Argh! I can't believe you rewrote this 12 times! It's gorgeous. It can't have been so bad on try 5! I wish I could travel through time and have reviewed this chapter back when it was new.

This is a terrific story and you solidly kick my ass as a writer, I mean that in the best way possible. This is gold.

Author's Response: I just noticed you're also writing a William story, which I will definitely be checking out. There are so few William fics out there, and I have a major love for his character. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

I just discovered this story today and it's now my favorite WIP. I adore every beautiful word. I love how you take such care to keep William's thoughts and surrounding true to the time period. So many writers don't every bother. Thank you.
William's loneliness and despair breaks my heart. I can't wait to see how Buffy and William help each other. Update soon, please!

Author's Response: I can't tell you how flattered I am to know you think so highly of my writing. Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know! :)

Love the conversation. Love the final bout of clarity, and then the freak out. So many fun dynamics to their growing relationship. Looking forward to her explanation now. Pretty awesome. Update soon!