Date: 11/20/2017 - 04:30 am Title: Enemy Mine
Came over here to read story after you started revamping on AO3. This chapter is completely different! I kinda like this one better
Date: 09/13/2004 - 06:04 pm Title: Enemy Mine
Love the story. Your weaving of seasons 4 and 5 are done well. My one complaint. Constructive criticism. Your use of THAN when it should be THEN. This is very distracting to the reader when it's not correct. Otherwise, your grammar is fine.
Date: 09/13/2004 - 05:26 pm Title: Enemy Mine
Great story line. However, you use "thAn" instead of "thEn" all the time...why is this? because if you used spell check with word, that chould come up as a grammatical error. You might want to be aware of this, not just in this story, but in whatever you write for school or work...
Date: 09/08/2004 - 05:31 am Title: Enemy Mine
Dang! check it out! It's my girls! (or guys, if you are of that gender) We have Burnz, Scherezade, Kari, Cordy and if I missed anyone, sorry!! I'm feeling a whole lotta love in this review box. Yep. Sure do. Love this story! KariMouke will tell you that I bullied her into beta'ing her fics. i'm a ruthless cow., you know. So if you need any help in that area, let me know!!
Date: 09/08/2004 - 05:29 am Title: Enemy Mine
Dang! check it out! It's my girls! (or guys, if you are of that gender) We have Burnz, Scherezade, Kari, Cordy and if I missed anyone, sorry!! I'm feeling a whole lotta love in this review box. Yep. Sure do. Love this story! KariMouke will tell you that I bullied her into beta'ing her fics. i'm a ruthless cow., you know. So if you need any help in that area, let me know!!
Date: 08/29/2004 - 12:17 am Title: Enemy Mine
now it is getting really interesting. Keep up the good work Tayha
Date: 08/16/2004 - 10:30 am Title: Enemy Mine
I am enjoying this story greatly. The emotion in this story is clearly portraied in the writing. Please continue to update. Looking forward to the next chapters. High ratings all around.
Date: 08/16/2004 - 03:22 am Title: Enemy Mine
This chapter was so exciting, her hesitance for everyone to know, and the climax of the spell and her desperation to cling to Spike and their bond? Perfection. I really enjoy this story. BTW it's spelt awkward, and, intimacy. Hope that helps.
Date: 07/31/2004 - 01:54 pm Title: Enemy Mine
Interesting story. Imaginative premise. I look forward to your updates.
Date: 07/30/2004 - 11:16 am Title: Enemy Mine
Great start there. Am really liking this one it sounds well interesting. Though i must point out Dru couldn't have more then *200 or more so years* as she was turned the same year Spike was in 1880. It was one of the angel eps remember. Just wanted to point that out. But other then that it's still brilliant
Date: 07/29/2004 - 10:51 pm Title: Enemy Mine
I very much enjoyed your first chapter & I really liked Spike's attitude!!! Great job!! I'll be looking out for your next post. I hope it's soon! :)
Date: 07/29/2004 - 10:40 pm Title: Enemy Mine
Great tension so far , and showing new facets of my favorite blue eyed vamp. No Doormat Spike this guy! Looking forward to new chapters (greedy me) with pleasure! (Just a note...I think you wanted Giles to say "No smoking allowed in the flat.... not "aloud"..... though a noisy ciggie is a fun cartoony thought)
Date: 07/29/2004 - 08:35 pm Title: Enemy Mine
Gentle? Who needs to be gentle! This is absolutely favulous. Spike has an entirely different feel to him than normal and I'm loving it. A Buffy who is just itchin' to get to Spike is also something that brings on a whole lot of fun. I simply cannot wait for more of this delicious story! Thanks, Kari Mouke
Date: 07/29/2004 - 07:00 pm Title: Enemy Mine
I definitely love this fic! More? Cordykitten