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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2011 - 03:46 am Title: XII

She is so calm and reassuring during her visits, I just still wonder what is the ultimate point of them. And why she would still lie to William. Still, there are questions. Hopefully, a quick update?

Author's Response: *blush* Hopefully, it will be quick. I really am going to do my best. As for the ultimate point of Buffy's visits...all in good time, my dear. All in good time. ;)

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2011 - 05:13 am Title: XII

Great chapter, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2011 - 11:29 pm Title: XII

So heartfelt. Loved this chapter and the way you always show their emotions without beating us readers over our heads with it. It's a subtle sort of thing that creates this unique atmosphere of the story. LOVE your writing style!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Since the story is told from William's point of view, I'm trying to make the narrative fit his character as much as possible. Restrained, but still suitably Victorian. I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far. Thanks again for commenting. :)

Reviewer: ejmlam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2011 - 06:43 pm Title: XII

I was so happy to see an update to this story. I love the way you have written William in this story. His loneliness is so palpable, it's heartwrenching. I look forward to more. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you! When I first set out to write this story, I didn't intend for it to be quite so angsty (or so long!), but once I got started, I just couldn't help myself. I do love exploring William's character. :)

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2011 - 03:54 pm Title: XII

Very poignant William, he's sinking.

Author's Response: Yes, he is. He's been on a decline for more than a year, and I don't think he has any idea how to stop it. We'll learn why that is, in greater detail, in the next few chapters. Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2011 - 01:43 am Title: XII

I'm so glad you posted an update. I have no idea what's going on, but I'm enthralled.

Author's Response: My goal is to keep the readers as confused as William. It's a bit of an experiment on my part, but so far it seems to be working. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks so much for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2011 - 01:24 am Title: XII

Thank you for another wonderful update. I'm sorry to hear of your woes and hope things are getting better.

Author's Response: Thank you! We were very fortunate in that nothing was damaged by the falling trees; they were just a huge pain to clean up. I'm glad you liked the chapter though. I hope the next one won't be so long in coming. :)

Reviewer: Puddinhead Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2011 - 11:03 pm Title: XII

I was so happy to see an update for this story. As I've told you before, this is one of my favorite ongoing stories. Your language is perfect for the time and your William is beautifully flawed - petty and wounded.

I am just finishing my William story, and I can't tell you how many people have emailed me or left notes in which they recommend your "Forward to Time Past". There is a lot of love out there for that story and for this one as well.

Lovely update.

Author's Response: *blush* Really? I'm flattered that "Forward to Time Past" is thought of so highly! I've heard great things about "Yours, William" as well. I read the first two chapters, but when I learned how close you are to finishing, I decided to wait until it's done before I continue. As much as I torment my readers, making them wait for updates, I don't like to wait for myself. Evil, I know. ;) I'm so happy you're enjoying the flawed William in this story. I've had a few readers express distaste for him, particularly in regards to his attitude with his servants. I know he isn't quite the sweetheart my last William was, but I don't think he could be, given what he's been through. Anyway, I always love it when someone mentions his characterization without prefacing their remark with "What an asshole!" Thank you! ;D

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