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Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 09:51 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Awe, Addie, it was wonderful! First thanks for the update :) I'm glad Buffy came to her decision to start the relationship with Spike (this is always worth it *smile*). Now I hope they can sort everything out :)) Loved it.

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 07:34 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Excellent chapter. Glad to see the two of them in full admission and wanting to make everything work. Love hearing the two of them saying I love you to each other and truly meaning it. I hope nothing ruins the morning after when they wake up. I'm very happy right now, content like our satiated lovers, to read this chapter. Look forward to when you are inspired for the next update.

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 05:23 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

The wait was worth it. The story is great. You are going to be writing more soon, I hope. Still have a couple of lose threads that should be tucked into the story. Can't wait for an update and congrats on graduating.

Reviewer: Gail Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 05:18 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Great job! I think the pacing of the story has worked well leading up this emotional culmination, and I really liked the idea of Buffy finding and reading his bits of poetry. Looking forward to the rest of the story.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 05:04 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

I really enjoyed it. I thought it was perfect

Reviewer: MonaT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 05:02 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

*pants* *gulps* *pants harder* Yeah. . . . oh baby. . . yeah.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 03:49 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

The whole story was brilliantly written. Relationships do not happen in 20 minutes, especially when the relationship was not a good one to begin with. Sorry, you got flak because Buffy and Spike were not slapping thighs as soon as they saw each other. I really enjoyed to story and hope you keep it up.

Reviewer: demonica mills Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 01:37 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

aw! just...aw! They are so sweet!

Reviewer: NEO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 12:57 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

great chapter, I think Authors listen to some reviewers too much, it is your story to do with as you wish!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2005 - 12:52 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

loved it. that was sooo cute. glad you posted. keep up the great work. hope nothing else gets in their way of happiness. angel better leave them alone!!! post soon.

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2005 - 11:14 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

loved the chapter.... well worth the wait................

Reviewer: riam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2005 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

great chapter, love the spuffyness, and giles finally realizing that he was wrong. Keep up the good work see ya

Reviewer: Karyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2005 - 10:11 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

it's perfect ...and don't let anybody tell you different. your a great writer and i have loved all your stories. You pace it how you want it..it's your story after all !

Reviewer: Juanita Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2005 - 01:32 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

I am so happy I joined your mailing list. I probably never would started reading this story otherwise. I am enjoying the speed at which it is progressing, and the outcomes are great. Cordy/Angel and Spike/Buffy, but slowly. Love it. The plot is very well-written and very much thought-through, which just makes it that much better. Hoping for an update soon.

Reviewer: Gail Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2005 - 01:42 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Great chapter full of good explanations and breakthroughs. I like that Cordy said Angel was capable of slipping even if his soul is anchored, and Buffy's realization that each "trial" made them weaker. Good too -- the very much needed apology by Giles (which ME seemed to think unnecessary). Funny banter between S&B :).

Reviewer: Tam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2005 - 12:18 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

Okay I'm all caught up now and thoroughly enjoying the ride *grin* I'm not going to beg for faster updates- real life can be SUCH a pain I know lol - but just know that when you do update someone (me!) will be doing the happy happy joy joy dance before diving in to read! I really love how you're exploring each character and their thoughts and emotions pertaining to certain events. It gives them such depth and I personally adore that in an author. Bringing Cordelia back was a wonderful thing and hopefully will be just what Angel (and maybe Conner?) needs to stay on the right path. I think you're doing an awesome job and I fully intend on checking out the other post-chosen/NFA fics on your site. Cheers and happy writing!!

Reviewer: Miela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2005 - 06:31 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Love this chapter! Okaaaay. Well, not like I don't love the others too. As always, I adore your style, and I'm enjoying every bit of this story so far. :) Most fanfics go straight to the good parts. But you're not too generous with them, which makes them even better. Anticipating your next chapter. I'm really looking forward to it. ;)

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2005 - 05:48 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Very excellent with the splainy stuff. I loved the line about Cordy being a higher being and Willow saying that she always throught she was one so why not be the real thing (or words to that affect). So you think these two will finally get some honest time to share feelings and smoochies and more, or are they both still gonna just hint and flutter away? EXCELLENT TALE. Looking forward to more please.

Reviewer: demonica mills Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2005 - 01:45 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

great update! nurse buffy rules! very much enjoyed it

Reviewer: WolfSpider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 03:02 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

WOW I almost missed this update. I knew you had been really busy so i was waiting. YEAHHHHHHH so glad I peaked in. Excellent interaction with each character. Cordy being all "knowledge woman" that is weird but good,giving her a more solid ground than an air head. Buffy giving into some feelings is really nice. Willow hurrying Giles out, nice...now Buffy and Spike can discuss things *grins*. Update when you can..I will be checking and waiting patiently

Reviewer: Pin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 12:40 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

Welcome back and I'm delighted to see a new chapter. I really have enjoyed this story a lot and love the way you've worked through the evolution of the situation. Thanks for the explanation of the Shanshu and why Spike really is the only champion! I'll look forward to your next posting, but appreciate the fact that real life actually can get in the way of my entertainment!! Take care and thanks again.

Reviewer: Pam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 08:19 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 08:14 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

No prob with the delay. I hope when you start the other fics you'll tell us (and post here, too or at least annouce it via the yahoo group.
I really loved the chapter. Spike was chosen above Angel from the PTB, the banter between him and Buffy, Buffy and Cordelia going along well, Buffy summarizing her relationship with Angel, clever Willow leaving them alone, Giles giving their blessings.. Now only Spike has to see that Buffy really loves him. But all good things will come in time, right? Take care.

Reviewer: Katrina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 06:18 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Fab chapter - love how you're moving this along. Happy to wait when the story is this good! Thanks for an great read :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2005 - 05:23 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

"Well, yeah. I was deadest."--That whole argument was absolutley priceless! Your muse is an absolute genius. And the speil Cordelia gave... wow, the shanshu being about Spike all along, what an original idea. So obvious and yet, with the many many possibly (easily) hundreds of fanfics I've read, I've never heard before. And after you explained it, it seemed so terribly obvious. Only problem with the whole shanshu... I guess Spike doesn't get to live forever, but I suppose I'll live. Really wonderful, chapter that put together well and had some super new insights. I'll be looking forward to you next update!

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