! I can't wait for the storm to hit!
Date: 04/12/2005 - 01:30 am Title: Don't cry little sister
ooh, is it possible that we're seeing the beginnings of a Dawn/ Wesley pairing? (please say yes) and just who is that Kirsten chick? Lotsa questions to keep me eagerly awaiting the next chapter...
Date: 04/12/2005 - 01:30 am Title: Don't cry little sister
Yep, Sally, we like you... Another great chapter. Loved the Buffy and Spike interaction as well as the bits with Dawn. Very well done emotions, as always. And I think Wes has been around Angel too long, thinking that way about a high school student. LOL
Date: 04/12/2005 - 01:24 am Title: Don't cry little sister
Poor Spike...he was really pretty beaten up. I like Wes' thoughts - about how Dawn was turning into a woman of his type...and Wes' afterthought. I like how everyone has gelled like a family - makes me wonder when the shoes' going to drop. :) Awesome as always!
Date: 04/12/2005 - 01:22 am Title: Don't cry little sister
Loving it so far!! I'm so anxious to see what Angelous does (or more so... who he tries to kill)!
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