Date: 12/25/2004 - 11:40 pm Title: Over Now
loved the way the chapter ended
Date: 12/25/2004 - 11:30 pm Title: Loyalty
kicking Hank out? Sounds great
Date: 12/25/2004 - 11:27 pm Title: Ammunition
sorry that Spike lost his job, but glad for what he did.
Date: 12/25/2004 - 11:24 pm Title: Father Knows Best
never thought Buffy would tell Hank
Date: 12/25/2004 - 11:20 pm Title: Unbelievable
What a roller coaster ..
Date: 12/25/2004 - 11:19 pm Title: Unbelievable
What a roller coaster ..
Date: 12/25/2004 - 11:13 pm Title: Go To Your Room
Glad for their decision to be more than friends - and belated Happy Birthday!
Date: 12/25/2004 - 11:08 pm Title: Time to Party
;-) What a way of meeting Hank!
Date: 12/25/2004 - 11:05 pm Title: Serendipity
So Buffy moved out, near him?
Date: 12/25/2004 - 10:59 pm Title: Explanations
wonder if Spike can do what he intends.
Date: 12/25/2004 - 10:56 pm Title: Misunderstandings
Yeah, go Buffy, ask him!
Date: 12/25/2004 - 10:52 pm Title: No More 5 by 5
I'm still reading - hope Buffy will forget so easy as she thinks she does.... whatever she did.
Date: 12/25/2004 - 10:40 pm Title: Settling In
That was nice, the interaction
Date: 12/25/2004 - 10:33 pm Title: Agreements
Excuse me - I thought she was a whore, too ::I’m a whore, which isn’t exactly a lie:: I wonder what she is than...
Date: 12/25/2004 - 10:28 pm Title: Questions and Answers
Oh my - Hank is the boss of the firm that get payed to let the brothel be open where his daughter works? Wow
Date: 12/25/2004 - 10:23 pm Title: Appointments
Looking forward to read on ...
Date: 12/23/2004 - 02:25 pm Title: A Month's Time
I would have loved a little more smut. But like everyone here great story!
Date: 12/23/2004 - 08:57 am Title: A Month's Time
I absolutly loved the story. You are an extrodinary author. Please keep up the good work.
Date: 12/23/2004 - 08:47 am Title: A Month's Time
loved the ending! I really loved this story....Well done you did a great job :)
Date: 12/23/2004 - 07:53 am Title: A Month's Time
Excellent ending!
Date: 12/23/2004 - 06:31 am Title: A Month's Time
A wonderful ending to a great story. I looked forward to each update. You made everything tie together into one awesome story.
Date: 12/23/2004 - 05:17 am Title: A Month's Time
Great ending to a great story. It was really sweet. And I can't wait to read more of your work.
Date: 12/23/2004 - 03:40 am Title: A Month's Time
that was great i love your story
the only but is...if i were buffy...i wouldn't have forgiven my mother so easily after what she put her through...i mean...she had to prostitute herself in order to make a living just becos her mother couldn't stand up to her..well that just my opinion ;)
anyway i love what you did with it...love how hank went down
thanx for all your effort!! and all your stories!!!
Author's Response: yeah, you're right about how lenient Buffy was with her mother...I probably should've done more with that part of the story...but then again, it might've taken away from the story as a whole, I'm not sure
Date: 12/23/2004 - 02:39 am Title: A Month's Time
This is a well written fic with fairly good plot. If you're doing a re-write, I would put more smut in, but that's just me. As far as I'm concerned it's good just the way it is (but more smut is never a bad thing).
Author's Response: I couldn't agree more about smut...I'm just skittish about writing it LOL:)
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