[Report This]Date: 10/03/2009 - 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 8
Looks like Buffy isn't the only one who can make a mistake.
Author's Response: lol nope, mistakes are a two way street. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2009 - 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ahhh... this is so messed up!!! Good thing Faith talked some sense into William though... men can be so blind, honestly. *shakes head* And what's wrong with Buffy?? Is she just going to give up? William has got to get to her before Joyce does! I'm glad you decided to stretch this out, the more the better! :D MORE... ehm, prettty please!!! :))
Author's Response: lol I totally agree. Men can be severly blind when they want to. And its usually when they shouldn't be. lol I was going to end it sooner, but, heh, sometimes my writing takes on a life of its own. But I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reviewing! More coming soon.
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2009 - 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 8
What did her note say? GAAA! Glad Faith didnt turn out to be the skank ho she is usually portrayed as. Looking forward to seeing a happy ending :) Well Done!
Author's Response: lol You will see what the note said soon, promise! Faith had her moments in the show though. I think this is what she would have done in canon too. Glad you enjoyed, and thanks for reviewing! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2009 - 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 7
*shakes head* Poor William and his bad timing. Hope that he doesnt make the error of sleeping with Faith, but who knows.... maybe I see a 3sum in my head HEHE
Author's Response: lol Hmm, 3sum would be good, but not part of this fic lol Naughty Kitten! Glad you are liking. Thanks for the R&R!
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2009 - 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 8
Hello. Please don't stop writing, because I like this story and I would like to read the end. Update as soon as you can. Bye.
Author's Response: =D I won't stop, its almost the end now, so more will be coming up shortly. Glad you are enjoying. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2009 - 10:22 am Title: Chapter 8
I liked Faith acting as 'a translator' for William. But it seems that time is running out for both William and Buffy with her leaving.
Author's Response: Yep, Faith was good in this chapter. Thanks for reviewing! More coming soon.
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2009 - 09:02 am Title: Chapter 8
I really liked this! Hopefully Spike can get to Buffy before she leaves for good. :)
Author's Response: Glad you are liking it! Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2009 - 08:27 am Title: Chapter 8
Now that Faith has helped Spike/William to understand.. maybe she can convince Buffy..
Enjoying. And Angst is part of the story.. we understand.
Author's Response: Faith was a big help, wasn't she? I'm glad you are enjoying, every fic should have a little angst in it. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2009 - 04:53 am Title: Chapter 7
Love Faiths timing. Sure it works well against our couple, but Girl is an opportunist for sure. Hope Buffy sticks around. Seeing her will at least get things moving in his head. Looking forward for more.
Author's Response: I agree, seeing Buffy would help him along, but hmmm... what is Buffy's reaction to hearing the message he left on the machine? Well, next chapter is updated *hint hint* =P Hope you enjoy! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/01/2009 - 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ouch... Spike/Faith? :(
I didn't think that things could go more wrong. *sigh*
Author's Response: lol Don't worry, cordykitten. Aside from One Good Day, I like to have my fics with a happy ending. This is all just part of the master plan =P Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 10/01/2009 - 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 7
I don't blame William. He was hurt badly from the woman he likes a lot. On a subject that he is sensitive about. On his personality. He already feels that most people just see him as a big nerd and nothing more. But to hear that from someone you are interested in must hurt so much. So I can understand why William would need to feel that a very sexy woman wanting him and thinking of him as more than a nerd. I love what you had Cordelia say......"William may be the poetry reading, honour roll student, 'I do my parents proud' type, but he isn't really a nerd. People can have layers, you know?"
I think William needs to realize that too. That he is more than being really smart and writing poetry. That there are other parts to him. I feel that while he may be channeling Spike sometimes that Spike is slowly becoming one of his many layers. That Spike is becoming part of who he is. If that makes sense. LOL I can relate to cute and "nerdy" William and that is why I love him. I always thought that Spike and Faith would make a hot couple. I don't mind reading Spike/other either. It is Buffy/other that I have a problem with. I can only read Buffy with Spike. Spike with almost anybody. I think it may be because Spike is so hot and I want to imagine it being me on the receiving end of Spike's affections. LOL Anyways, while I find Spike and Faith hot. I hope that William realizes that sleeping with Faith may not make him feel better. Poor William.
Author's Response: Woot! I'm glad you understand why William is trying to hook up with Faith, I was beginning to be afraid that I didn't elaborate on his feelings well enough for people to understand why he was acting out. I loved that line too, Corsy is really close with him so she knows him best. Plus, its just true in every way. lol yeah, that makes sense. Thats what I'm trying to do, have him... establish his William-ness but understand his Spike-ness, lol if that makes sense.LOL and I can also relate to it too, I love William for that as well. I agree, Spike and Faith are a hot couple, but Buffy is definitely the one for him =P I can't do Spike/Other, unless its a threesome with Bufy/Faith or Buffy/Cordy. I don't read Buffy/other either, specially not with Angel lol. Oh lol what a life it would be if we were the ones with our very own Spike *sighs*. Thank you for the great, long, fantastic review, and I hope you enjoy the rest! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 10/01/2009 - 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh Oh...bad William. I hope he doesn't do anything with Faith. That would be not of the good, even tho I guess I can understand why he's doing it. I loved Xander/Anya in this chappie. Too funny. And Cordy is my fave, she's funny and honest. Loved her shallow bitch line. LOL.
Now let' s see what Buffy does after hearing that message, she does have an apology to make.
More soon please, Chan. It's so good...loved it! *hugs*
btw I'm still hoping you update "His Death Wish" =)
Author's Response: Am still working on the next chapter of HDW, just having muse problems with that fic and IDWTR. I hope to get them both up and running again, glad to know that you are still going to read it when I finally update though =D
Yep, William is acting out on his sadness and anger and hurt, I'm glad you understood that, seems someone didn't understand that. lol I love writing Cordy, I try to keep her funny and bitchy and honest like her real character, so I'm glad you like her. I also loved writing the Xan/Anya scene, was very cute/funny. I'm glad you are liking and I hope you enjoy the rest. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 10/01/2009 - 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 7
Uh-oh... bad William :( I hope Buffy waits there for him and kicks Faith out XD The Xander/Anya parts were very funny, definitely in-character.
Looking forward to more! :D *hugs*
Author's Response: I agree, William is a bad boy =( You will have to wait and see in the next chapter what happens =P I'm glad you liked the XanAnya parts, I was kinda nervous that they wouldn't be as funny as I hoped, but I think its okay now. Thanks for reviewing! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 10/01/2009 - 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 7
oh, come on, he's being an idiot. he could at least give her a chance to explain, not screw the first slut he sees. i really hope spike doesn't go through with it, i would be very disappointed in him if he did, and i might not be able to continue with this. i don't do spike/other.
Author's Response: I guess you should have read the warnings before you were so hasty, huh? People do things they might regret later when they are upset/hurting. I hope you enjoy the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 10/01/2009 - 11:52 am Title: Chapter 7
One mistake leads to another..
Author's Response: Very true. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 09/14/2009 - 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
Glad to see you updating again. :)
I hope that Cordy is right, things will go well when they find out about the different names.
Huh-huh... that didn't go well, Buffy talked too much. I hope they can fix it again.
Looking forward to more (soon).
Author's Response: heehee, yeah, I'm glad to be updating again too. lol sorry it didn't go the way you wanted it, but no worries, more is coming! I hope you enjoy the rest =D Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 09/13/2009 - 02:32 am Title: Chapter 6
William should have just confessed and not jump to conclusions. More please!
Author's Response: lol I agree, he should have, but that would make everything too easy lol. I like to make them jump through some hoops before they're happy =P Glad you are enjoying! Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 09/12/2009 - 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh dear, Buffy has some making up to do I think, great chapter, looking forward to more
Author's Response: lol Yep, she sure does. I'm gla dyou enjoyed, and I hope you enjoy the rest. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 09/11/2009 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 6
Silly Buffy! Cute chapter, cant wait to see how this all ends.
Author's Response: Thanks. The last chapter is going to be coming up soon, hope you like the rest. Thanks for reviewing *hugs and squishes*
[Report This]Date: 09/11/2009 - 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 6
I guess William is a little better at puzzles than Buffy is. Poor sweet girl. Hopefully he will forgive her.
Author's Response: haha, looks that way, huh? Glad you are enjoying and thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 09/11/2009 - 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oooo, buuurn x)
Can't wait to see what happens, and poor William/Spike!
Keep it up;)
XXX
Author's Response: lol, more coming soon, promise! I'm glad you are enjoying. Thanks for reviewing! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 09/11/2009 - 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
Just read all of the chapters right now. Don't how I missed it before. I love sweet William. He should know that some girls like men with a brain because some find it sexy. I know I do. He just needs to believe in himself and he did when he was being Spike and got a date with Buffy. Then Buffy being Buffy open her mouth and said some stupid things. His confidence in himself probably went out the door. I love Cordelia in this and how she is trying to get William and Buffy together. I know this was in a couple of chapters back but I loved it when you had Lorne in it and hinted towards William that he was interested. Great stuff.
Author's Response: lol Well, better late than never right? Glad you are enjoying it. Oh yes, men with brains are of the good. You are correct about his confidence, you will find that out in he next chapter. Cordy is great in this, I agree. I love how I've kept her personality constant. LOL Yes, Lorne was good in this too. I was going to write Lorne's character as Andrew, but I went with Lorne instead, I felt her filled those shoes better. I hope you enjoy the rest, thanks so much for reviewing, cal! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 09/11/2009 - 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 6
*sighs and flicks Buffy* Oh poor sweet William *wants to cuddle him* I don't know what you have planned, but what I'm hoping for is: Buffy's eyes being opened by this, that perhaps she'll see that William *does* have great qualities that she missed before because she had a certain 'type'. Maybe she'll do some maturing and expand her mind? But that's if William even wants to speak to her after getting his feelings hurt...
Cordy was great in this chapter, made me giggle heehee Her last line said it all lol
Can't wait to see what happens! *smoochies*
Author's Response: *flicks silly Buffy too* She wasn't thinking before speaking, and she will pay for it. I have something planned that will fix it, no worries. What you put is similar, but you will have to find out in the next chappie! =P I love Cordy in this chapter, very funny. I thought it wouldn't be Cordy without pointing out how silly Buffy was while trying to make her feel better lol. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for reviewing! *smooch*
[Report This]Date: 09/11/2009 - 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter. I really love this story. OK, this Buffy is not very nice. I felt so sad for William when Buffy was calling him a nerd and saying she didn't want to go out with him, thinking it was Spike and not knowing Spike and William are the same. That hurt Will so badly, cause Buffy just wants the Spike persona. Poor Will. I like Cordy here and her last line to Buffy, lol
If I was Will i'm not sure I'd wanna go out with this Buffy.
Hope you make it better in the next chappie.:)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I agree, Buffy wasn't very nice, but she was only saying those things to... heeee that will get told in the next chapter! She isn't really a bitch like she made herself out to me in this chapter, I promise. it did hurt Will badly, but hopefully Buffy can make it up to him, right? lol Cordy was good in this chapter, I loved the last line. I wasn't going to have it, but I think it wouldn't be Cordy without her pointing out how stupid Buffy is while trying to console her =P she is just forward like that lol. More coming soon! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 09/11/2009 - 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
I've just found this, and the concept intrigued me... I'm glad I decided to read becasue I LOVED it!!! And can Buffy be much more of a dimwit?? Well, good thing that, at least now we get to read another chapter! :D Poor William though, must be tough to know the girl he wants likes him for all the wrong reasons. So what if he's a nerd? Spike can be hot in any shape or form, I bet you agree! ,) You did a great job and I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Is there any way I can bribe you into updating super fast? :D
Author's Response: Awww! This review made me smile! You are awesome! I'm glad you like it! lol Yep, you get to read another chapter, and I think I'm pretty sure the next one will be that last, I guess it all depends where my writing takes me =P I agree, poor William is all sad because of what Buffy said. And oh yes, Spike is hot either way! I'm so glad you enjoyed, and I hope you like the rest as much! lol I promise to write and post as fast as I can! Thanks for reviewing! *hugs*
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