Date: 10/20/2004 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm really enjoying this. The idea of Buffy seeing what Spike was like in his pre-vamp days was done really creatively. One thing, though, and this probably only bothered me because it's one of my pet peeves. Prose and poetry are not the same thing. Prose is writing not in verse--the opposite of poetry in fact. Just one of those picky english major things. :)
Date: 10/20/2004 - 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Too sweet! Buffy being in William's past life was very romantic and a great read. It was a nice touch that both, Spike and Buffy were able to remember their time toghter. Will Buffy take more trips into the past?
Date: 10/20/2004 - 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was positively ADORABLE!!!! I can't wait for more
Date: 10/20/2004 - 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a GREAT Chapter. I love the time twist and the emotion and tenderness was fantastic. Please continue and update soon.