Date: 12/21/2004 - 11:03 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Yay-big fight scene, a singing Spike, and way hot sex. A Merry Xmas indeed! I'm so sad to see this one come to an end, but please update soon.
Date: 12/21/2004 - 10:42 am Title: Chapter Ten
I know I don't review as often as I should - I'm usually feeding a baby at the same time, but I will say that not everyone who reviews knows what the hell they're talking about. This story is a real story with a real plot, that involves conflict and even a little angst. Fluffy pieces are exactly that. And yes Ido love fluffy pieces, I don't think most people could handle a fluff piece that's this long. Just remember, there are plenty of people who LOVE those terrible baby fics where everything is just suddenly a bed of roses, recycling the same one dimensional plot over and over. Your story is good, but not everyone is looking for good. In the words of Nautibitz, some people are just reading fics for "masturbatory purposes", I'm sure there are people who are skimming your work for the smut. You write good smut (which I do appreciate), but I'm a plot girl. Take care and don't put too much stock in the reviews.... even mine :)
Date: 12/20/2004 - 10:58 pm Title: Chapter Ten
ok, ok Spike didn't sleep with Deijira... YAY!! :P lol great chapter, i want to see if Buffy and Spike have a "conversation" of him waking up in Deijira's bed :P lol Please keep sending!!
Date: 12/20/2004 - 10:07 pm Title: Chapter Ten
THANK YOU SO MUCH FO NOT HAVING SPIKE CHEAT ON BUFFY. I DON'T THINK I WOULD HAVE BEEN ABLE TO TAKE THAT. KEEPU UP THE GOOD WORK.
Date: 12/20/2004 - 09:37 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Well I for one have faith in your writing and know to "trust you", if it should even come down to that, which it really shouldn't because you are doing this for the sake of OUR enjoyment, not for any gain of your own. Bottom line, it's your fic. Even if you HAD Spike cheat on Buffy, it would have only been for the good of the plot, not because you wanted to piss off the readers. i'm sorry you got bad reviews over this!! People need to learn to have patience, and I mean, you already promised Spuffy, it's not like it's going to wind up with a Spike/OC ending!!! So keep up the good work, and know that I am LOVING this story!!
Date: 12/20/2004 - 07:43 pm Title: Chapter Ten
i knew u wouldn't have spike cheat on buffy! u r doing such a great job with the story so far!!!! update soon!
Date: 12/20/2004 - 04:41 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Ok.. I did actually think that you had Spike sleep with the demon hoe... but I didn't write off the story. I'm especially glad that I didn't now... Can't wait for more!!!!!
Date: 12/20/2004 - 03:41 pm Title: Chapter Ten
AHH! You must write more, and ASAP! The twist with the way that you made me think that Spike slept with Dejira was great. A little bit of a twist makes the story the best kind to read. As long as they end up together in the end, I'm happy. Keep up the good work.
Date: 12/20/2004 - 01:53 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Another Great chapter. You continue to write I look forward to reading this story. I like the twists and turns PLease continue to update soon and often
Date: 12/20/2004 - 11:06 am Title: Chapter Ten
I thought it was pretty obvious in the last chapter that Spike merely woke up in skanky ho's bed, and didn't think that he had actually had sex with her. Your writing is gettng better and better. Don't let a few party poopers spoil your fun. I am sorry that a few hasty comments have left you with feeling that you need to explain yourself. You owe the reader NOTHING. It's your story.
Date: 12/20/2004 - 07:21 am Title: Chapter Ten
hey i'm all up for twist plots!!! do gives us as many as you want!! it's your story really you're the mastermind behind all this...and it's turning out great!!! awesome...really i have faith in thee!!!! although i was a little worried...but that's just the anxiousness thanx so much for the story (ies) and for updating so often!!! keep on doing your fantastic job!! as always...
Date: 12/20/2004 - 07:06 am Title: Chapter Ten
Don't listen to them. I knew you wouldn't let Spike cheat on Buffy. I knew when he couldn't remember what had happened he wasn't a participant. He drinks way too much to not recall the night before, had to be drugs. The spinning head was a good clue too. Love the story, especially the bits of Spuffiness!!! I look forward to each new chapter and really appreciate the frequency of the updates!!!
Date: 12/20/2004 - 06:49 am Title: Chapter Ten
definately action packed! great job!
Date: 12/20/2004 - 06:48 am Title: Chapter Nine
im sorry I didn't review this one when everyone else bitched you out...you need some action or drama in a fic to get people's interest and while fluff is great...it's better with some sparks in it....lol
Date: 12/20/2004 - 05:28 am Title: Chapter Ten
I still dig the story, so you've got at least one faithful reader backing you:) Please keep it coming!
Date: 12/20/2004 - 04:17 am Title: Chapter Ten
luv your story and all the plot twist. Giles showing up, Spike sleeps with enemy, not. Luv they way Buff stands up for Spike against Giles and doesn't let that slutty woman turn her against Spike. Keep it coming. Spikeztruluv.
Date: 12/20/2004 - 03:52 am Title: Chapter Ten
Hey, I'm liking this. I admit that I wasn't so sure at first, but I'm really into it now and I wouldn't have stopped reading. I know things would have gotten better. I never even believed that Spike would cheat on her and I knew Buffy wouldn't have listened to that bitch. I have to say she really is a bitch...lol. Anyway, I like where this is going and I can't wait to see what you do next=)
Date: 12/20/2004 - 03:47 am Title: Chapter Ten
This is a great story, and it would be rediculously boring without plot twists. Some people like milk, others meat. Personaly, I'm a carnivore. Thanks for the update!
Date: 12/19/2004 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter Nine
please update again soon
Date: 12/19/2004 - 11:13 pm Title: Chapter Nine
although I'm not freaking--you've just ruined the story for me...
Author's Response: Please, as I asked in my author's note, trust me. The story isn't over yet. You might want to give it another chapter before you condemn in. I think I deserve that much...
Date: 12/19/2004 - 10:44 pm Title: Chapter Nine
DEJIRA IS A BITCH. HOPE SPIKE AND BUFFY KILL HER SLOWLY. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
Date: 12/19/2004 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter Nine
I'm loving every second of this. I can't wait for more. Plot and fluffy naughty feelings, it's fantastic.
Date: 12/19/2004 - 06:27 pm Title: Chapter Nine
arrrggh damn Deijira demon, i hate her >:( I want Spuffy! :( Great chapter!! loved it ;)
Date: 12/19/2004 - 01:50 pm Title: Chapter Nine
i'm on the edge of my seat here! soooo damn good this story! please, can i have some more? =)
Date: 12/19/2004 - 01:49 pm Title: Chapter Nine
I have full faith on your fluff delivery, and can I just say how funny I found Giles telling Buffy that he was sure that the grean breathe demons were there in groups of three!
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