Date: 08/23/2012 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 12
Gorgeous. Loved this... very sweet, and you did a deft job keeping Buffy in character without making her as bitchy toward Spike as she was on the show (which, technically, must mean she's not in character, but she was believable as Buffy... if only the ME writers had bothered to make Buffy no so hard-headed).
Author's Response: I think she was portrayed (as was everyone from time to time) somewhat inconsistently on the show. One minute she's a caring, sympathetic character, and then she's being a bitch for no good reason. Maybe she was fighting her own attraction to him?
Date: 11/03/2011 - 06:22 am Title: Chapter 12
Wouldn't be right if they didn't break the bed. Glad they got their happy. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :)
Date: 10/28/2011 - 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 12
Liked it very much.
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/27/2011 - 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 12
It ends well then. No dissapointment here, I just expected them to find Adam while in the Initiative. This has been a good story. A little better attitude from both Giles and Spike made it all better.
Author's Response: In this time-line, Adam probably isn't a problem yet. The army and Travers will find him, I'm sure. I did think about having Giles call Buffy and Spike and tell them to come back because they'd found Adam, but I didn't really have any ideas for why they'd be needed if he hadn't been activated yet.