Date: 12/31/2004 - 09:34 am Title: Chapter 1
what an awesome beginning!
Date: 12/30/2004 - 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awe, the start is awesome! I'm late in reading, but I'm enjoying it very much.
Date: 12/27/2004 - 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful beginning. I appreciate you jumping straight to the plot. It is refreshing not to have to read several chapters, before the real story begins. Your choice of words were very descriptive, and made me eager to read more.
Date: 12/27/2004 - 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Once again your story is a hit with me. I love how you write spuffy and B/William. More please.
Date: 12/27/2004 - 07:21 am Title: Chapter 1
I love your writing. When i saw this story posted, I was excited I loved the chapter...looking forward to your updates.
Date: 12/27/2004 - 05:49 am Title: Chapter 1
A very nice start. I haven't seen too many "time travel" stories. This looks like a very good beginning. Hope to ree more soon.
Date: 12/27/2004 - 05:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Lovely. I can't wait to read more. A touching beginning that makes my heart ache just a bit.
Date: 12/27/2004 - 05:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Awesome start!! Update soon